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author don't telle you drop this book. this is such a good sorry I wish for the next chapter.
of all the evil people I met in my life you are the worst.How could you leave us like this[img=disgusted]
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minable comme l'auteur LOL [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the writing of your story is fantastic especially since Leon has his own fortress bunker that will allow him to survive the second praimfaya if it will be part of your version. I am certainly hoping to see some new chapters soon to continue seeing how Leon will interact further with the 100 and eventually the grounders. Keep up the good work over all.
This genuinely just got worse and worse. The MC got more pathetic and pathetic, constantly letting the heroines walk all over him, and the heroines themselves constantly got more and more annoying, slowly turning into tsundere’s who hit the MC when he does something they don’t approve of. And what does he do about this abuse? He laughs it off like every other masochist, of course! This pathetic trash is the type of cuck garbage you see in novels with yuri.
The story is good. Don't get discouraged because of some bad reviews. People forget that we write fanfic because we love the original story and would like to be part of it even if just as a bystander. Mc Loves the cast so he wants to stay close to them their is nothing wrong with that. Infact that is a good enough reason for me, anyway I am reading the ff because I wanna know how he changes the story and if he is not close to the main cast how will he change them. Keep going don't drop.
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Mc furry [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Tiết lộ Spoiler All the fanfic in this series are disgusting. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I guess I'm out, until I get here, now he claims to have wanted to save the world and justifies himself for not having done anything by changing what is established, and what a convenience that the military friend dies naturally so he doesn't have to take him to his bunker paradise and thus you justify not taking it with you and not looking like a bad person, pathetic, ridiculous, his entire relationship with Stella is nonsense, blablablabla blablablabla blablablabla
It has a good start, but the mc develops all kinds of technologies too easily, even with the money and contacts he has it was too easy, the mc is as if he has technological superpowers, and all that fanaticism with the characters does not fit with the story , it seems that it is just a typical story of fans who build a harem with their favorite characters, that is not bad, but the author makes it too easy and without suspense.
The story is interesting and then it's ruined. We get a whole arc of MC building Huge Bunker/Robots/Etc and then he goes and joins the 100 cause he's a fanboy..... The Entire start of Fic was fkin irrelevant except for MC creating he's own Waifu that's it. The Fic would have been much better if MC was reborn on the Ark and was sent down with everyone else. He feels like those Cringy fanboys who want to gobble the main cast all over.
please dont drop and more chapter please ill drop some stone 4 gud luck journey to us all readers
dude i hope it has at least 30 or 40 chapters pd: i love it [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
I love this book so far please don't let Callie Cartwig get floated cuz I love Kelly Hu and I think the Mc would too 😉😏!!!!!!!
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Tiết lộ Spoiler author don't telle you drop this book. this is such a good sorry I wish for the next chapter.
of all the evil people I met in my life you are the worst.How could you leave us like this[img=disgusted]
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minable comme l'auteur LOL [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
the writing of your story is fantastic especially since Leon has his own fortress bunker that will allow him to survive the second praimfaya if it will be part of your version. I am certainly hoping to see some new chapters soon to continue seeing how Leon will interact further with the 100 and eventually the grounders. Keep up the good work over all.
This genuinely just got worse and worse. The MC got more pathetic and pathetic, constantly letting the heroines walk all over him, and the heroines themselves constantly got more and more annoying, slowly turning into tsundere’s who hit the MC when he does something they don’t approve of. And what does he do about this abuse? He laughs it off like every other masochist, of course! This pathetic trash is the type of cuck garbage you see in novels with yuri.
The story is good. Don't get discouraged because of some bad reviews. People forget that we write fanfic because we love the original story and would like to be part of it even if just as a bystander. Mc Loves the cast so he wants to stay close to them their is nothing wrong with that. Infact that is a good enough reason for me, anyway I am reading the ff because I wanna know how he changes the story and if he is not close to the main cast how will he change them. Keep going don't drop.
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Mc furry [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Tiết lộ Spoiler All the fanfic in this series are disgusting. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I guess I'm out, until I get here, now he claims to have wanted to save the world and justifies himself for not having done anything by changing what is established, and what a convenience that the military friend dies naturally so he doesn't have to take him to his bunker paradise and thus you justify not taking it with you and not looking like a bad person, pathetic, ridiculous, his entire relationship with Stella is nonsense, blablablabla blablablabla blablablabla
It has a good start, but the mc develops all kinds of technologies too easily, even with the money and contacts he has it was too easy, the mc is as if he has technological superpowers, and all that fanaticism with the characters does not fit with the story , it seems that it is just a typical story of fans who build a harem with their favorite characters, that is not bad, but the author makes it too easy and without suspense.
The story is interesting and then it's ruined. We get a whole arc of MC building Huge Bunker/Robots/Etc and then he goes and joins the 100 cause he's a fanboy..... The Entire start of Fic was fkin irrelevant except for MC creating he's own Waifu that's it. The Fic would have been much better if MC was reborn on the Ark and was sent down with everyone else. He feels like those Cringy fanboys who want to gobble the main cast all over.
please dont drop and more chapter please ill drop some stone 4 gud luck journey to us all readers
dude i hope it has at least 30 or 40 chapters pd: i love it [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
I love this book so far please don't let Callie Cartwig get floated cuz I love Kelly Hu and I think the Mc would too 😉😏!!!!!!!
I hope the next chapter comes out real soon