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Omg I love Bia and Kyles dynamic so much its so cutee 😭😭 I really like the pacing and how he gradually gets stronger 👍Its such a good read and Im excited to see S2 unfold 😎
Thoroughly enjoyable book, great character arc, progressive world building. Oh also a hidden bad guy waiting to pounce. Oh and just for kicks a dragon pops up.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
just amazing work, after reading so many novels from multiple authors I can say this one is one of the best
Honestly, maybe a little entertaining though the story feels extremely nonchalant. I feel like there's no emotion in most characters. Still kind of entertaining but after a couple of chapter I just felt that the nonchalancy made it pretty dry. Lots of similarities with Author's Pov (kind of). I will not say don't read it but I wouldn't reccomend it either.
I love you orange please keep up the updates, your smooth witted thinking when it comes to Kyle and his outlook on the world is really interesting and brightens my day everytime I read a sentence.
The book is really a good reading which I stumbled upon.....n the story plotline is good n keeps me intrigued to know what's gonna happen next .....also the variety of characters keep things interesting n fresh especially the friendship n other relationships that the MC has with others.....so overall a good read
it's a good story I like it very much thanks for posting it can't wait for the next 😀
Leaving this review for those that aren’t sure if they should continue after the locked charts. You should. While the mc is very lazy and unlikeable in the beginning of the book he starts getting more experiences that make him slowly get rid of his lazy attitude and reach for the top. A lot of books have their mc act very mature and smart from the beginning but this mc is not, he is your average 16 yr old boy who has advantages he doesn’t understand and rarely thinks about it drumming it down to dumb luck. He gets embarrassed like any other kid and he has to train hard like any other kid. All in all I find the character to be refreshing (even if I hated him in the beginning). For the author writing you can tell they are new to writing a story. Some things don’t make sense until you check the comments. For example the current ranks vs the talent they can reach. Then there are instances where something that is a low rank has an ability or a skill that would generally be used for higher ranks ex: and unbreakable shield but the individual is F rank so is the shield based off of their strength? Or should it have a different name and then bring in the unbreakable shield when their much stronger? Regardless if the shield can be broken then it’s not unbreakable it’s just a normal shield. I’m enjoying the current pacing it’s not too fast or too slow but just in the happy medium, I think these story has great potential and a good sense of humor to keep the reader involved in the story.
This novel is very entertaining and mc and other characters are good. I like the Story. If anyone wants to read this novel. They can give it a try without hesitation.
This was an enjoyable read and I'm glad the author decided to continue with it after taking a break. The character being lucky but not smart is a nice change from the genius and unlucky mcs. The writing and quality are good and what you would hope for from a web novel.
(CHAPTER 55) i personally am enjoying the novel quite a bit. it does have its problems and it’s not the best but i enjoy it and think other people would too. compared to peak web novels it’s not very good but compared to most webnovels id say it’s a 7.5/10 and better then most on here but i enjoy it a lot more then that. if there’s one thing i don’t like it’s the lack of depth and character descriptions but im not too bothered, jus looking out for new readers. it doesn’t have a lot of grammar mistakes at least compared to most novels on here but its not beautifully written. it’s pretty generic but good to past time. the mc is actually pretty unique i haven’t seen many lazy mcs that’s one of my favorite parts of the story. another thing is a lot of character dialogue just gets skipped over and summarized this isn’t a problem for me but ive seen many comments complaining about it. if you’re thinking about reading it i definitely would. i enjoy it a lot more than my rating suggests but i’m jus being honest.
Wow, I am really surprised. This novel is something unusual. I have followed 240 chapters so far, and I highly recommend it. It is a very beautiful story, but there are some things that I would not say are not good. Rather, they are simple. I will not talk about them. Just read it and you will be surprised by its splendor.
I have read 18 chapters so far. Honestly, do not take my review seriously because I am just beginning, but so far the novel is really unique because it has a unique story that distinguishes it from other stories. It is now very good. I recommend reading it.
Author-sama when new batch of chapters are coming after 280.waiting for new chapters................................... ................................................................. ......................................
the beginning is really bored 🥱,...............................,.................
Really likable MC, the humour in between is good. other characters are also good not just for extra word count. One of my favourite part is interaction between Kyle & Bia.Definately worth your time.
I started reading this on a whim and I didn't think that I would like it as much as I do now. This IA really wonderful story and I hope that many people read this and love it also.
I am still somewhat new to webnovels but this one has been my absolute favorite! The academy setting, budding romance, and adventure is captivating. Wish there were more books out there like this
I am following it,so please keep updating,and don't you drop it..................................................... ........................................................................................................ ....................................................
Orange why not writting or updating............... ............... ........................................ ............... ............... .......................................
Dude i love this story so much like sooo much plzzz drop chapters as fast as possible also i dont have money to buy this book plzzz if anyone can gift me this book i will be Very thankfull to him i want this book like crazy i can live without this book plzzzzzzzzzzz if the author can give me free access or anyone can gift me this plzzz
A very addicted story.it is slow paced at first however it's perfect after that The world building is just amazing
The novel is from another author who absolutely loves the Chinese writing style. If you want an MC that is absolutely pitiful for no real reason, read this. If you want every cliche known to exist in these types of novels, read this. If you want to trudge through enough grammar mistakes that make immersing yourself in the story impossible, read this. I'm convinced that these reviews are either fake, from family and friends, or the negative ones have been deleted.
A hidden gem I would say. The story progression is very smooth. Not too fast or not too slow. And also the foreshadowing is done very well in this story. I can very well see the author is not writing the novel as he wishes but he seems to have planned the plotline well. Even the characters are somewhat well written. It's especially good that the author avoided the cliches trope of arrogant young masters or princes or princess. I at least expected a bully but there was nothing like that as of now. I hope the author continues the story in the same manner. I don't want the author to insert any type of unwanted tragedy for MC to show some character development. As I've seen, not only the MC even side characters like Lara are also having some character growth in the story even though it's not written in a detailed manner.
before I start this novel I wanna ask chat is this. ovel great spoil me how it is whtver its poisonous or not
essa novel me prendeu totalmente. o enredo é muito bom e eu adoro personagens OP e que tenham linguagens misteriosas, gosto muito também do fato de que ele não é único "protagonista", tipo, outros personagens também tem um bom desenvolvimento e um pano de fundo.
Omg I love Bia and Kyles dynamic so much its so cutee 😭😭 I really like the pacing and how he gradually gets stronger 👍Its such a good read and Im excited to see S2 unfold 😎
Thoroughly enjoyable book, great character arc, progressive world building. Oh also a hidden bad guy waiting to pounce. Oh and just for kicks a dragon pops up.
Tiết lộ Spoiler just amazing work, after reading so many novels from multiple authors I can say this one is one of the best
Honestly, maybe a little entertaining though the story feels extremely nonchalant. I feel like there's no emotion in most characters. Still kind of entertaining but after a couple of chapter I just felt that the nonchalancy made it pretty dry. Lots of similarities with Author's Pov (kind of). I will not say don't read it but I wouldn't reccomend it either.
I love you orange please keep up the updates, your smooth witted thinking when it comes to Kyle and his outlook on the world is really interesting and brightens my day everytime I read a sentence.
The book is really a good reading which I stumbled upon.....n the story plotline is good n keeps me intrigued to know what's gonna happen next .....also the variety of characters keep things interesting n fresh especially the friendship n other relationships that the MC has with others.....so overall a good read
it's a good story I like it very much thanks for posting it can't wait for the next 😀
Leaving this review for those that aren’t sure if they should continue after the locked charts. You should. While the mc is very lazy and unlikeable in the beginning of the book he starts getting more experiences that make him slowly get rid of his lazy attitude and reach for the top. A lot of books have their mc act very mature and smart from the beginning but this mc is not, he is your average 16 yr old boy who has advantages he doesn’t understand and rarely thinks about it drumming it down to dumb luck. He gets embarrassed like any other kid and he has to train hard like any other kid. All in all I find the character to be refreshing (even if I hated him in the beginning). For the author writing you can tell they are new to writing a story. Some things don’t make sense until you check the comments. For example the current ranks vs the talent they can reach. Then there are instances where something that is a low rank has an ability or a skill that would generally be used for higher ranks ex: and unbreakable shield but the individual is F rank so is the shield based off of their strength? Or should it have a different name and then bring in the unbreakable shield when their much stronger? Regardless if the shield can be broken then it’s not unbreakable it’s just a normal shield. I’m enjoying the current pacing it’s not too fast or too slow but just in the happy medium, I think these story has great potential and a good sense of humor to keep the reader involved in the story.
This novel is very entertaining and mc and other characters are good. I like the Story. If anyone wants to read this novel. They can give it a try without hesitation.
This was an enjoyable read and I'm glad the author decided to continue with it after taking a break. The character being lucky but not smart is a nice change from the genius and unlucky mcs. The writing and quality are good and what you would hope for from a web novel.
(CHAPTER 55) i personally am enjoying the novel quite a bit. it does have its problems and it’s not the best but i enjoy it and think other people would too. compared to peak web novels it’s not very good but compared to most webnovels id say it’s a 7.5/10 and better then most on here but i enjoy it a lot more then that. if there’s one thing i don’t like it’s the lack of depth and character descriptions but im not too bothered, jus looking out for new readers. it doesn’t have a lot of grammar mistakes at least compared to most novels on here but its not beautifully written. it’s pretty generic but good to past time. the mc is actually pretty unique i haven’t seen many lazy mcs that’s one of my favorite parts of the story. another thing is a lot of character dialogue just gets skipped over and summarized this isn’t a problem for me but ive seen many comments complaining about it. if you’re thinking about reading it i definitely would. i enjoy it a lot more than my rating suggests but i’m jus being honest.
Wow, I am really surprised. This novel is something unusual. I have followed 240 chapters so far, and I highly recommend it. It is a very beautiful story, but there are some things that I would not say are not good. Rather, they are simple. I will not talk about them. Just read it and you will be surprised by its splendor.
I have read 18 chapters so far. Honestly, do not take my review seriously because I am just beginning, but so far the novel is really unique because it has a unique story that distinguishes it from other stories. It is now very good. I recommend reading it.
Author-sama when new batch of chapters are coming after 280.waiting for new chapters................................... ................................................................. ......................................
the beginning is really bored 🥱,...............................,.................
Really likable MC, the humour in between is good. other characters are also good not just for extra word count. One of my favourite part is interaction between Kyle & Bia.Definately worth your time.
I started reading this on a whim and I didn't think that I would like it as much as I do now. This IA really wonderful story and I hope that many people read this and love it also.
I am still somewhat new to webnovels but this one has been my absolute favorite! The academy setting, budding romance, and adventure is captivating. Wish there were more books out there like this
I am following it,so please keep updating,and don't you drop it..................................................... ........................................................................................................ ....................................................
Orange why not writting or updating............... ............... ........................................ ............... ............... .......................................
Dude i love this story so much like sooo much plzzz drop chapters as fast as possible also i dont have money to buy this book plzzz if anyone can gift me this book i will be Very thankfull to him i want this book like crazy i can live without this book plzzzzzzzzzzz if the author can give me free access or anyone can gift me this plzzz
A very addicted story.it is slow paced at first however it's perfect after that The world building is just amazing
The novel is from another author who absolutely loves the Chinese writing style. If you want an MC that is absolutely pitiful for no real reason, read this. If you want every cliche known to exist in these types of novels, read this. If you want to trudge through enough grammar mistakes that make immersing yourself in the story impossible, read this. I'm convinced that these reviews are either fake, from family and friends, or the negative ones have been deleted.
A hidden gem I would say. The story progression is very smooth. Not too fast or not too slow. And also the foreshadowing is done very well in this story. I can very well see the author is not writing the novel as he wishes but he seems to have planned the plotline well. Even the characters are somewhat well written. It's especially good that the author avoided the cliches trope of arrogant young masters or princes or princess. I at least expected a bully but there was nothing like that as of now. I hope the author continues the story in the same manner. I don't want the author to insert any type of unwanted tragedy for MC to show some character development. As I've seen, not only the MC even side characters like Lara are also having some character growth in the story even though it's not written in a detailed manner.
before I start this novel I wanna ask chat is this. ovel great spoil me how it is whtver its poisonous or not
essa novel me prendeu totalmente. o enredo é muito bom e eu adoro personagens OP e que tenham linguagens misteriosas, gosto muito também do fato de que ele não é único "protagonista", tipo, outros personagens também tem um bom desenvolvimento e um pano de fundo.