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Thanks for this amazing novel but I want read more please. If by any chance see this post please complete this novel.! Please !
This story is too cliché.writing quality was good but than the mc is a loser who blames other young masters for just being born in good conditions..and then suddenly gets overpowered and then usual drama.
I really like this book and the mc's character of his ruthless even the way he handled his dead teacher not with complete trust but respect or the way he treats his girl xiao( especially him not being submissive just because she is a girl). And his goal to reach the pinnacle just love it we need more. Thank you
"The definition of mediocre and cliched, the story is boring and simple with nothing unique or special about it. The main character is supposedly smart but never shows it. The enemies are all brainless young masters. the world building is nonexistent." as someone else stated. I completely agree with them
okay so first of all i like the concept and i have to say story progression is also quite fast not too slow paced another thing that I'll say I didn't really like was that part about massacre of the shan family I mean sure your father and you were discarded but i highly doubt that the entire family was responsible I mean killing and entire family just for the mistakes of a few just doesn't sit right with mei have just reached the massacre part let's see what author has in store for us
This is the best cultivation novel I have read so far, the Mc is smart and the background characters are not stupid like the other novels like i know. The chapters release are fast and I would recommend others to try reading
I decided to read the first chapter before anything and it's pretty bad, nothing interesting or special, it's your most cliche start possible so I thought I'd read the description, maybe it's not as bad as I thought it will be...well, it's worse. Mc gets hit with some crazy a** lightning that will give him superpowers.
Well the story is fine but for God's sake edit ur chapters and change that 'sanskrit' word with 'scripture' or something.My eyes and brain can't take the torture
maaan imma need more from u brotha, locked on chapter 45 and by god the devil is whispering in my ear to spend money on this app just to unlock more chapters. keep up the good work man 🫵 da 🐐 no 🧢
can i read the story for free somewhere else ..............................................................................................................
The definition of mediocre and cliched, the story is boring and simple with nothing unique or special about it. The main character is supposedly smart but never shows it. The enemies are all brainless young masters. the world building is nonexistent.
I decided to read this from all the positive reviews but im incredibly disappointed. This novel is your ,average full of cliches, copy of all the novels that came before. Extremely unoriginal.
This story is great and good in everything from the writing to story. But I had already caught up with the latest chapters as chapters are too few for me. So I am looking for new novel to read but couldn’t find a good one although I have one in mind but it just started and has less chapters too but still got great potential based on releases chapter till now. Wanna check that book out. Ok I will tell the name but like my review if you find that book is good. Great here you go. Name Holographic Conjuring System This book got only 2 chapters at least for now. Check it out and don’t forget to like my review.
This is a novel worth reading, and I personally am the kind who don't like romance but this novel. It puts romance nicely and in a limit, and the limit and pace is so good that you never even think their was romance even once in the novel yet their is. I had literally read the whole novel in about 10 hours. This is probably the second or third book that I had had an interest in do much.... Go read it...
I highly recommend this book to anyone if you're into smart ruthless evil antihero MCs who know how to be patient.
This is very good. I read hundreds, if not thousand of novels and can't get excited about them easily anymore. This one was different. It is one of the novels that will light a spark in you. If the author keeps this up, the novel will become the next cultivation novel classic.
NEED MORE OF THIS KIND OF VILLAIN NOVELS ,THIS NOT THOSE NOVELS IN WHICH MC JUST KILLS PROTAG AND ALWAYS SIMPS FOR heroies . MC IS TRULY EVIL AND WORTHY OF CALLING A VILLAIN
finally an evil mc with single female lead.......................................................................................................................
Your book is really amazing, I enjoy it a lot. I'm a big fan of villain MCS especially real villain MCS with a brain and reason. One of my favorite books is warlock of the magus world and revenant insanity and this mc has the potential to be another. Keep up the good work author, I really love this book dont give it up.
Brabo de mais, não tem jeito ...............................................................................................................................
This is the novel I was looking for omg author I hope u don't abandon the novel and I will help you with everything I have
I was impressed with this book, I really enjoyed the story. I hope the author keeps up the great work. [good good good good good good good good good]
Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel. Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel. The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei. In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read. These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember. Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing. The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel. If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears. Thanks for reading this comment.
Thanks for this amazing novel but I want read more please. If by any chance see this post please complete this novel.! Please !
This story is too cliché.writing quality was good but than the mc is a loser who blames other young masters for just being born in good conditions..and then suddenly gets overpowered and then usual drama.
I really like this book and the mc's character of his ruthless even the way he handled his dead teacher not with complete trust but respect or the way he treats his girl xiao( especially him not being submissive just because she is a girl). And his goal to reach the pinnacle just love it we need more. Thank you
"The definition of mediocre and cliched, the story is boring and simple with nothing unique or special about it. The main character is supposedly smart but never shows it. The enemies are all brainless young masters. the world building is nonexistent." as someone else stated. I completely agree with them
okay so first of all i like the concept and i have to say story progression is also quite fast not too slow paced another thing that I'll say I didn't really like was that part about massacre of the shan family I mean sure your father and you were discarded but i highly doubt that the entire family was responsible I mean killing and entire family just for the mistakes of a few just doesn't sit right with mei have just reached the massacre part let's see what author has in store for us
This is the best cultivation novel I have read so far, the Mc is smart and the background characters are not stupid like the other novels like i know. The chapters release are fast and I would recommend others to try reading
I decided to read the first chapter before anything and it's pretty bad, nothing interesting or special, it's your most cliche start possible so I thought I'd read the description, maybe it's not as bad as I thought it will be...well, it's worse. Mc gets hit with some crazy a** lightning that will give him superpowers.
Well the story is fine but for God's sake edit ur chapters and change that 'sanskrit' word with 'scripture' or something.My eyes and brain can't take the torture
maaan imma need more from u brotha, locked on chapter 45 and by god the devil is whispering in my ear to spend money on this app just to unlock more chapters. keep up the good work man 🫵 da 🐐 no 🧢
can i read the story for free somewhere else ..............................................................................................................
The definition of mediocre and cliched, the story is boring and simple with nothing unique or special about it. The main character is supposedly smart but never shows it. The enemies are all brainless young masters. the world building is nonexistent.
I decided to read this from all the positive reviews but im incredibly disappointed. This novel is your ,average full of cliches, copy of all the novels that came before. Extremely unoriginal.
This story is great and good in everything from the writing to story. But I had already caught up with the latest chapters as chapters are too few for me. So I am looking for new novel to read but couldn’t find a good one although I have one in mind but it just started and has less chapters too but still got great potential based on releases chapter till now. Wanna check that book out. Ok I will tell the name but like my review if you find that book is good. Great here you go. Name Holographic Conjuring System This book got only 2 chapters at least for now. Check it out and don’t forget to like my review.
This is a novel worth reading, and I personally am the kind who don't like romance but this novel. It puts romance nicely and in a limit, and the limit and pace is so good that you never even think their was romance even once in the novel yet their is. I had literally read the whole novel in about 10 hours. This is probably the second or third book that I had had an interest in do much.... Go read it...
I highly recommend this book to anyone if you're into smart ruthless evil antihero MCs who know how to be patient.
This is very good. I read hundreds, if not thousand of novels and can't get excited about them easily anymore. This one was different. It is one of the novels that will light a spark in you. If the author keeps this up, the novel will become the next cultivation novel classic.
NEED MORE OF THIS KIND OF VILLAIN NOVELS ,THIS NOT THOSE NOVELS IN WHICH MC JUST KILLS PROTAG AND ALWAYS SIMPS FOR heroies . MC IS TRULY EVIL AND WORTHY OF CALLING A VILLAIN
finally an evil mc with single female lead.......................................................................................................................
Your book is really amazing, I enjoy it a lot. I'm a big fan of villain MCS especially real villain MCS with a brain and reason. One of my favorite books is warlock of the magus world and revenant insanity and this mc has the potential to be another. Keep up the good work author, I really love this book dont give it up.
Brabo de mais, não tem jeito ...............................................................................................................................
This is the novel I was looking for omg author I hope u don't abandon the novel and I will help you with everything I have
I was impressed with this book, I really enjoyed the story. I hope the author keeps up the great work. [good good good good good good good good good]
Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel. Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel. The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei. In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read. These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember. Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing. The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel. If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears. Thanks for reading this comment.