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simply saw the manifesto and thank you finally a sane person would mention what you have
Gotta say, even though it seems like it, I really hope that the novel hasn't been dropped. Best of luck to you in either case anyways though.
This is a GEM I tell you! Would highly recommend to all readers, most especially to Kingdom-Building genre lovers like me. The story focuses deeply on its world settings, history, people and the growth of a civilization im becoming an 'Ideal Paradise'. Religiously driven but with all the good and right reasons. There is still hope in humanity.
very good novel I must say, I just want a author who finishes his novel not leave it unfinished so I request yoy pls continue your novel don't throw it away
Great to see a new kingdom building novel! Great writing quality, I haven’t see any mistakes, everything clear and easy to read. Well, 4 chapter per week isn’t bad but for me it’s a bit short, since most authors trying to keep up with 1 chapter per day. So far everything goes smooth for MC, and right now it feels that by the moment he takes the throne he is going to be few hundreds years ahead of every other nation. I know that this novel have #overpowered but it won’t be all smooth sailing for MC, and it won’t be too easy for him to conquer everything. Well, I can’t really judge the story after 11 chapters so let’s wait and see. Also it kinda reminds of “Santairiku Eiyuuki” but with a righteous MC. Author have a world similar to Earth, and I think it’s a great choice. It helps with understanding of the kind of nations/cultures/places author writes about. Also since it’s a War&Military novel it will be much easier to understand army movements and so on. I believe that if author can make auxiliary chapter for: character images and their base info, kingdoms/tribes with their base info and a map. I think that this things could make readers more familiar with the world/kingdoms/places/characters of your novel and increase overall experience.
simply saw the manifesto and thank you finally a sane person would mention what you have
Gotta say, even though it seems like it, I really hope that the novel hasn't been dropped. Best of luck to you in either case anyways though.
This is a GEM I tell you! Would highly recommend to all readers, most especially to Kingdom-Building genre lovers like me. The story focuses deeply on its world settings, history, people and the growth of a civilization im becoming an 'Ideal Paradise'. Religiously driven but with all the good and right reasons. There is still hope in humanity.
very good novel I must say, I just want a author who finishes his novel not leave it unfinished so I request yoy pls continue your novel don't throw it away
Great to see a new kingdom building novel! Great writing quality, I haven’t see any mistakes, everything clear and easy to read. Well, 4 chapter per week isn’t bad but for me it’s a bit short, since most authors trying to keep up with 1 chapter per day. So far everything goes smooth for MC, and right now it feels that by the moment he takes the throne he is going to be few hundreds years ahead of every other nation. I know that this novel have #overpowered but it won’t be all smooth sailing for MC, and it won’t be too easy for him to conquer everything. Well, I can’t really judge the story after 11 chapters so let’s wait and see. Also it kinda reminds of “Santairiku Eiyuuki” but with a righteous MC. Author have a world similar to Earth, and I think it’s a great choice. It helps with understanding of the kind of nations/cultures/places author writes about. Also since it’s a War&Military novel it will be much easier to understand army movements and so on. I believe that if author can make auxiliary chapter for: character images and their base info, kingdoms/tribes with their base info and a map. I think that this things could make readers more familiar with the world/kingdoms/places/characters of your novel and increase overall experience.