Naruto: The Mechanical Sage

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Cat_Tip

I recommend you put a picture because most people won’t bother with anything without a picture for the profile of the book and I would hate for anyone to miss this masterpiece.

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RayPrime

Good start and interesting perks, just one request though, don't make him rack his brains to try to stop obito turning to the dark side and trying to save those that would be killed. He isnt compelled to do anything just because he is aware of certain things, if he has enough power then sure. Most fics do that and it is very irritating. Focus more on the character development

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vaatu

great book (chapte46 while writing review)idk why I didn't find it till now,binge read it in one night.great pacing not tooo fast and not too slow just the way I like it. It's concept is also good.just one problem that mc is not being cautious of danzo but I guess he doesn't have to if he become a too strong.

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luxiem

Quite the enjoyable fanfiction, I like the path the main character took to get stronger.

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AinzO0alGown

I was disappointed where is the Boruto level tech I expected

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Left_Nut_Of_Madara

Its ok but a few things seemed pointless for later in the fic so just keep in mind that if you try it.[img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins]

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GreaterSage

I think that the story had potential but the Author care to much on what others thought instead of writing for themselves also I thinks the character development while great was to rushed and that their should have been mentioned more technological detail and descorverery

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Josh_5209

This was hands down the best fanfic ive read on webnovel in 2 years. Its a pitty it had to end like this. Please dont loose your spark auther-sama. I love fanfics that put a realistic skill in them

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BouncyKnight

First time writing a review I think. Great book more people should read I think. Thank you for writing such a book!! Quite different take on the naruto world than other fan fictions and a good one at that! Look forward to your other books in the future! Thank you!

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Dage335

It’s was good the story could have been longer I think but it’s a good place to end

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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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GolgoStar

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mamun_220

Pretty good. The technology has not yet been used in combat, but it is well written how it helps in the study of chakra. It's a bit of a stretch that he was able to recreate the kkekei genkai so quickly, but I can accept that. It is also nice that the author does not just give a lot of abilities to the heroes and pretends that no one else can use them except him.

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Llioh

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mikedanger

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I have read the greatest novel on webnovel.

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cooper_lehnert

one of the better ones I've read of Naruto please update faster 🙏🙏🙏🙏