A look of surprise crossed Orion's face before he nodded in understanding.
"Let's get going then," Orion said, rising into the sky.
To her surprise, Evaline felt a gentle wind wrap around her body, lifting her off the ground as she soared high into the sky, following behind Orion.
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Orion and Evaline arrived swiftly at the Midnight Butcher Bar within twenty-five minutes. As they landed, they observed the stunned individuals within their homes, who soon began to cheer one by one.
Orion smiled brightly under his mask as the cheers grew louder, with others outside joining in. He raised his hand as though signalling them to calm down, and it worked. The crowd quieted, and the inhabitants returned to their day one by one, though a few remained, continuing to observe.
With Orion's personality, familiarity with the place he grew up in, and relationships, I believe that I handled his character in this scene well and showcased Evaline's character while drastically improving their relationship to what could have taken tens of chapters.
It took me a few good naps to put this down because I didn't want to follow the typical master-slave route. If you've read this far, you'll notice I don't follow any typical route.
Nonetheless, what I say doesn't matter, as the readers have the final say on the outcome.
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