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Really good start, keep at it stumbling! So far so good. The author definitely did not ask for the review. Hehe. Seriously though, give it a read.
We crossed the 100 chaps mark, so let's do some Q&A. Ask me anything. I MEAN ANYTHING. My life or what might happen with this book and what future stuff I might do. Also, I won't give spoilers for this book
gotta change my review after reading chapter 17 and so on this story is actually good keep going author
please be more positive, his life is too tragic before and after. this story is too dark for me
I am moving this book to the do not read folder I find the character is just too violent choosing kill over other options. the main character is no better than the family that he belongs to they are all jerks. the only good character in the story is Jasmine.
good story, worth the read, there's no ntr as all that's happened is the gf cheating and fooling him and him realising he was played and lost a lot of money... the second harem member is someone he ensured would stay dependent and devoted to himself so the endgoal was reached, be she a virgin or not.
NOT RECOMMENDED .. MC takes a "Prostitute" who has slept with multiple men to satisfy her hunger as 2nd Harem member & this same MC was saying "not just anyone can become his Harem member" yet he goes and does this.
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Somewhat disliked the second harem member, because because she had played with other men besides her husband before meeting the MC, a bit stupid in my opinion the MC put her in the Harem System with women who easily cheated
So this story has basically everything one can get in cliche. A cliche ntr'd Mc A weak to Op Mc Easy to get Harem Members A lot of common troupes. And my final review? It's good, I mean freaking good if you just ignore the writing quality which is a bit bad, but well I have read thousands of novels, cliche, or whatnot and I have enough common sense to tell if a story with cliches is good or bad. Mc isn't a beta JP or CP and becomes fairly smart and cunning after receiving one blow after another quite early, he gets women using his cunningness despite it having some cliche elements the end result is quite satisfactory. What are the good points of this novel? 1) Good No, of Chapters. 2) Stable updates(I am not sure about this, I mean Author is giving regular chapters but it can change anytime considering he is going in university) 3) Good World Building( World Building is satisfactory at least till I have read, only things necessary to the current story are explained which are simple and easy to remember, it also gives Author huge flexibility when he will expand the world-building later on) 4) Good Characters( Mc of the novel is a guy with flaws, but they aren't the flaws one would normally dislike at least during the later chapters, I mean he is using his cunningness and dominating all the women he wants to, no simply act or something, seriously I would have given a 1-star review if Mc was like that, those type of Mc's are super annoying following females like dogs, but yes his flaws are not something that will make you dislike him, he has a quite likable personality as well leaning more towards a smart villain than an honest good guy, but yup he isn't a straight up villain either. And yeah other female characters have been fleshed out well as well, I mean it's not something excellent but at least you can't just dislike them for lack of any character.) Now, what is bad about this Novel? 1) A lot of cliches are used though they aren't bad at all, I mean Author is new and he thankfully managed to put off these cliches quite well. 2)Writing Quality is not excellent but quite good. 3)Mc has flaws, some major ones which get 100% better as the story goes on but doesn't changes the fact some of his flaws might be disliked by some of the readers(Don't worry no simpy or beta Mc) My Final Review? 4.6 stars which will definitely be shown as mere 4 stars
I love this novel. The development of the story is interesting, I also like how the protagonist handles the situations
The stories pace is fairly fast too so it's a decent quick read. But do expect some grammar errors. And if you like MCs that think ahead there's one right here.
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I'm absolutely addicted to this ongoing WebNovel! The author's writing is so descriptive that I feel like I'm right there in the story with the characters. The world-building is so well-crafted and the characters are so relatable that I'm emotionally invested in their journeys. I can't wait to see how this story ends and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves an ongoing read!
This is an easy read. I see a lot of people liking this book. The MC starts of dumb, but his life gets better and I don’t know many people that don’t like this kind of character arch. Add the book to your library, the grammar is decent and the writing flows quiet well. Like I said, easy read 😊
Uhhh... This is awkward. Can't believe I have to give my trashy story five stars. Anyway...Nice to meet you all. You already know my pen name, you all can just call me Stumble. So, what should I say...? Umm.. Have you guys eaten and how are your days going? Also.. forget it. You see I am writing this type of story for the first time. I know I might have and will make mistakes. But please forgive me for that. I hope you read this book fully and make a choice by reading just the first few chaps. So...uhhh..Have a nice day and I hope my story will speak for itself. I know, I will be wasting time. But, pls read this trashy story of mine.
Keep it up author! This novel will soom rise to the top! This novel is one of the best out there and a hidden gem! It was so good and amazing! Don't drop or it would be a shame. Top 25 here we go!
I'm not a huge fan of harem books but this one is really nice. I like the first chapter and couldn't stop laughing at how dumb the mc is. Good job [img=recommend]
Gave it a read cause a friend told me to. I was not disappointed I promise you won't either.
Isekai. A dumb protagonist, who hopefully will wise up. A system of cultivation in place. Overall, this makes for a slow burn in terms of pacing, but I expect the developments, character-wise and plot-wise, to become better and better.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong to 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! (and don't listen to what Ctrlkris says!)
Read some few chapters and even though it's not perfect, it simply doesn't deserve all the criticism it's getting. The book is still ongoing, and it's just absurd to judge character development without seeing the end of the book. The ccharacter development might be slow, but in general it's a good read.
Really good start, keep at it stumbling! So far so good. The author definitely did not ask for the review. Hehe. Seriously though, give it a read.
We crossed the 100 chaps mark, so let's do some Q&A. Ask me anything. I MEAN ANYTHING. My life or what might happen with this book and what future stuff I might do. Also, I won't give spoilers for this book
gotta change my review after reading chapter 17 and so on this story is actually good keep going author
please be more positive, his life is too tragic before and after. this story is too dark for me
I am moving this book to the do not read folder I find the character is just too violent choosing kill over other options. the main character is no better than the family that he belongs to they are all jerks. the only good character in the story is Jasmine.
good story, worth the read, there's no ntr as all that's happened is the gf cheating and fooling him and him realising he was played and lost a lot of money... the second harem member is someone he ensured would stay dependent and devoted to himself so the endgoal was reached, be she a virgin or not.
NOT RECOMMENDED .. MC takes a "Prostitute" who has slept with multiple men to satisfy her hunger as 2nd Harem member & this same MC was saying "not just anyone can become his Harem member" yet he goes and does this.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Somewhat disliked the second harem member, because because she had played with other men besides her husband before meeting the MC, a bit stupid in my opinion the MC put her in the Harem System with women who easily cheated
So this story has basically everything one can get in cliche. A cliche ntr'd Mc A weak to Op Mc Easy to get Harem Members A lot of common troupes. And my final review? It's good, I mean freaking good if you just ignore the writing quality which is a bit bad, but well I have read thousands of novels, cliche, or whatnot and I have enough common sense to tell if a story with cliches is good or bad. Mc isn't a beta JP or CP and becomes fairly smart and cunning after receiving one blow after another quite early, he gets women using his cunningness despite it having some cliche elements the end result is quite satisfactory. What are the good points of this novel? 1) Good No, of Chapters. 2) Stable updates(I am not sure about this, I mean Author is giving regular chapters but it can change anytime considering he is going in university) 3) Good World Building( World Building is satisfactory at least till I have read, only things necessary to the current story are explained which are simple and easy to remember, it also gives Author huge flexibility when he will expand the world-building later on) 4) Good Characters( Mc of the novel is a guy with flaws, but they aren't the flaws one would normally dislike at least during the later chapters, I mean he is using his cunningness and dominating all the women he wants to, no simply act or something, seriously I would have given a 1-star review if Mc was like that, those type of Mc's are super annoying following females like dogs, but yes his flaws are not something that will make you dislike him, he has a quite likable personality as well leaning more towards a smart villain than an honest good guy, but yup he isn't a straight up villain either. And yeah other female characters have been fleshed out well as well, I mean it's not something excellent but at least you can't just dislike them for lack of any character.) Now, what is bad about this Novel? 1) A lot of cliches are used though they aren't bad at all, I mean Author is new and he thankfully managed to put off these cliches quite well. 2)Writing Quality is not excellent but quite good. 3)Mc has flaws, some major ones which get 100% better as the story goes on but doesn't changes the fact some of his flaws might be disliked by some of the readers(Don't worry no simpy or beta Mc) My Final Review? 4.6 stars which will definitely be shown as mere 4 stars
I love this novel. The development of the story is interesting, I also like how the protagonist handles the situations
The stories pace is fairly fast too so it's a decent quick read. But do expect some grammar errors. And if you like MCs that think ahead there's one right here.
For the Title > 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 For the Cover > 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 For the Synopsis > 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 For the Tags > 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 For the Author (My fellow of culture) > 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I'm absolutely addicted to this ongoing WebNovel! The author's writing is so descriptive that I feel like I'm right there in the story with the characters. The world-building is so well-crafted and the characters are so relatable that I'm emotionally invested in their journeys. I can't wait to see how this story ends and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves an ongoing read!
This is an easy read. I see a lot of people liking this book. The MC starts of dumb, but his life gets better and I don’t know many people that don’t like this kind of character arch. Add the book to your library, the grammar is decent and the writing flows quiet well. Like I said, easy read 😊
Uhhh... This is awkward. Can't believe I have to give my trashy story five stars. Anyway...Nice to meet you all. You already know my pen name, you all can just call me Stumble. So, what should I say...? Umm.. Have you guys eaten and how are your days going? Also.. forget it. You see I am writing this type of story for the first time. I know I might have and will make mistakes. But please forgive me for that. I hope you read this book fully and make a choice by reading just the first few chaps. So...uhhh..Have a nice day and I hope my story will speak for itself. I know, I will be wasting time. But, pls read this trashy story of mine.
Keep it up author! This novel will soom rise to the top! This novel is one of the best out there and a hidden gem! It was so good and amazing! Don't drop or it would be a shame. Top 25 here we go!
I'm not a huge fan of harem books but this one is really nice. I like the first chapter and couldn't stop laughing at how dumb the mc is. Good job [img=recommend]
Gave it a read cause a friend told me to. I was not disappointed I promise you won't either.
Isekai. A dumb protagonist, who hopefully will wise up. A system of cultivation in place. Overall, this makes for a slow burn in terms of pacing, but I expect the developments, character-wise and plot-wise, to become better and better.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong to 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! (and don't listen to what Ctrlkris says!)
Read some few chapters and even though it's not perfect, it simply doesn't deserve all the criticism it's getting. The book is still ongoing, and it's just absurd to judge character development without seeing the end of the book. The ccharacter development might be slow, but in general it's a good read.