Pokemon: Aichi Sendou

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LuciasAzrael

might as well make a vanguard novel lol who's next ren

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Alpha_Idiot

After chapter three I feel the need to change my metaphoric 5 star review in an actual 5 star review because our MC has an Aegishlash or better an Honedge as an starter. So please my friends let us all enjoy this anomaly of an pokemon fanfic together [img=recommend]. Other than that is the Writing Quality good without any for me cognizant flaws. For Story Development is the start generic and its the pokemon world so what could I say to Background. Updades come like a river so everything is till now a way above average fanfiction with the potential to become something more...

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BrazillianFox

The story is rushed, barely describing its surroundings or characters (the MC and his family aren't even described their hair color or appearance in the slightest),he keeps complaining about training his pokemons well... which is a lie because the author just skips everything and makes him get a Slowbro and simply says a sentence "It's been X months/years and Pokemon X got strong", he simply hides his psychic powers from everyone, even his parents, and figures out how to train himself, even though his family is rich. Being quite honest, if you just want a fanfic to pass the time because you have nothing to read, it's worth reading this one,but if you are bothered by an insipid world and a bad development of the story, I recommend looking for another fic.

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Hey_Bro_is_Crazy

Sua obra de Naruto é boa, não tem motivo para está não ser. Cynthia supremacy __________________________________________ __________________________________________

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Zaelum

Pretty good so far, just make sure to take your time and make it slightly more like a 'slice of life' and not rush to much. Also I like Harems! Here a present for you!

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Cabrera4

The person Aichi didn’t think he would be calling dad anytime soon.

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John_Keen

loving ❤️ it so far man keep up the good work

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Hozy

I really liked this story so far! I wonder how Dawn will be portrayed when she appears in this story. Will it be based entirely on the anime or will it have some elements from the games? Anyway, good story! Excited for the next chapters. -------------------------------------------------

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Roxysmo_Forever

I like how things are playing out so far, if you're going to Mega Evolve Aichi, it's mandatory to also Mega Evolve his relevant Sinnoh rivals and the Ultimate Gym Leader, otherwise there would be a massive power difference.

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HollowedCrown

Great so far! I highly recommend the fic to anyone who's looking for a good read! Also brought me back into the pokemon franchise and inspired me to write my own fic.

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Diego_Camano

it is a great book but. man keeps trolling me with a new chapter that is just an update about how he can't update or how hard school is

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BSoumo

I like your story . . . . . . . . . . . and dawn supremacy

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md_rizvi

Congratulation! on reaching 1 million👏👏👏👏

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OkayVelvet

Dawn Supremacy!!! 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

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Hymaster986

Nice story so far. Like Aichi Sendou from Cardfight Vanguard as the MC of this story. Keep it up 👍👍. Don't drop this story please.

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DetachedDreamer

Its a good story, great pokemon choice, nice unique origin. I love how the story is progressing as well. doing more than just training like creating apps and helping advance the world as definitely a plus too. Only negative for me is the humor. this is just my opinion, what makes us laugh is subjective but I havent laughed once, the jokes, mostly made by the talking pokemon fall flat and only ends up breaking the immersion I love when reading fanfics. and the fact that some random dude is his pokemon is weird, could of just left that out even if its part of canon lore. Other than that there is nothing I can say wrong about the story. definitely should give it a read if you haven't.

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malinizgeldii

basically the story of a trainer who is not a child and can talk to psychic pokemon. i read it but it's still the same pokemon as pokemon still can't get above "cockfight". dçv first, then be friends. how silly.

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