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Viết đánh giáI really like it so far, with how you set up the character. This will change the dance by a huge margin. I can't wait for what to come! My only criticism is the structure of the story. So far I really like it!
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I really like it so far, with how you set up the character. This will change the dance by a huge margin. I can't wait for what to come! My only criticism is the structure of the story. So far I really like it!
I recommend you to use grammarly since you mentioned your lack of proficiency in English. It's free to download, and will point out any mistakes you have made, subconsciously preventing you from making the same mistake. Good luck!🍀
This is a well writen story i really like it i hope the they uploard few more chaptar soon