Overlord of biblical proportions

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DaoistKQC0Kd

Quite a controversial work, well written, but the plot moves at the speed of a manhole cover. For a large amount of written text, almost nothing happened, many things do not need to be described in such detail, since this really kills all the dynamics, which already do not exist. Also, too much time is spent on secondary things, and not enough on the main ones.

LV 4

jamwerewolf

I am so bored reading this that I just skip most text since there is a lot of boring over-the-top text I tried to read but after one chapter I get bored like nothing would happen for the chapter. There is just so much text and Ainz is so inactive he does nothing in over 20 chapters he does some things but they are small and only for some of the chapter and my god does he barely talk to the devils at all he is so scared that he is like I have no info I should lay low and so he does nothing we get more pov from side characters then we do ainz like in overlord he would do a test to see how strong everyone is in the world yet here he does nothing but play student while trying to learn about how strong everyone is yet when he gets the fallen as minions he does not ask them anything if he just talks to them for a minute about the magic he would know that they had a different magic system he is so dumb and slow to act and repetitive that he does nothing

LV 3

IamGai

I NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

Skill_Top

good story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔝👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 4

Demon_Samurai

So far this is really good, it fleshes out the characters well and does feal like I’m reading Overlord! Keep it up and take your time!

LV 4

HereForGoodRead

Really got the meme down pat very good writer.

LV 2

Roterro_Done

I only finished reading the prologue, but that was enough for me to get strong emotions from this work. Respect to the author![img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

LV 4

edan_wong16

this fanfic so good and need more chapter

LV 14

AinzO0alGown

This fic is God's gift to za warudo.....

LV 4

Agam_Batth_4638

it's a good story you should read it as it's very good in everything

LV 4

Donkong

very good indeed... if you like ainz playing 4d chess against himself and the big personalities of DxD this is for you.

LV 4

BOB_THE_BREAKER

You are doing absolutely fabulous work. Keep it up. Just change the beginning of your sypnosis and start by telling the word count, because if someone hasn't opened the chapter they will feel like you write small and inconsistent chapter. But if you mention word count, your views will increase. Just like winds of change. PeaceFan of your work.

LV 4

DaoOfCookies

Great story, please don't drop this. I need more of this. (random gif i found)