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a really good novel with an interesting world and MC. the only gripe I have is that it went from being a shop type novel to more of a kingdom building one. I love both themes but at the moment it doesnt excell at either.
I don't know how this story still isn't popular, probably tags? This is a great story with great characters and intriguing plot and mystery. However I do have some problems like the story is trying to do too much, like kingdom building, system, shop, it's hard to remember a lot of details. And it's so slow, not the plot itself, I mean the development of his shop itself, with all the advantages it has. But like I said, I loved the story, I'd probably stack up a lot of chapters since I want him to reunite with his family and grow it.
I like it very much. the story has a certain charm which attract it's readers to keep reading. also the mysterious element of abyss increases that charm. please don't drop it I like it very much.but can you please increase the release rate to atleast 2 chap per day
a really good novel with an interesting world and MC. the only gripe I have is that it went from being a shop type novel to more of a kingdom building one. I love both themes but at the moment it doesnt excell at either.
I don't know how this story still isn't popular, probably tags? This is a great story with great characters and intriguing plot and mystery. However I do have some problems like the story is trying to do too much, like kingdom building, system, shop, it's hard to remember a lot of details. And it's so slow, not the plot itself, I mean the development of his shop itself, with all the advantages it has. But like I said, I loved the story, I'd probably stack up a lot of chapters since I want him to reunite with his family and grow it.
I like it very much. the story has a certain charm which attract it's readers to keep reading. also the mysterious element of abyss increases that charm. please don't drop it I like it very much.but can you please increase the release rate to atleast 2 chap per day
Semangat kak, ceritanya bagus dan menarik