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cool story for me and you you can take care either way you can get married or something else
As a Fellow Author from Indonesia, I sent you my Fullest Support 😆🇮🇩🍻 All Five Stars for You😆⭐🌟🌠🌟⭐🤩
Like to book for a while then I started feeling like the MC Just uses the feelings of the women around him and never even try’s to pay it back. It’s a fine story though and the writings good.
The story is chill but MC is not very likeable....Also the interactions with the girls are cringe. I mean the story writing feels childish and lacking depth overall. The overall concept is great and if it was written better it would be a solid story.
Don’t waste your time reading this. It starts off really good and then just plummets… It ends so fast that you know it ended but you are still so confused.
MC has god complex, thinking and acting as if he's the most superior and all of humanity is like his pet slaves
quite an overpowered MC, but aware of the limitations of his young body.appreciate that his largest asset is his knowledge and experience of how to use that knowledge. can yell that he is good as he does his best to help his followers also become stronger.also, quite good with the women.the story including military technology along with magic is very interesting.looking forward to continue following this excellent novel.
Honestly this kind of story is new for me, I am quite interested to read it.♥️♥️♥️🔥
HEY AUTHOR , I AM ASKING TO UPLOAD NEW CHAPTERS IN " REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " OR IF YOUR'RE NOT WANT TO CONTINUE JUST FINISH IT IN 10 - 15 CHAPTERS MORE SO IT HAS AN ENDING OR YOU WILL DO CONTINUE THE NOVEL" REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " IN FUTURE.YOUR'RE ALREADY DOING ANOTHER NOVEL WITH THIS ONE SO JUST FINISH THE " REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " SO WE WILL GET SOME PIECE.
I have to say, I really like returnee aspect, and seeing how Arthur works towards getting as strong as he once was, but one thing I really hate is the romance. Why does he refuse to call the girls as his lovers/girlfriends/wives... he's adamant on their relationships as like a subordinate and master type. I feel like this would be so much better if there was any real intimacy, even just Arthur saying he likes the girls, or doing something more caring, instead of just treating them like things... I'm only half way through, around chapter 200, so I'm hoping eventually we see more intimacy later on. I find it hard to believe that he spent thousands of years in another world and he never fell in love with one of his women?
I don't know how I've gone through all the reviews and haven't seen it mentioned yet, but the translation is insufferable. the English is so bad that it actually exceeds the usual "poorly translated but tolerable" standard.
is there no romance? will your mc never love anyone and just use his girls? and not even call them girlfriend or even wife and give them status as concubine ? 🤢
I like the idea of the story. Magic, urban setting, cultivation & romance. The MC is a turn off with his god complex. He looks down on everyone except his aunt. I haven’t gotten too far, but there are hints of possible ‘Bama action with the aunt & cousin, so I’m hesitant to get too far. I like he has his own mercenary team, he’s starting businesses and he has to work to get stronger even though he could be considered OP. I don’t like how he treats Amanda & the girls who like him. She does a lot for him but it’s obvious he has no feelings for her. He just needs to come right out & tell her & her sister that they will only be jump offs for him like he did with the celebrity women. I love romance in novels bc I feel it enhances the story. As of where I am, the romance tag is cap, but hopefully there is character development bc the writer is quite good at giving the reader an immersive experience. In conclusion take away the god complex & Arthur will become likeable. Other than that, I would recommend this novel 👍🏾
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I just started read and it's already got me hooked I really hope you continue the story
This novel started out interesting for me, but it became frustrating due to certain things, like the fact that his physique is the same despite the magic, and that it's hard to be told over and over again that he didn't have noticeable muscles every time a part was shown. his body, also incredibly annoying that they screw over and over and over again with the fact that he is a student, look, I have read novels with young protagonists and none of them were so heavy on the subject that he is very young, and it is basically always the Same, everything I just said happens a lot of times and also that many times the MC hits characters without any sense.
Come on author, take some bleach to whitening your feathers and continue your novel (return from the magic world),don't be shy, this novel is good so far but there are too few chapters, don't be greedy to try writing too many other novels, remember that who is running after many rabbits don't catch no one.
Very good novel, too bad I don't know English and the webnovel app doesn't translate into Portuguese. because of that I'm stopping reading -.-(written by google translator)
Review as of chapter 100. So far so great. Really a good world the author has made, and honestly it felt like the intro just ended. very excited to see where this goes keep it up!
I would say the route taken byvthe author is different, to me it is not a serious book, i mean the action, calculations, intrigue are not that serious, sometimes it seems the story jumps around, like people accepting new things just like that, some people acting like a gang one time, and the other acting like secret company soldiers, the best way i can describe it is the avengers movies and the lego avengers movie, this book is the lego avengers movie.
Very good. An interesting and unique take on the reverse isekai sort of novel. Unlike others I've read the MC doesn't return jaded and vengeful following some betrayal or tragedy. MC also doesn't bother hiding his transformation, while he doesn't quite flaunt it he isn't afraid of others knowing of his abilities either.
Dear writer, I would highly recommend taking some time to read through all of the comments on your story. By doing so, you may gain some valuable insights and feedback that could help you further improve your work. Additionally, I suggest revisiting your story once again after reading the comments, as it may help you appreciate how good your story truly is.
cool story for me and you you can take care either way you can get married or something else
As a Fellow Author from Indonesia, I sent you my Fullest Support 😆🇮🇩🍻 All Five Stars for You😆⭐🌟🌠🌟⭐🤩
Like to book for a while then I started feeling like the MC Just uses the feelings of the women around him and never even try’s to pay it back. It’s a fine story though and the writings good.
The story is chill but MC is not very likeable....Also the interactions with the girls are cringe. I mean the story writing feels childish and lacking depth overall. The overall concept is great and if it was written better it would be a solid story.
Don’t waste your time reading this. It starts off really good and then just plummets… It ends so fast that you know it ended but you are still so confused.
MC has god complex, thinking and acting as if he's the most superior and all of humanity is like his pet slaves
quite an overpowered MC, but aware of the limitations of his young body.appreciate that his largest asset is his knowledge and experience of how to use that knowledge. can yell that he is good as he does his best to help his followers also become stronger.also, quite good with the women.the story including military technology along with magic is very interesting.looking forward to continue following this excellent novel.
Honestly this kind of story is new for me, I am quite interested to read it.♥️♥️♥️🔥
HEY AUTHOR , I AM ASKING TO UPLOAD NEW CHAPTERS IN " REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " OR IF YOUR'RE NOT WANT TO CONTINUE JUST FINISH IT IN 10 - 15 CHAPTERS MORE SO IT HAS AN ENDING OR YOU WILL DO CONTINUE THE NOVEL" REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " IN FUTURE.YOUR'RE ALREADY DOING ANOTHER NOVEL WITH THIS ONE SO JUST FINISH THE " REINCARNATED AS THE STRONGEST ANCESTOR WITH A SYSTEM " SO WE WILL GET SOME PIECE.
I have to say, I really like returnee aspect, and seeing how Arthur works towards getting as strong as he once was, but one thing I really hate is the romance. Why does he refuse to call the girls as his lovers/girlfriends/wives... he's adamant on their relationships as like a subordinate and master type. I feel like this would be so much better if there was any real intimacy, even just Arthur saying he likes the girls, or doing something more caring, instead of just treating them like things... I'm only half way through, around chapter 200, so I'm hoping eventually we see more intimacy later on. I find it hard to believe that he spent thousands of years in another world and he never fell in love with one of his women?
I don't know how I've gone through all the reviews and haven't seen it mentioned yet, but the translation is insufferable. the English is so bad that it actually exceeds the usual "poorly translated but tolerable" standard.
is there no romance? will your mc never love anyone and just use his girls? and not even call them girlfriend or even wife and give them status as concubine ? 🤢
I like the idea of the story. Magic, urban setting, cultivation & romance. The MC is a turn off with his god complex. He looks down on everyone except his aunt. I haven’t gotten too far, but there are hints of possible ‘Bama action with the aunt & cousin, so I’m hesitant to get too far. I like he has his own mercenary team, he’s starting businesses and he has to work to get stronger even though he could be considered OP. I don’t like how he treats Amanda & the girls who like him. She does a lot for him but it’s obvious he has no feelings for her. He just needs to come right out & tell her & her sister that they will only be jump offs for him like he did with the celebrity women. I love romance in novels bc I feel it enhances the story. As of where I am, the romance tag is cap, but hopefully there is character development bc the writer is quite good at giving the reader an immersive experience. In conclusion take away the god complex & Arthur will become likeable. Other than that, I would recommend this novel 👍🏾
Tiết lộ Spoiler I just started read and it's already got me hooked I really hope you continue the story
This novel started out interesting for me, but it became frustrating due to certain things, like the fact that his physique is the same despite the magic, and that it's hard to be told over and over again that he didn't have noticeable muscles every time a part was shown. his body, also incredibly annoying that they screw over and over and over again with the fact that he is a student, look, I have read novels with young protagonists and none of them were so heavy on the subject that he is very young, and it is basically always the Same, everything I just said happens a lot of times and also that many times the MC hits characters without any sense.
Come on author, take some bleach to whitening your feathers and continue your novel (return from the magic world),don't be shy, this novel is good so far but there are too few chapters, don't be greedy to try writing too many other novels, remember that who is running after many rabbits don't catch no one.
Very good novel, too bad I don't know English and the webnovel app doesn't translate into Portuguese. because of that I'm stopping reading -.-(written by google translator)
Review as of chapter 100. So far so great. Really a good world the author has made, and honestly it felt like the intro just ended. very excited to see where this goes keep it up!
I would say the route taken byvthe author is different, to me it is not a serious book, i mean the action, calculations, intrigue are not that serious, sometimes it seems the story jumps around, like people accepting new things just like that, some people acting like a gang one time, and the other acting like secret company soldiers, the best way i can describe it is the avengers movies and the lego avengers movie, this book is the lego avengers movie.
Very good. An interesting and unique take on the reverse isekai sort of novel. Unlike others I've read the MC doesn't return jaded and vengeful following some betrayal or tragedy. MC also doesn't bother hiding his transformation, while he doesn't quite flaunt it he isn't afraid of others knowing of his abilities either.
Dear writer, I would highly recommend taking some time to read through all of the comments on your story. By doing so, you may gain some valuable insights and feedback that could help you further improve your work. Additionally, I suggest revisiting your story once again after reading the comments, as it may help you appreciate how good your story truly is.