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if I could give this a 0 rate, i would do so over ten times, because that's how bad of a novel this is, but I don't need to go into how bad, because the other reviews already spoke my mind.
Well it’s a nice novel and story execution is also well done but chapter updates are very unstable as I have to eons for new chapters
I like the story, no one is paranoid like in other stories, as long as you continue like this I will continue reading a lot of power to the protagonist but you don't make him boring either
top[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend].....................,,,,,,,,,,,,
you should really read other stories that way you can know how to properly write a good story .
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old chapters are bad new are good. so you can go for it. H@₹em members are ancient supreme,Natasha ,Diana, Wanda and galacta(daughter of Galactus)there may be others.
ITS TRASH. and im not talking about writing quality. The story in itself is trash.
if you could re-edit and re-translate and take out some Chinese factors than it would be rough polish gem but there are different things that would gave to take out such as mc personality and dialog to be much more bearable and natural, and I hope you can make it's potential shine, good luck.
The story gets better over time as does the writing quality, The character is powerful which I like and he has a goal that is revealed later on. personally I think it's a good one with potential for omniversal story coverage..........
The moment I saw several red flags, and read a few chapters in I conclude you copied an entire MTL and heavily edited it without credit to the original. This is plagiarism, not a mere edit. Sad.
B a.. G.. U..... S........ .................................... M.. A.... L.... S................... ..........................b....e....r...ko..men....ta....r
E leído hasta el capítulo 36 y me gustó, si puede faltar descripción en la narrativa pero es un fanfic mejor que muchos que sinceramente le daría 5 estrellas, aunque en un principio no estaba de acuerdo con el acercamiento a Tony pero considero que si lo supo manejar sin arruinar la historia principal del MCU.
I read the original version and even tho it had a hint of chinese it was still one of my favorite ff i read so if the author can correct some small mistakes like repeating the name every few words it can be a very good fanfic
Seriously it is written as if someone is telling you about a FanFiction he/she has been reading rather than you reading a FanFiction! MC did this, MC did that, and so one it is just a list of recounting events like a shopping list.
I read the first three chapters and I can't take it anymore, it repeats "Leon creed" all the time, So much so that it's annoying and makes it impossible to read
I am Shameless, So Give me Review and Rating in this Story.[img=recommend] Now with proper translation with my five friends as future editor. [img=update] Give us a review and rating for this story. Your gift is the motivation for my laziness. Give me more motivation! This is hard, cheer me up!
I don't care that he is a 5D (Pentadimensional) being, but being a lab rat is already the end of the line for me. I don't want to see someone being a lab rat for experiments just for knowledge
Aweful even if it was translated to perfection it's written like a elementary school book e.g Tony is smart.. Leon did this... Etc. No dialogue no real descriptive writing just summary writing which I hate at how common it is on webnovel.
This is basically unreadable, my suggestion is for the author to get an English editor. But until this story is HEAVILY EDITED, don't waste your time.
I will only say that the idea is great of having doomsday but the mc is just i donot even have words. read at your own behalf . Only the story and idea was great but the because of mc the whole story became worse then trash. The whole story is him saying that he is moral he will use his powers responsibly . He has power to destroy earth and he works as a bodyguard. And it was said it was harem but it looked more like gay or yaoi.
if I could give this a 0 rate, i would do so over ten times, because that's how bad of a novel this is, but I don't need to go into how bad, because the other reviews already spoke my mind.
Well it’s a nice novel and story execution is also well done but chapter updates are very unstable as I have to eons for new chapters
I like the story, no one is paranoid like in other stories, as long as you continue like this I will continue reading a lot of power to the protagonist but you don't make him boring either
top[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend].....................,,,,,,,,,,,,
you should really read other stories that way you can know how to properly write a good story .
140dddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
old chapters are bad new are good. so you can go for it. H@₹em members are ancient supreme,Natasha ,Diana, Wanda and galacta(daughter of Galactus)there may be others.
ITS TRASH. and im not talking about writing quality. The story in itself is trash.
if you could re-edit and re-translate and take out some Chinese factors than it would be rough polish gem but there are different things that would gave to take out such as mc personality and dialog to be much more bearable and natural, and I hope you can make it's potential shine, good luck.
The story gets better over time as does the writing quality, The character is powerful which I like and he has a goal that is revealed later on. personally I think it's a good one with potential for omniversal story coverage..........
The moment I saw several red flags, and read a few chapters in I conclude you copied an entire MTL and heavily edited it without credit to the original. This is plagiarism, not a mere edit. Sad.
B a.. G.. U..... S........ .................................... M.. A.... L.... S................... ..........................b....e....r...ko..men....ta....r
E leído hasta el capítulo 36 y me gustó, si puede faltar descripción en la narrativa pero es un fanfic mejor que muchos que sinceramente le daría 5 estrellas, aunque en un principio no estaba de acuerdo con el acercamiento a Tony pero considero que si lo supo manejar sin arruinar la historia principal del MCU.
I read the original version and even tho it had a hint of chinese it was still one of my favorite ff i read so if the author can correct some small mistakes like repeating the name every few words it can be a very good fanfic
Seriously it is written as if someone is telling you about a FanFiction he/she has been reading rather than you reading a FanFiction! MC did this, MC did that, and so one it is just a list of recounting events like a shopping list.
I read the first three chapters and I can't take it anymore, it repeats "Leon creed" all the time, So much so that it's annoying and makes it impossible to read
I am Shameless, So Give me Review and Rating in this Story.[img=recommend] Now with proper translation with my five friends as future editor. [img=update] Give us a review and rating for this story. Your gift is the motivation for my laziness. Give me more motivation! This is hard, cheer me up!
I don't care that he is a 5D (Pentadimensional) being, but being a lab rat is already the end of the line for me. I don't want to see someone being a lab rat for experiments just for knowledge
Aweful even if it was translated to perfection it's written like a elementary school book e.g Tony is smart.. Leon did this... Etc. No dialogue no real descriptive writing just summary writing which I hate at how common it is on webnovel.
This is basically unreadable, my suggestion is for the author to get an English editor. But until this story is HEAVILY EDITED, don't waste your time.
I will only say that the idea is great of having doomsday but the mc is just i donot even have words. read at your own behalf . Only the story and idea was great but the because of mc the whole story became worse then trash. The whole story is him saying that he is moral he will use his powers responsibly . He has power to destroy earth and he works as a bodyguard. And it was said it was harem but it looked more like gay or yaoi.