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it' a great novel, but author can you tell me, why have you it stopped updating
Review after reading 19 chapters. Grammar: 5/5. I have no complaints whatsoever about the grammar of this book. There are close to zero errors and the sentence structuring is top notch. Overall, a 5/5 for me. Story: 5/5 So far, the story has been intruiging and captivating. They are no cliche tropes and the story is comedic as well. The characters actually have personalities and dont feel like blank slates. The interactions are funny and nice to read. Overall, the story so far has been refreshing. Straight 5/5 for me. World Building: Spot on is the only phrase i can use to describe the world building of this novel. Its detailed and realistic, 2 ingredients for any novel with excellent world building. I feel like i actually have a direction when reading the story. Another 5/5 for me. The MC’s are excellent in my book. The twins have personalities that compliment each other and I can actually feel the brotherhood between them. This story is simply a gem. Read it if you want to read something new and engaing. If the author keeps up the good work, I can easily see this story becoming one of the best, if not the best, cultivation novels on this site.
Disciples of the Levon Bew Sect!! This old man is one of the many sagely elders in the sect that develops and writes sacred manuals. I have written and rewritten this particular manual for over 12,000 years. I dare not say I am the best at writing sacred manuals, but I dare say that if you enjoy martial arts and cultivation you will find this Heavenly Celestial manual of mine exceedingly interesting to read and comprehend. Become my follower and be enlightened by my manuals. I have another manual by the name of "The Founder Of Qi Cultivation Reincarnates." It has been called amazing! unique! a breath of fresh air! It's an unfamiliar but interesting take on these types of manuals, and I don't doubt this manual will receive the same reception. So, if you have read manuals written by common and reiterated standards, take a break to enjoy this old man's unique take on the path of cultivation. If you've read this far then this old man requires you to leave one of the sect's allocated spirit stones. What's that? You haven't read the book yet so don't feel like paying? Nonsense!! Give me my Spirit Stones and go read this Godly Celestial Primordial Immortal manual!!
it' a great novel, but author can you tell me, why have you it stopped updating
Review after reading 19 chapters. Grammar: 5/5. I have no complaints whatsoever about the grammar of this book. There are close to zero errors and the sentence structuring is top notch. Overall, a 5/5 for me. Story: 5/5 So far, the story has been intruiging and captivating. They are no cliche tropes and the story is comedic as well. The characters actually have personalities and dont feel like blank slates. The interactions are funny and nice to read. Overall, the story so far has been refreshing. Straight 5/5 for me. World Building: Spot on is the only phrase i can use to describe the world building of this novel. Its detailed and realistic, 2 ingredients for any novel with excellent world building. I feel like i actually have a direction when reading the story. Another 5/5 for me. The MC’s are excellent in my book. The twins have personalities that compliment each other and I can actually feel the brotherhood between them. This story is simply a gem. Read it if you want to read something new and engaing. If the author keeps up the good work, I can easily see this story becoming one of the best, if not the best, cultivation novels on this site.
Disciples of the Levon Bew Sect!! This old man is one of the many sagely elders in the sect that develops and writes sacred manuals. I have written and rewritten this particular manual for over 12,000 years. I dare not say I am the best at writing sacred manuals, but I dare say that if you enjoy martial arts and cultivation you will find this Heavenly Celestial manual of mine exceedingly interesting to read and comprehend. Become my follower and be enlightened by my manuals. I have another manual by the name of "The Founder Of Qi Cultivation Reincarnates." It has been called amazing! unique! a breath of fresh air! It's an unfamiliar but interesting take on these types of manuals, and I don't doubt this manual will receive the same reception. So, if you have read manuals written by common and reiterated standards, take a break to enjoy this old man's unique take on the path of cultivation. If you've read this far then this old man requires you to leave one of the sect's allocated spirit stones. What's that? You haven't read the book yet so don't feel like paying? Nonsense!! Give me my Spirit Stones and go read this Godly Celestial Primordial Immortal manual!!
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