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It's been a year, author. where have you been 😭 please update this masterpiece even just for once a month please 🙏🏻.....
Dude respected game of thrones so much he pulled a George rr Martin on us. Aside from that it’s a good fanfic and I hope the author can pic it up again because the story has something special.
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Although the fic got only few chaps, it has the best world background among all hod or even got fan fic! The author did his homework man, like seriously. The conversation between the characters also smooth and lifelike. In all honesty I hope the author put a pat reon for us to support him! Good luck mr author, all the best!
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Love it so so much it sucks you straight in and I for one keep coming back for more!!!! It’s a great storyline that although in the same world as asoiaf is very different
Excellent 👌🏾. Yes!!! This book is absolutely incredible. This is the best fanfiction of "Games Of Thrones" that I have ever read. The construction and development of the plot is simply perfect. It's consistent, and fascinating. The design of the character is complete. Good job author 👏👏👏. I can't wait to read the next chapters.
One of the best aSoIaF fanfics on this or any platform. From Valyria before the Doom to Skagos made anew. Really great work! I can't wait for more!
You've succeeded where few people have before. When someone writes a magic centric fanfic about a low magic world like game of thrones or lord of the rings they almost always mess it up, you haven't. Good job and don't drop!
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I'm tired of waiting for new episodes please update if not continued, I will remove them from the collection 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶🥲🥲🥲🥲🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐
walaupun diawal agak membosankan tapi saya yakin seiring berjalannya waktu pasti novel ini akan bagus, dan saya harap author bisa melanjutkan novel ini,. dan saya pasti 100% yakin bahwa MC kita ini seorang elf, jadi kalau bisa dia setelah bencana itu kembali ketanah kelahirannya dan mengetahui siapa jati dirinya setelah mc dan setelah itu mc menguasai Weasteros, setelah itu Mc menemukan benua baru dan itu benua middle earth, saya yakin kalau novel ini masi lanjut dan bisa gabung dengan middle earth (lord of the ring) 100% saya yakin ceritanya akan seru
This book is amazing. If I didn't know this was a fanfic, I would think that this a new novel. The story is well written, grammar isn't a problem. The characters have a steady developement and once you start reading it gets hard to stop. Especially if your a GOT fan. I highly recommend this book. It's an amazing read, younwon't regret it.
26 ch this fanfic... but 20 ch was just to show of mc personality because he did nothing aside from babbling, this feels more like those work were the real goal is to show off authors thoughts about this or that.
one of the most promising takes on J.R.R Martin's work too date. The story as of chapter 26 gives us a much sought after look Into the Valerian Freehold just before the doom and so far the author has done an amazing job expanding off of canon to really bring the legendary city to life and show what the last golden years of the Freehold looked like from the MCs point of view. The story moving forward has amazing potential for longevity if done right and could turn into one of the longest fanfics of J.R.R Martin's work on site with the Mc hopefully gaining some sort of pseudo elf immortality to be able to experience events raging from just before The doom(88BC)all the way up until the final events of Game of Thrones(305AC) about 417years for the MC to experience all the world has to offer and with 3 continent with their own secrets, magic and lore all waiting for someone to discover. So if we're lucky and the update stability gods are kind we'll be in for a wild ride so sit back, relax and pray that they are listening.
Writing quality ; English isn't my first language so i don't have any grounds to judge, but as far as i saw there wasn't any obvious mistakes. Stability : i binge read this storie so idk but it seems pretty good, hence the 5 stars. Story developpment : The author knows where he wants to go and the means used are great. Character design : The only little weak point. I hesitated to put that on World background, but the world background is so good that it would have been a crime to do that. Anyway, the thing that's bothering is the lack of background of his family. I mean, they're the second most powerfull family, but i don't understand what are their purpose for the Valiryan Empire. The four others great family's purpose are the numbers, the valiryan steel, the dragon's breeding,... You explain it as "they have magic, so they're powerfull". Well yes they're maybe powerfull in 1v1 but thats doesn't explain their ascencion to power. You could maybe tranform them as the priest (when i say priest, it's not like religious, more like ceremony's master) of the Empire, they can do all the ceremony related stuff and it would explain it all. Anyway your story is great author and even if you don't listen to my advice, i would continue to read it. At the end of the day it's your story and yours only. Keep this up. I'm sorry if it isn't clear enough, as i said sooner, english isn't my first language soo Stay awsome as you say
I almost never criticize a story, since I don't like to give my opinion critically about a work done by others without knowing the project that the author is carrying out to be able to create this.However, I must say that this story has captivated me enormously, from its development, to the level of explanation it has for someone who has not read the books, In addition to the fact that the story is entertaining and captivates you with each paragraph you read, there is no doubt that it is a good story, I only hope that the author continues to improve greatly
This is by far the best GoT/HtD fanfic on Webnovel, high mid tier characters, many original characters at that. Engaging start and relations between characters you can get behind. Relatively slow story telling, wich in this case helps you connect more with the world and develop a good understanding of how canon this will be. Sometimes I would wish for more descriptions of the sorroukdings and facial expressions in dialogues, this is substituted at least sometimes by good pictures. Little grammar mistakes. A critique would be that we know very little of the mcs strenght and capabilities wich makes it hard to Skale him in comparison to other characters.
So far, one of the best pre-HOTD and pre-GOT fanfiction. The lore is rich and is better than the other fictions I have seen on this site. The love story is just crisp and make it agreeable, I feel like the character designs are brilliantly made. Everything about it is almost perfect. My only suggestion would be for the Starks and Kael family, to make their own pact of Ice and Fire. When Aegon goes and try to conquer Westeros, Kael will prevent him from doing so as dragon vs dragon will cause absolute destruction.
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It's been a year, author. where have you been 😭 please update this masterpiece even just for once a month please 🙏🏻.....
Dude respected game of thrones so much he pulled a George rr Martin on us. Aside from that it’s a good fanfic and I hope the author can pic it up again because the story has something special.
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Although the fic got only few chaps, it has the best world background among all hod or even got fan fic! The author did his homework man, like seriously. The conversation between the characters also smooth and lifelike. In all honesty I hope the author put a pat reon for us to support him! Good luck mr author, all the best!
best novel on the platform. No joking👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Love it so so much it sucks you straight in and I for one keep coming back for more!!!! It’s a great storyline that although in the same world as asoiaf is very different
Excellent 👌🏾. Yes!!! This book is absolutely incredible. This is the best fanfiction of "Games Of Thrones" that I have ever read. The construction and development of the plot is simply perfect. It's consistent, and fascinating. The design of the character is complete. Good job author 👏👏👏. I can't wait to read the next chapters.
One of the best aSoIaF fanfics on this or any platform. From Valyria before the Doom to Skagos made anew. Really great work! I can't wait for more!
You've succeeded where few people have before. When someone writes a magic centric fanfic about a low magic world like game of thrones or lord of the rings they almost always mess it up, you haven't. Good job and don't drop!
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I'm tired of waiting for new episodes please update if not continued, I will remove them from the collection 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😶🥲🥲🥲🥲🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐🤐
walaupun diawal agak membosankan tapi saya yakin seiring berjalannya waktu pasti novel ini akan bagus, dan saya harap author bisa melanjutkan novel ini,. dan saya pasti 100% yakin bahwa MC kita ini seorang elf, jadi kalau bisa dia setelah bencana itu kembali ketanah kelahirannya dan mengetahui siapa jati dirinya setelah mc dan setelah itu mc menguasai Weasteros, setelah itu Mc menemukan benua baru dan itu benua middle earth, saya yakin kalau novel ini masi lanjut dan bisa gabung dengan middle earth (lord of the ring) 100% saya yakin ceritanya akan seru
This book is amazing. If I didn't know this was a fanfic, I would think that this a new novel. The story is well written, grammar isn't a problem. The characters have a steady developement and once you start reading it gets hard to stop. Especially if your a GOT fan. I highly recommend this book. It's an amazing read, younwon't regret it.
26 ch this fanfic... but 20 ch was just to show of mc personality because he did nothing aside from babbling, this feels more like those work were the real goal is to show off authors thoughts about this or that.
one of the most promising takes on J.R.R Martin's work too date. The story as of chapter 26 gives us a much sought after look Into the Valerian Freehold just before the doom and so far the author has done an amazing job expanding off of canon to really bring the legendary city to life and show what the last golden years of the Freehold looked like from the MCs point of view. The story moving forward has amazing potential for longevity if done right and could turn into one of the longest fanfics of J.R.R Martin's work on site with the Mc hopefully gaining some sort of pseudo elf immortality to be able to experience events raging from just before The doom(88BC)all the way up until the final events of Game of Thrones(305AC) about 417years for the MC to experience all the world has to offer and with 3 continent with their own secrets, magic and lore all waiting for someone to discover. So if we're lucky and the update stability gods are kind we'll be in for a wild ride so sit back, relax and pray that they are listening.
Writing quality ; English isn't my first language so i don't have any grounds to judge, but as far as i saw there wasn't any obvious mistakes. Stability : i binge read this storie so idk but it seems pretty good, hence the 5 stars. Story developpment : The author knows where he wants to go and the means used are great. Character design : The only little weak point. I hesitated to put that on World background, but the world background is so good that it would have been a crime to do that. Anyway, the thing that's bothering is the lack of background of his family. I mean, they're the second most powerfull family, but i don't understand what are their purpose for the Valiryan Empire. The four others great family's purpose are the numbers, the valiryan steel, the dragon's breeding,... You explain it as "they have magic, so they're powerfull". Well yes they're maybe powerfull in 1v1 but thats doesn't explain their ascencion to power. You could maybe tranform them as the priest (when i say priest, it's not like religious, more like ceremony's master) of the Empire, they can do all the ceremony related stuff and it would explain it all. Anyway your story is great author and even if you don't listen to my advice, i would continue to read it. At the end of the day it's your story and yours only. Keep this up. I'm sorry if it isn't clear enough, as i said sooner, english isn't my first language soo Stay awsome as you say
I almost never criticize a story, since I don't like to give my opinion critically about a work done by others without knowing the project that the author is carrying out to be able to create this.However, I must say that this story has captivated me enormously, from its development, to the level of explanation it has for someone who has not read the books, In addition to the fact that the story is entertaining and captivates you with each paragraph you read, there is no doubt that it is a good story, I only hope that the author continues to improve greatly
This is by far the best GoT/HtD fanfic on Webnovel, high mid tier characters, many original characters at that. Engaging start and relations between characters you can get behind. Relatively slow story telling, wich in this case helps you connect more with the world and develop a good understanding of how canon this will be. Sometimes I would wish for more descriptions of the sorroukdings and facial expressions in dialogues, this is substituted at least sometimes by good pictures. Little grammar mistakes. A critique would be that we know very little of the mcs strenght and capabilities wich makes it hard to Skale him in comparison to other characters.
So far, one of the best pre-HOTD and pre-GOT fanfiction. The lore is rich and is better than the other fictions I have seen on this site. The love story is just crisp and make it agreeable, I feel like the character designs are brilliantly made. Everything about it is almost perfect. My only suggestion would be for the Starks and Kael family, to make their own pact of Ice and Fire. When Aegon goes and try to conquer Westeros, Kael will prevent him from doing so as dragon vs dragon will cause absolute destruction.
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