One Piece : Dungeon

LV 3

Shijin_Kama

............................................................................................................................................................ Its good. Now... WHERE IS THE REST!

LV 3

Fakeuser_17

Truthfully I like the previous version better even if the characters and the world building were a little off. Seriously, couldn't read past chapter 3 of this one . Too much info dump and the MC behaves in a cringe manner. The limitations placed in dungeon make it seems like a video game. I mean bro what's the meaning of no one will die even when killed only loose some level and then you add even if NPC's are killed they will also revive....... Bro it's a pirate world for crying out loud here people slaughter entire countries for no reason and you just came with a way to empower them without any risks......... Well all in all a huge disappointment.

LV 5

Daohei

As of chapter 5 Too much details, not enough adventuring, let the characters discover the dungeon with the reader. Otherwise a good concept

LV 2

R0B

No personality, no logic and a very lousy writing. Not recommended at all. Nothing really interesting happens. ---------------------------------------------------------------

LV 14

Aim_zx

It has potential honestly it's just 4 chapters but i love it i hope you don't drop it

LV 2

Nicolas_Bahamondes

the plot is about danmachi, but without the waifus and without the gods, all involved in the world of one piece, a bad idea They should have chosen another world since the one in the open piece doesn't match.

LV 10

Xth

Deja Deja Deja Deja Deja vu how many times(4th time???) its gona be reuploaded??

LV 4

The_Bored_Immortal

This whole novel feels like something written by a non-english speaking 5th grader, both in grammar and the cohesiveness of the story. Main complaint is that characters are acting completely different from their cannon counterparts and are way too trusting of the MC

LV 4

Crownless312

Very cool idea so keep writing and more chapters plz it’s good

LV 4

Abyss_Edge

Still no update after 7 months.... U dead bro?

LV 1

osipQa

Need more.....................................................................................................................................................

LV 1

Rizki_Caturianto

It's a great One Piece fanfiction.. I like it!!! 👍👍😍😍 This fanfiction quite different from another OP Dungeon I read before, but it's great too.. It give detail about Dungeon, and make a dungeon like in RPG game.. Author sama, are you make the NPC from another anime (like Soma and Joushirou. And Sarasa)?? It's quite interesting.. There just a few wrong grammar/spelling/word, but I still understand it.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author sama... 😁😁👍👍👍

LV 1

DaoistNFzBpz

Like Nise like like love like like like like like like like like like love love love love love nise nise nise nise craze like like like like like like like like likelike lie like like good good good good good good good good good good good good

LV 4

harrisdavidwilliam

The Main issue is the grammar, its hard to read, use grammarly or A.I. to correct the grammar. Then there is to much explanation, its takes to long when it can be explained properly in shorter time so there is much time for the adventure story part, and ita supposed to be a dungeon so the story should have more story about the dungeons adventure part. But over all if you get past the grammar, its an ok story

LV 3

Pram_Art

kgk up lagi nih?...........,............,.............

LV 4

Lithiel

This story is fairly good, however it spends far too much time covering the background portion. Also, it has an incredible amount of grammatical errors, and use of incorrect words. If you hate bad grammar you will not make it through the first few chapters, but the story is a good concept.

LV 4

WellReadTom

I don't see anything wrong with the story keep going.

LV 6

CandyChopper

I give 1 star for dropping this and ghosting readers.