Omni-Dimensional Emanation

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DetachedDreamer

Not a bad story but there is still much to be desired. The MC suddenly turns into a cold, indifferent MC, serisl killer who claims to love his family but consistently lies to them. he use to be worried about the the consequences. The author seems very childish. Basically adding the gamers mind to kill off any personality he had. actions seemingly contradicting each other in very extreme ways. A lot goes overlooked by people around him. very obvious stuff and concerning questions any good parent should force their kids to answer. However, I do appreciate the characters chosen for the chat. id love to see Iroh get his son back. The grammar and all around English is at an acceptable level and I havent given up on the story hoping that it'll improve in the future.

LV 12

John_Ryan_8278

this isn't bad it just isn't good either mainly due to the horrible grammar I would overlook this issue if I could understand the story anyway but sometimes it could be a import piece of information but it's hardly readable but that is the only big issue everything else is good just don't go in expecting anything new from a chat group fanfic

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ShiroNirvana

I was really enjoying the fanfic at first, but after 35 chapters it started to drop in quality, with me focusing on winning a harem and spending slice-of-life time with them. I tried SWEAR, I kept reading until chapters 86 but I can't take it anymore, OVER 40 CHAPTERS OF PURE SLICE OF LIFE, and zero development in the story.(Google Translator)

LV 14

Artoriapendraragon

the write seem goood and I will be waiting for it to finish hope author don't drop it 😌

LV 5

AlphaZwei

Since I don't particularly remember how the original story went, I can't decide whether this story is Re-write or Re-upload. The grammar is so bad, I wonder if the Author learns English just by listening without studying it properly.

LV 10

Pythia

Is his childhood friend the Mc now? ............................................................................................................

LV 13

Fenrirzero9999

Blood magic Animancy/Necromancy Binding/Freeing Conjuration Blood Manipulation Blood Arts Blood Energy Manipulation Blood Generation (Varies) Blood Property Manipulation Blood Sense Blood Transcendency Enhanced/Supernatural Tracking Hematomancy Liquid Surveillance Communication Oath Manipulation (Blood oaths) Portal Magic Sacrificial Magic (Blood's sacrifice) Spell Casting Symbol Magic Reality Magic: Warp reality via blood offering. Ritual Magic Voodoo Body magic Dark arts Mystical blood Blood hunter Capabilities Users can create, shape, and manipulate blood, an essential body fluid in humans and other animals that delivers necessary substances such as nutrients and oxygen to the cells and transports metabolic waste products away from those same cells. The majority of users are only able to exert control over the blood of themselves, using them for various purposes, such as for rituals, examining, or most commonly combat. They can shape their blood into tendrils to strike enemies from afar or use it to trap opponents in a prison of blood. Users can concentrate blood into a single point, and shoot it out akin to bullets, or sharpen their blood to the point that they can slice and tear flesh with ease, or solidify blood to use as rock-hard ammunition. Some users would be able to indirectly control the movement of objects by leaving traces of blood on them, and manipulating that blood in order to move said object. When manipulating blood, beware dying of blood loss for users that use their own blood or being present in a wet environment, as exposure to water will cause the membrane of red blood cells to tear, making 45% of blood uncontrollable. Another use of blood manipulation is controlling the blood within the body of oneself, increasing physical abilities by speeding up the transport of nutrients and oxygen via blood to all parts of their body, thus improving their energy and power. They can also use this to speed up healing by immediately clotting their blood, preventing blood loss and speeding up the recovery process, gaining a form of manual healing factor. Sometimes, users would be able to control the composition of their blood down to the number of red blood cells present in their blood stream. Blood manipulators can also gain a form of cold immunity by increasing body temperature through blood-flow. More advanced users would be able to manipulate blood from anywhere in their surroundings, such as the bodies of other living creatures, allowing them to control them like puppets, induce nosebleeds or headaches, or cause blood-related diseases or conditions such as Sickle Cell Anemia Thrombosis. At an even higher level, users could instantly kill others by making blood explode from the inside out or forcibly causing their heart to stop or knocking them unconscious by restricting blood-flow to the brain. Applications Blood Attacks Blood Clotting Blood Consumption Blood Field Projection Blood Generation Blood Marionette of yourselves and/or others. Blood Solidification Blood Stopping Blood Thinning Death Inducement by stopping the flow of blood in a person’s body. Haemokinetic Constructs Internal Rupturing by increasing blood flow to make blood veins or even the heart to burst Manipulate the properties of blood. Blood Property Manipulation Healing Blood Density Manipulation Dermal Armor by increasing the density of the blood. Paralysis Inducement by stopping target's blood in their veins. Strength, Speed, Stamina, and Regeneration by increasing the flow of blood. Prehensile Blood Serum Manipulation Unconsciousness Inducement by reversing the flow of blood to cause unconsciousness. Techniques Blood Absorption: To be able to absorb blood from others. Blood Aura: To surround oneself in blood. Blood Cloning: To create clones of themselves by using blood. Blood Empowerment: To be empowered and vitalized by blood. Blood Link: To be linked to others by blood. Blood Mimicry: To mimic the properties of blood. Blood Oxygen Manipulation: To manipulate the oxygen in one's blood and others. Blood Portal Creation: To create portals out of ones own blood. Blood Pressure Manipulation: To manipulate the pressure and flow of blood inside bodies. Blood Propulsion: To propel one's self using blood. Blood Sense: To be aware of the circulatory system allowing to detect the presence of other substances in a subject’s blood. Blood Sugar Manipulation: To manipulate the blood sugar inside bodies. Blood Flow Vision: To see the flow of blood of any living being. Blood Teleportation: To teleport through blood. Blood Transformation: To transform matter into blood. Blood Transfusion: To inject one's blood into others. Blood Type Manipulation: To alter one's blood type. Brain Manipulation- Blood manipulation can grant its user the ability to control the blood in brains. Disease Manipulation - Limited to blood based diseases Drowning: To drown a target with large quantities of blood. Haemokinetic Combat: To infuse blood in physical combat. Haemomancy: To use divination with blood as a medium. Haemopotent Regeneration: To regenerate oneself using blood. Haemopotent Replication: To replicate powers with blood as a medium. Infection - Limited to pus (Dead white blood cells) Organic Combustion: To trigger internal/external incineration via bloodwork. Thermovariance: To boil targets blood. Variations Bio-Blood Manipulation Blood Energy Manipulation Blood Magic Chlorophyll Manipulation Ichor Manipulation Associations Acid Manipulation by controlling the acidity of blood. Adoptive Muscle Memory, Knowledge Replication and/or Power Absorption using blood as a medium. Adrenal Activation Bio-Iron Manipulation - Iron is usually found in the blood streams. Blood Energy Manipulation - Using blood as energy. Blood Transcendency Bloodlessness Bloodline Manipulation Body Manipulation Bone Manipulation - Blood is produced in bone marrow. Carbon Manipulation Carbon Dioxide Manipulation Cardiology Manipulation Hydrogen Manipulation Iron Manipulation Life-Force Manipulation - Blood is a essential part of one's biology. Liquid Surveillance Communication: Use blood for communication, connection, spying and surveillance. Magic, especially Dark Arts and Voodoo. Nitrogen Manipulation Oxygen Manipulation Silicon Manipulation Summoning, Dead and Ghosts. Vampire Physiology Water Manipulation * Blood Manipulation Blood Manipulation A Acidic Blood Acidic Blood Alien Blood Alien Blood Anthropomancy Anthropomancy Aphrodisiac Blood Aphrodisiac Blood B Bio-Blood Manipulation Bio-Blood Manipulation Blessed Blood Blessed Blood Blood Absorption Blood Absorption Blood Armor Blood Armor Blood Artillery Blood Artillery Blood Arts Blood Arts Blood Attacks Blood Attacks Blood Aura Blood Aura Blood Ball Projection Blood Ball Projection Blood Beam Emission Blood Beam Emission Blood Blast Blood Blast Blood Bomb Generation Blood Bomb Generation Blood Breath Blood Breath Blood Bullet Projection Blood Bullet Projection Blood Cloning Blood Cloning Blood Clotting Blood Clotting Blood Consumption Blood Consumption Blood Creature Creation Blood Creature Creation Blood Cutting Blood Cutting Blood Empowerment Blood Empowerment Blood Energy Manipulation Blood Energy Manipulation Blood Field Projection Blood Field Projection Blood Flow Vision Blood Flow Vision Blood Generation Blood Generation Blood Imprisonment Blood Imprisonment Blood Independence Blood Independence Blood Infusion Blood Infusion Blood Link Blood Link Blood Magic Blood Magic Blood Marionette Blood Marionette Blood Mimicry Blood Mimicry Blood Oxygen Manipulation Blood Oxygen Manipulation Blood Portal Creation Blood Portal Creation Bloodlessness Bloodlessness Bodily Fluid Independence Bodily Fluid Independence Blood Pressure Manipulation Blood Pressure Manipulation Blood Property Manipulation Blood Property Manipulation Blood Propulsion Blood Propulsion Blood Rain Generation Blood Rain Generation Blood Resistance Blood Resistance Blood Rush Immunity Blood Rush Immunity Blood Sense Blood Sense Blood Solidification Blood Solidification Blood Spike Projection Blood Spike Projection Blood Stopping Blood Stopping Blood Sugar Manipulation Blood Sugar Manipulation Blood Teleportation Blood Teleportation Blood Thinning Blood Thinning Blood Trail Blood Trail Blood Transcendency Blood Transcendency Blood Transformation Blood Transformation Blood Transfusion Blood Transfusion Blood Type Manipulation Blood Type Manipulation Blood Vision Blood Vision Blood Vortex Creation Blood Vortex Creation Blood Weaponry Blood Weaponry Bloodline Arts Bloodline Arts Bloodline Combat Bloodline Combat Bloodline Defense Bloodline Defense Bloodline Energy Attacks Bloodline Energy Attacks Bloodline Magic Bloodline Magic Bloodline Magic Attacks Bloodline Magic Attacks Bloodline Manipulation Bloodline Manipulation Bloodline Mode Bloodline Mode Bloodline Tracking Bloodline Tracking Bloody Bones Physiology Bloody Bones Physiology C Cardiology Manipulation Cardiology Manipulation Chlorophyll Generation Chlorophyll Generation Chlorophyll Manipulation Chlorophyll Manipulation Conversion Blood Conversion Blood Corrupted Blood Corrupted Blood Cryogenic Blood Cryogenic Blood Cursed Blood Cursed Blood D Dialysis Inducement Dialysis Inducement Dragon Blood Dragon Blood Drowning Drowning E Electrolytic Blood Electrolytic Blood Explosive Blood Explosive Blood F Flammable Blood Flammable Blood Flow Manipulation Flow Manipulation G Genesis Blood Genesis Blood H Haemokinetic Blade Construction Haemokinetic Blade Construction Haemokinetic Bow Construction Haemokinetic Bow Construction Haemokinetic Claws Haemokinetic Claws Haemokinetic Combat Haemokinetic Combat Haemokinetic Constructs Haemokinetic Constructs Haemokinetic Polearm Construction Haemokinetic Polearm Construction Haemokinetic Polearm Proficiency Haemokinetic Polearm Proficiency Haemokinetic Shapeshifting Haemokinetic Shapeshifting Haemokinetic Shield Construction Haemokinetic Shield Construction Haemokinetic String Construction Haemokinetic String Construction Haemokinetic Sword Proficiency Haemokinetic Sword Proficiency Haemokinetic Tail Haemokinetic Tail Haemokinetic Wall Construction Haemokinetic Wall Construction Haemokinetic Web Generation Haemokinetic Web Generation Haemokinetic Whip Generation Haemokinetic Whip Generation Haemokinetic Wing Manifestation Haemokinetic Wing Manifestation Haemopotent Regeneration Haemopotent Regeneration Haemopotent Replication Haemopotent Replication Healing Blood Healing Blood Hematomancy Hematomancy I Ichor Generation Ichor Generation Ichor Manipulation Ichor Manipulation Ichor Properties Ichor Properties Infection Infection Internal Color Manipulation Internal Color Manipulation K Kinship Scrying Kinship Scrying M Metallic Blood Metallic Blood Metallic Bodily Fluids Metallic Bodily Fluids Microrg-Active Blood Microrg-Active Blood Mosquito Physiology Mosquito Physiology Mutagenic Blood Mutagenic Blood Mystical Blood Mystical Blood N Nano-Active Blood Nano-Active Blood O Offspring Manipulation Offspring Manipulation Organic Combustion Organic Combustion P Photosynthetic Blood Photosynthetic Blood Poisonous Blood Poisonous Blood Power Via Blood Power Via Blood Power-Boosting Blood Power-Boosting Blood Power-Erasing DNA Power-Erasing DNA Power-Granting Blood Power-Granting Blood Prehensile Blood Prehensile Blood R Radioactive Blood Radioactive Blood Radioactive Saliva Radioactive Saliva S Sachi.exe/Serpent Blooded User blog:Sachi.exe/Serpent Blooded Serum Manipulation Serum Manipulation Skeletal Duplication Skeletal Duplication Species Combat Species Combat Species Magic Species Magic Spiritual Blood Spiritual Blood Supernatural Blood Supernatural Blood Supernatural Tendrils Supernatural Tendrils T Technomagical Blood Technomagical Blood Technomechanical Blood Technomechanical Blood Technorganic Blood Technorganic Blood Thermovariance Thermovariance V Vampire Manipulation Vampire Manipulation Vampiric Toxicity Vampiric Toxicity Vampirology Mastery Vampirology Mastery Vein Manipulation Vein Manipulation

LV 4

Abyssal_Ram123

this is the best ever.

LV 14

LordPocky

this is my updated review since he changed the name of the book. I still cannot recommend this to people. mainly because I cannot stand the main character giving up any sense of humanity to become a living flesh beast / outer god.

LV 14

thescorpiona

first of all, i have a hard time giving a rating i believe is right because im bad at judging such things so i gave it a overall neutral 3 stars. now lemme get to what i wanna say: the author wasnt kidding about unrealistic harem romance. at first i quite enjoyed this fic, but after a while i noticed how unrealistic the harem felt. dont get me wrong, i often read harem novels, but i prefer them smaller i guess... or perhaps i have grown out of it. idk but i just cant read more rn. oh and i forgot, there were instances where words were missing. author san, other than the harem i feel that this novel is quite enjoyable. have a good day!

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GupGodLicker

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Jheydi327

Welp. The only bad about this Story is its Grammar.. I guess if the author having an editor will make this better.. And also I'm still at chaps 50 and I can say it's good.. Just ignore the Grammar.. Haha

LV 4

please_be_gentle_

I don’t know dude for me the original was better than this rewrite but it’s not that bad as well. Keep it up.

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Vermont_

worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy… worthy…

LV 2

Naufal_aceh

how many flaws are there, for example the aura(rwby) itself produces the name "Semblance", that's just one of the mistakes in the novel. Wnwdnnsndnsnssnsnnsdndnnsnsnwwnjssnjajsaj

LV 4

DaoistOfeOTA

Mc turn into a woman and the oc female lead unsurprisingly is terrible and ruins story

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Meta0202

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LV 14

Asuku

This fanfic is relatively decent but if there's one problem that had to be mentioned that is the author is way too fixated on childhood friend being in the part of harem. The childhood friend up to 300+ chapter can only be described as annoying and plain pointless that alot of people dropped reading it and the worse part is the author think giving the childhood friend an extremely op ability is gonna make her likable.... For people that dislike annoying and pointless forced romance with childhood friend, you should avoid it.