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Chương 164: Chapter 163 - Lumenarchy 03.

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[Chapter Size: 2100 Words.]

Third Person POV

Lumenarchy , First Half of Grandline.

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As human slaves were brought onto the stage, the auctioneer, with a voice echoing authority and greed, announced each of the slaves, describing them as if they were mere commodities.

The first to be presented were men and women of various ages and nationalities. Some seemed to have been fishermen or rural workers, captured and forced into a terrible fate. Others looked like people who had already lost all hope, their gazes empty and resigned.

Bids started to be made, with values varying, but quickly reaching exorbitant figures. The bids for these male human beings reached up to 2 million berries among the strongest.

Nami, whose own history was stained by slavery and loss, felt each bid as a personal blow. "How can they treat people this way?" she wondered in a low voice, her expression a mix of anger and sadness.

"This is so cruel…" Shirahoshi commented, frightened.

The crew represented freedom at sea, seeing such a scene was abominable to him.

As the auction continued, an even more disturbing situation unfolded. Semi-nude women were brought onto the stage, displayed in a degrading manner before the ravenous crowd of buyers. These women, some young and others older, were presented with a vulgarity that only served to accentuate the obscenity of the event.

The auctioneers described each woman lasciviously, highlighting their physical characteristics and suggesting indecent uses for them. Bids for these women started high and quickly escalated, with some reaching the figure of 5 million berries. It was a scene that distilled the purest form of exploitation and dehumanization.

"This is sick," Luffy said aloud, unable to hide his disgust.

"Do we still have to watch all of this?" Vivi complained, not appreciating any of what she witnessed.

Hugo, whose past was also marked by slavery, felt a wave of overwhelming anger. His fists were clenched so tightly that rocks began to form from his akuma no mi power.

Luffy turned to his companion. "Calm down, Hugo. We'll sort this out, but we can't lose our heads," he said in a low but firm tone, trying to calm his companion.

Many other crew members had distastes, some looked indifferent, but the gleam in their eyes said it wasn't a scene appreciated, Chopper and Vivi almost cried seeing this.

At the height of the tension in the VIP room, an unexpected moment interrupted the growing indignation of the Straw Hat crew. The doors opened and the king of Lumenarchy, who they saw on the posters, entered, his imposing presence and prominent nose immediately drawing attention. He approached Luffy with a diplomatic smile, but his eyes betrayed a hidden urgency. Luffy looked at him indifferently, wondering what that guy was doing invading his crew's space without asking if he was welcome or not, whether a king or not.

Soon his guards entered with him, and the auction manager stood by his side. "Excellency Monkey D. Luffy, this is King Javier Lumen VII of Lumenarchy ," the manager said, "We're here because a very important guest from the underworld wishes to speak with you. He's known as Joker," the king suddenly announced, watching the Straw Hat captain's reaction closely.

Luffy, who was indifferent, not liking the approach, narrowed his eyes upon hearing the name. He knew exactly who this "Joker" was - Doflamingo, one of the Shichibukai and a notorious figure in the new world. A member of the crew frowned at that moment, Lami, clenching her fist, as this was someone she wanted to kill.

"Joker, huh? Seems like he's interested in us," Luffy murmured, his casual tone hiding the strategic calculation in his mind. He knew that any involvement with Doflamingo could lead to complications, but it was also an opportunity to state his position regarding the current king of Dressrosa.

Lami approached Luffy and whispered, "Be careful, Luffy. Doflamingo isn't someone to be trifled with. He's dangerous and unpredictable."

The king, sensing the tension in the air, tried to ease the situation. "Don't worry, he just wants to talk. It will be in a safe place."

Luffy nodded slowly, his mind already working on different scenarios. "Alright, let's see what he wants," he said, stepping forward. The VIP room of the auction fell into silence as Luffy answered the den den mushi. All eyes were on him, curiosity in the air. The king of Lumenarchy handed the transmitter to Luffy, who didn't hesitate to answer it.

*Katcha*

On the other side of the line, Doflamingo greeted Luffy with his characteristic laugh and honeyed voice. "Fufufufu. Monkey D. Luffy, it's a pleasure to finally speak with you."

Luffy, without any trace of hesitation and with a provocative smile, responded immediately, already angry from those slaves: "Hello Joker, it's a surprise for me to be talking to you here, since it's not every day we talk to Kaido's dog." The room, already steeped in silence, seemed to freeze even more. The crew members exchanged surprised and nervous glances, while the king of Lumenarchy swallowed hard, not expecting this development.

Doflamingo, on the other side of the line, maintained his composure, but the tone of his voice revealed a slight trace of surprise and irritation. "You're more audacious than I imagined, mugiwara. But be careful, insolence can cost you dearly."

Luffy, unperturbed, kept his smile. "I'm just telling the truth. So, Joker, what do you want?"

"... First answer me, how do you know about my involvement with Kaido?" His voice remained as annoying as ever.

"Well, I'm not going to tell you and fuck what you think about it." Luffy spoke, leaving both the king and the manager stunned by Luffy's audacity.

The voice of Doflamingo, transmitted through the den den mushi, took on a threatening tone, marked by a chill. "I wanted to negotiate some things with you, Mugiwara. But you have no idea who you're dealing with. Underestimating me and the forces behind me will be your biggest mistake."

Luffy, defiant and fearless, didn't miss the chance to mock Doflamingo. With an ironic smile, he replied: "Ah, I'm trembling... Not. You're just another Shichibukai, and I've dealt with them before."

"I'll give you one more chance, hand over Trafalgar D. Lami from your crew and I can save you from your imminent destruction," Joker spoke with a tone of anger and demand.

"Do you talk such nonsense there in Dressrosa? How did you become a king like that? Demanding one of my crewmates is the same as asking to die, are you wanting that so much, Doflamingo?"

The room remained silent, the crew members watching the interaction, alternating between tension and admiration for Luffy's audacity. Luffy's provocation clearly irritated Doflamingo, but he maintained control, responding with a cold and calculating voice.

"Be careful, Luffy. My patience has limits. Don't provoke a sleeping dragon."

Luffy shrugged, unconcerned. "Dragon or not, I don't care. I was here to have fun, but then I saw your living items in the hall and the audacity of this king and the manager to invade the space where me and my crew were, so I'm not in a good mood anymore." This left the men who were not from the crew quite nervous about their mistake.

"I could save you, but I see that you are just an arrogant kid, your time is running out and the one you said is my master has already sent forces to hunt you in this sea," Doflamingo mocked.

"I see... That should be expected." Luffy understood what Doflamingo meant by that, after all, Yamato is in his crew, and her image in the newspaper and on the wanted posters would reach Kaido one way or another. He was always aware that he would be hunted.

"Joker or Doflamingo, I should thank you for this information, Kaido couldn't come to this sea without bringing a fleet, which would take a lot of time, King is essential to be with Kaido, Queen wouldn't leave the new world so easily, so the person who is pursuing us must be Jack, the drought or some members of the flying six," Luffy commented calmly.

"That old bastard, I'll beat him when I get to Wano!" Yamato exclaimed furiously in the background.

"Yamato's father is Kaido?!" Vivi exclaimed in shock, as she still didn't know this fact, just like Robin who looked shocked at the woman dressed in Wano's attire.

Luffy turned back to the den den mushi and began to laugh when he saw a silence from Doflamingo. He started to laugh openly at the prospect of facing such a formidable opponent, Luffy expressed his excitement for the imminent hunt. "So, Jack is after us? This is going to be interesting!" he said, without a hint of fear or hesitation.

On the other side of the line, Doflamingo frowned, realizing that Luffy was not an ordinary pirate. Luffy's lack of fear and his willingness to face the forces of Kaido, one of the most feared names in the world as if it were an adventure, was disconcerting even to him. Doflamingo, well aware of Kaido's ferocity and his subordinates, was impressed and even a bit disturbed by Luffy's courage.

Luffy spoke again into the silent communication device with Joker's face. "So, Joker, since we're enemies, it's okay if I loot this auction house, right? You won't mind that?"

On the other side of the line, Doflamingo visibly gets irritated with Luffy's audacity. "If you dare to do this, Mugiwara, I swear you will pay dearly! Don't underestimate what I can do!" Doflamingo threatens, his voice laden with fury and authority.

Luffy, however, doesn't seem the least bit intimidated by the threat. With an even wider smile, he responds in a challenging tone: "I'm looking forward to seeing what you can do, Joker. You won't be the first Shichibukai I take down." And, with a carefree click, Luffy hangs up the Den Den Mushi, cutting off the connection abruptly.

The room, which was in tense silence, Luffy looks at the king and the manager, openly disturbed, and speaks with his arms crossed, "Well, folks, it looks like we have a looting party ahead!"

Many crew members, initially shocked by Luffy's audacity in challenging Doflamingo and even Kaido, soon follow with a sharp look. They prepare for what promises to be an exciting night at the auction house, ready to follow their captain into yet another audacious raid and end these slavers.

Luffy, with a confident and challenging smile, breaks the glass, drawing everyone's attention while they were bidding on a frightened, crying girl on the stage, and announces, loud and clear, not just to his crew, but to the entire auction house: "Everyone, listen up! Now, we, the Straw Hat Pirates, are going to start a raid! We're going to steal everything and everyone present here! So please behave while we're robbing all of you."

His statement echoes through the hall, causing a mix of shock and panic among those present. And with the charged atmosphere, the Straw Hat crew prepares for the inevitable confrontation. Zoro, with a determined look, adjusts his swords, while Usopp, though nervous, seems ready for battle. Hugo, still containing his anger, positions himself strategically, ready to use his power and physical strength to protect his comrades and the oppressed. Nami looks around, her expression reflecting a mix of anger and determination in the face of the injustice of the slaves. Bepo, Hachi, and Kuina quickly face off against the king's guards. Lami looks at Luffy with some admiration for defending her and prepares her sword while opening her room.

Chopper, in his human form, seems ready to offer combat support. His eyes show a mix of determination with Luffy's words. Alvida, with her confident smile and mace in hand, is ready to face any challenge. Nojiko, standing next to her sister Nami, keeps a serious expression, her fists seeming ready to explode at any moment.

Shirahoshi, still frightened, keeps her gaze fixed on Luffy, showing admiration and trust. Vivi and Robin exchange understanding glances, knowing the time to act had come. Reiju, as elegant as ever, displays a confident smile, prepared for what's to come while taking a cigarette out of her pocket. Yamato moves to Luffy's side. The giants Broggy and Dorry seem very excited as they talk to each other. The crew is finally ready to act.

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Chương 165: Chapter 164 - Lumenarchy 04.

[Chapter Size: 2000 Words.]

Third Person POV

Lumenarchy, First Half of Grandline.

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As the turmoil takes over the auction, the Straw Hat Pirates spring into action, ready to unleash chaos. "Yamato." Luffy, with a determined look, calls for Yamato, who promptly responds with a smile. With mutual understanding, they both release their King's Haki auras, a wave of power that spreads through the place.

Immediately, guards and nobles, as well as the criminals present, succumb to the overwhelming power of the King's Haki, falling unconscious one after another. The room, once filled with voices and agitation, is now dominated by a muffled silence, interrupted only by the moans of the faint.

King Javier Lumen VII of Lumenarchy remains conscious, but clearly stunned and terrified by the power displayed by Luffy and Yamato. "What's going on?!" he exclaims, his voice trembling with fear and confusion.

Luffy approaches the king with a mischievous smile, revealing his plan. "Don't worry, king. You need to stay conscious to guide us in this auction," he says in a playful tone, but with a menacing glint in his eyes.

Javier Lumen VII, realizing the seriousness of the situation, quickly responds, fear evident in his voice. "What do you plan to do?!"

With a sinister smile, Luffy replies, "You're going to obey us. I've killed a king before, so you better cooperate if you want to get out of here alive. Don't worry, I only kill kings who annoy me."

The king's immediate response is pure fear and submission. "Yes, I'll do anything!" he agrees promptly, aware of the fate that awaits him if he challenges the notorious pirate. The atmosphere in the room is now a mix of tension and expectation, with the Straw Hats in control.

Luffy then turns to his crew, distributing tasks efficiently. "Hugo, you and the others free all the slaves. Leave no one behind," he orders, his serious tone indicating the gravity of the situation.

"Lami, use your Room to collect all the jewels and valuable items. I want you to clean this place out," Luffy continues, looking at Lami, who nods and begins to execute his task with surgical precision.

"Nami, you're in charge of organizing and counting all the gold. Make sure nothing is left behind," Luffy says, knowing that Nami is the best suited for the task.

Luffy then

addresses his fighters. "Zoro, Usopp, Reiju, Kuina, you four, defend the entrance. No one gets in, no one gets out, until we're done here," Luffy instructs.

"And Yamato, you're coming with me. We need the king to guide us to the vault," Luffy concludes, giving a meaningful look to Yamato, who nods in understanding.

Yamato, with his imposing stature and Wano attire, follows alongside Luffy. The king, visibly nervous, leads the way, guiding them through the auction's corridors towards the vault.

Outside the auction, a group of soldiers is on high alert, aware of the chaos unfolding inside.

"The Straw Hat Pirates have taken over the auction house and are holding hostages inside!" shouts one of the soldiers, his voice laden with urgency.

"We can't just stand here! We have to act now!" exclaims another, looking around frantically.

"Damn, how can we face pirates of this caliber?" questions a third, anxiety evident on his face.

"Someone call for Marine reinforcements, quick!" demands a fourth soldier, knowing that only they could handle a threat of this level.

Meanwhile, an observer points towards the entrance of the auction house. "Look, people are coming out!"

It's a group of four - two men and two women - clearly recognized as members of the Straw Hats. Zoro, with an expression of slight disappointment, comments: "Looks like we're facing just soldiers and guards after all."

"Don't complain, Zoro. Our job is to keep anyone from getting in," responds Usopp, already preparing his peculiar arsenal.

Meanwhile, inside the auction, Luffy whistled, impressed with the reinforced structure he found. "Wow, this is really impressive," he said, assessing the robust vault door.

Yamato, by his side, looked at Luffy with an amused expression. "Do you have a plan to open this, Luffy?" she asked.

Luffy, with a mischievous glint in his eyes, replied, "Of course I do! Let's show them how the Straw Hats do a heist!" He then turned to the trembling king. "And you, king, you know how to open this, don't you?"

"No, your excellency Mugiwara, only a few men of Joker have access to this, and they are not present," he said almost pleadingly, and Luffy saw at least sincerity in that.

"I see. Yamato, let's blow this door up!" He said and went to the door with his girl to punch it.

The king watched stunned as Luffy and Yamato punched the door, Luffy with increased strength and Yamato with haki. In no time, the door caved in with force, pushed by both their strengths, and the place filled with gold and berries quickly appeared to them.

Luffy wasted no time and took all the gold for the system, leaving the king stunned as the gold and money disappeared from his sight.

"Let's go, we have more things to steal." Luffy and Yamato moved on without paying any more attention to the king and went to meet the others at the auction stage.

All the slaves were freed, many with explosive collars, but getting the keys was quite easy since there was no one to stop them inside.

Everyone looked gratefully at the crew, and Luffy approached the piles of gold Nami was counting.

"Let's go, this gold I won't put in the system, keep it for yourselves to divide, later." Luffy said, and Nami quickly rejoiced, after everything was ready, they began to leave the

auction with the ex-slaves, and Luffy encountered almost all of the kingdom's soldiers fallen due to the fight by Reiju, Kuina, Zoro, and Usopp.

Upon leaving the auction house, Luffy addressed King Javier Lumen VII of Lumenarchy, who was still trembling with fear and uncertainty. "Your Majesty," Luffy called, his voice firm and full of authority. The king, with a nervous nod, responded: "Yes-Yes, what do you wish?"

Luffy, looking around the bright and sparkling island, declared confidently with a smile: "I'm leaving, but I'm charmed by this island. I've decided I want it as my territory. I'll be back soon to claim it, taking it from Joker's clutches."

The king, still trying to process the situation, couldn't hide his surprise. "But... what do you mean? This is Joker's territory, you can't just..."

Before he could finish, Vivi interrupted, her expression a mix of curiosity and concern. "Luffy, weren't you going to steal the island's crystal? Why did you change your mind?"

Luffy, with a carefree shrug, replied: "Initially, yes, but then I thought better of it. This island is much more valuable than just its crystal. I'll leave the crystal here for now. It'll be more interesting to conquer the entire island."

Meanwhile, at the port: *BOOOOOOOMMMM!*

The booming explosion at the port reverberated through the air, drawing everyone's attention. In a desperate act, the soldiers tried to capture the Straw Hat Pirates' ship to negotiate the release of the hostages. However, they were greeted by a frightening sight - a colossal three-headed monster emerging from the Black Pearl, spewing furious flames upon them. The resulting explosion echoed across the island, casting a mantle of fear over all present.

"Run! A monster!" the soldiers screamed in panic, as they vainly tried to protect themselves from the relentless fire.

Luffy, watching the scene from afar, couldn't help but smile amusedly. "Looks like Chouchou is really having fun," he commented. Panic and chaos ensued among the soldiers, each seeking shelter from the imminent threat.

The entire town was in chaos, realizing that no one could stop the pirate crew. Beside Luffy, Shirahoshi looked sadly at the island of Lumenarchy, her eyes filled with admiration for its beauty. "Are we leaving already, Luffy-Sama? The island is so beautiful..." she lamented, her soft voice reflecting her sadness at leaving such a place.

Luffy, with a confident look, assured the mermaid princess: "Don't worry, Shira. This island will be ours, and you can enjoy it as much as you want when we come back." He already considered this place his, wanting to take it from Joker's hands.

As the Straw Hat crew approached the Black Pearl, Chouchou continued to repel anyone who tried to approach the ship. Luffy, using his King's Haki aura, caused the remaining soldiers at the port to fall unconscious, ensuring a safe departure for his crew.

With an excited look, Luffy announced the crew's next destination. "Let's go, we have an interesting place to go to - it's called Sky Island!" The statement aroused surprise and curiosity among the crew members, who exchanged questioning glances. But without time to ask, everyone started boarding while Luffy took a miniature ship from his safe for the ex-slaves who followed him to the port.

Thus, the Black Pearl set off from Lumenarchy towards Jaya as Luffy instructed Nami. The freed and grateful slaves entered a second ship that was towed by the Black Pearl, which was the ship Luffy took from the Goa kingdom and thought to use here until he saw what he would do with those people.

While all the chaos was happening that night, in another part of the sea, crossing the red line, there was a country that everyone said was the country of fairies, where love infects all its population, and in a palace on a huge mountain, the atmosphere did not seem to represent the country. 

This country is Dressrosa, and on its opulent and imposing throne, Doflamingo sits enveloped in anger and irritation. His normally controlled and malicious expression is now marked by untamable fury. He had already heard of Luffy's looting in Lumenarchy, and each word about the chaos unleashed by the Straw Hat only increases his discontent after losing the slaves and the auction treasure that he had not taken for 2 months and was scheduled to take the gold the following week.

"That Mugiwara will pay for every act of insolence," Doflamingo growled, his teeth grinding in fury. Viola, watching from a safe distance, couldn't help but be stunned. She had never seen Doflamingo so furious; she had never seen anyone stand up to Doflamingo; she thought no one was bold enough for that, but this Monkey D. Luffy didn't even care if Doflamingo had connections with Kaido. 

"He thinks he can challenge my power and get away with it? I will show him the true power of a Shichibukai. He's full of himself just because he defeated Crocodile and Jimbei. Does he not fear Kaido or Jack? I won't even let Jack get to him first!" Doflamingo declared, his voice laden with a deadly threat. He stood up, his posture exuding authority and danger. "I'm heading to the beginning of the Grand Line. I will take care of this insolent pirate myself."

Viola observed, her heart racing, wondering what would happen, while other members of Doflamingo's crew asked if they could accompany him. However, Doflamingo said he didn't need them. Doflamingo walked to the palace window and jumped out, casting his strings towards the clouds and pulling himself to fly through the sky towards the first half of the Grand Line.

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