The Senju Shinobi

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Jad_Assaad

honestly the story seems pretty promising, I wish they’d hurry up the plot a bit but it does seem to be a good story. The story is pretty well-written, and the mc has character growth and author mentions he won’t become mind-blowingly OP, which I like. Overall 5/5, recommend a try at the very least 🔥🔥

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Jad_Assaad

Author’s writing is getting better and better. In the beginning the plot moved a little slow, but it starts picking up speed. MC is smart, calm, and hard working, and also friendly. He’s also realistic and accepts the fact that he’s a shinobi now. All in all, a terrific naruto fanfic to read

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TTT_HHHl

more chapters, more chapters, more chapters. this fanfiction is awesome more chapters, more chapters, more chapters. this fanfiction is awesome more chapters, more chapters, more chapters. this fanfiction is awesome

LV 3

sokk

Pretty decent story so far. Good mc with a head on his shoulders and not an edgy teen. So yeah 4/5 the only thing to nitpick about is the writing quality but that's to be expected from an amateur author its still leagues ahead of the trash here tho

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Taragorm

Well worth a read, well written shame it went in a direction I found unsatisfying. But thats only my opinion I dropped but I encourage others to read good fanfic.

The story is pretty good as of now mc is smart and sensible plot is detailed and not rushed characters don’t seem different from their og. Overall a very good story that I’d definitely recommend reading

LV 4

Bob_Kizmet_5542

Hello everyone, this is the author. I want to say that the fanfic starts a little rough, but I’d like to believe the quality picks up the more you read on. I’m trying to make his power acquisition realistic, and I hope you know I research most of the stuff I write so it’s somewhat canon. Though I do have to make some assumptions of my own. Anyway, I really hope you enjoy, and please rate it whatever you think it deserves.

LV 5

whitedevil

A rather typical opening of a fic in naruto world with a slow-burning start but quickly picks up its pace rather well. The progression of the main character keeps you well invested enough to continue to see it through his ideal, views and choices are rather humble and ground different yet typical. Overall a well and good fic with a decent mc trying to figure out what the wants and his ideals. a well worth read. definetly give a try and only form opinions after atleast 10 chaps. keep up the good ork aurthor.

LV 4

_The_Shady_

one word to describe this fanfic- "Great".

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Lucifer951

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DetachedDreamer

I know fanfics made these idiots hate the 3rd hokage, like this author is portraying but man he made all his friends give up on him too. Gag!

LV 4

Zero_Speed

the writing quality is great but sadly your story doesn't have anything interesting happen, I understand that it's slow paced but without something to catch the attention then the story is just word soup, my suggestion it's to give the mc something to focus on that will catch the readers attention like going into detail about his chakra scene or him going to the library to find out ways to get stronger because he is in Naruto, anything that will make your character stand out because he is the MC you want him to feel like it because right now it feels like he's a side character with lots of screen time ( chapter 21)

LV 1

Rizki_Caturianto

It's a really great Naruto fanfictions!! I love how MC (Aizen) not strong from start, and how he's like jack of all trade... It's a shame that he's so naive to think that Hokage will protect him from Danzo, so he's kidnapped now.. It's make my interest down because he's join root now (even if he gain power, but I think he still can gain more power without join root).. But, it still a great story.. 😁👍👍👍

LV 14

Vinay85

Good Quality of writing and story. The author really keep the canon character "canon". Can't wait for more updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Zetso

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kovaksens

Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.Good.

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DaoistZlQoLq

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Aizen_Myo

La historia es para mi gusto subjetivamente aburrida, esta pésimamente narrada para ser en primera persona y de ritmo lento, si te gustan las novelas en tercera persona, con un narrador aquí no lo vas a encontrar, si te gustan los monólogos esta es tu historia.

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Josefs012

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Celectra

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