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Legends foretold, the spark of light

Fallen from the heavens to bring delight

Those who follow in her goddess's light

Shall be brought to lands that heavens compare

Darkness however knows they won't fare

Against this gracious sunbeam's shimmering might

Snuff this ember before ruin is brought upon the dark



Go forth, my faithful beast of darkness!

Engulf the spark before it destroys us all!



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One of heart, one of mind, one wish that made the heavens open their pearly gates. A miracle, born to lead the world into a new age of peace for the light elves. Unfortunately, that would mean the end for the dark elves. The crimes of their ancestors were pushed down through generations.


The new age of peace has no place for half-demons, someone must put an end to the newborn Messiah.



Unfortunately for Philomel, this death sentence of a mission was pushed to her, courtesy of the Chief's son, Asclepius. Asclepius, an ambitious, short-sighted dark elf, determined to bring the dark elves to their former glory. A person Philomel made the mistake of pissing off. Dragging along the oblivious entrance guard, (Amon) they begin their emotional rollercoaster of a journey.



Daggers in hands, can they become the villains their tribe so badly needs, or will the guilt finally drag them under?



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A voice bellowed and screeched from all around him. It sounded like a million cries through the echoes of a cave, that shrieked as it spoke. The shadows reach out toward the blood-red sky, forming a huge dark figure, the figure of a roaring dragon. Its eyes shine through all the darkness, one a brilliant blue, the other a golden yellow, slits of black in the middle, when the dragon blinks, it blinks sideways. From the corner of the eyes to the other corner, rather than one eyelid to the other.



" Was anything but pleasant."

The distorted voice of his father reminded him as the dragon stomped around. Each stomp crushed the homes of many and killed screaming villages.

" Is this what you wish for? Is this what your heart desires?"

The disfigured voice questioned.
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" I win."

Philomel smugly whispers to Lenny. Completely pleased with herself before noticing Lenny's heart rate beating against her own, matching her speed but was off her pace. It felt like her heart was pounding at an unnatural speed which felt scary but at the same time interesting. She barely noticed Lenny's hazel eyes sparkling as his shocked expression slowly melts into a blissful goofy smile.

Her attention finally returned to Lenny when his chiseled jawline moved closer to her. Lenny's head leans forward kissing Philomel on the cheek as he stares at her with such soft eyes.

Philomel instantly blushes as she gasps at the sudden kiss. Her lips trembling trying to think of something to say but her brain malfunctioned. Lenny let out a deep chuckle as he ran a hand through his mahogany chestnut brown hair, extremely happy at Philomel's cute reaction.
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There will be romance but it would be slow-paced since it's friends to lovers. No smut scenes. There will be battles and tons of emotional trauma. Super in the middle can go both ways.

This book is experimental writing.

It shall be written in script format, detailed, and have a rhythmic beat/freestyle poem to certain scenery descriptions.

The story shall also have switched target audience, where certain chapters are tailored to male/ female readers. There will be a notice to inform which chapters are which.

Female Tailored Chapters (FTC) will have more cute scenes between characters.

Male Tailored Chapters (MTC) will have battle based on the Dungeon and Dragon format where the victory or defeat of a match is based on a dice roll.


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Hansa1329

Nice story. Keep up the good work. First few chapters made me intrigued and waiting for the updates. Fantasy romance is my favourite genre and this is the first time I am reading a story about elves which is totally worth it..👍

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Metztli_Night

Chapter 20 seems like a good time to do a shameless review by me the author. So far the my writing skills are able to roughly convey each chapter's theme. The plotline and ending has already been roughly written, just have to write the actual scenes out and figure out the side characters backstories. Oh, right. FYI I'm obsessed with the colour blue. Good luck with that. Those who also love the colour. Hi five!

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Rosmu
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I like that these movements and descriptions in over all 'paint the clear picture'. It's easy enough to follow. 😊 And this story has descriptions of many things: Sights, feelings, thoughts, inner demons, having a hard time with own morals because of a situation at the hand. Sometimes offering descriptions even about things that would otherwise be 'obvious' for most of people. Like the feeling of greenery, an oasis, how someone might view these things when seeing them for a first time. There's a good amount of comical moments as well. So far loving the humor. 🤣 Also, I can't help but notice that at those parts in which Amon interacts with the baby... And how the baby acts. It seems like it's done with great perception, very much like it could be from real life-like moments. 😊 Big + for that! They're so heartwarming! I've a feeling that author has the very least some sort of experience of babies. 😄

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Zoro_Heart

This is nice, it was well written, the explanation of the background was nice too. The plot was interesting. The storytelling was great. Keep it up.

2yr
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Gabriella_Santiago_5325

Definitely a good read. Got me hooked to my seat from the first chapter. Not going to lie, author has a very good storytelling abilities.[img=recommend]

2yr
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Leids7

This is one of beautiful story, I think, yeah. With a very precise and perfect explanation, as well as a very cool plot and so on. Well, I like it, really

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steph_pesi

Though it was short, which was perfect for me to have a good head start I really loved it. The detailed description, the action and how you were able to make your world and names up which I'd not easy in fantasy. You have a good work and I hope it gets the recognition it deserves.

2yr
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Vivien_Phon

The plot is dramatic and unique. Easy to be swept up in the emotions and scenes. The characters are very sweet and cute. It's developing well with time and the writing style has a beat and rhyme to it in certain parts like reading the Lorax. Hope to be reading more from you!

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William_Lam_2445

Interesting story and a great way to build up the world. The characters are well written and you can feel the emotions of the characters clearly through their dialogue and actions. I look forward to the progression of the story as the world gets larger and more secrets are revealed.

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Byron_5683

beautiful story ,the plot and the details of the story was just perfect. Very interesting story that draws the reader within just the first chapter through its description and slightly rhythm way of writing. Love how the character interact with each other and can't wait for more chapters.

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Sorane

Truly an amazing story! The story flow is admirable and the characters are diverse. What i liked the most about this story is that the conversations are easy to understand and i can imagine the scenes in my head as if im watching a movie. I great novel to be precise! Want more chapters[img=update][img=update]

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CHVA2001

it was nice and the background is also and plot is also interesting 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Âm lượng 1

  1. 1
    V5 Chapter 1 A Goddess's Miracle 2 years ago
  2. 2
    V5 Chapter 2 Crimtroy - Dark Elves Haven 2 years ago
  3. 3
    V5 Chapter 3 Uncomfortable Events 2 years ago
  4. 4
    V5 Chapter 4 Council of the Elders 2 years ago
  5. 5
    V5 Chapter 5 Fallen Quest 2 years ago
  6. 6
    V5 Chapter 6 Determination 2 years ago
  7. 7
    V5 Chapter 7 Luxtorious 2 years ago
  8. 8
    V5 Chapter 8 Keep Up 2 years ago
  9. 9
    V5 Chapter 9 Which One? 2 years ago
  10. 10
    V5 Chapter 10 Utter Torment 2 years ago
  11. 11
    V5 Chapter 11 Beast of Darkness... can you? 2 years ago
  12. 12
    V5 Chapter 12 Rat Way Out 2 years ago
  13. 13
    V5 Chapter 13 Villain Path?! (Awww Man) 2 years ago
  14. 14
    V5 Chapter 14 Light elf Vs ... Light elf? 2 years ago
  15. 15
    V5 Chapter 15 Strange people 2 years ago
  16. 16
    V5 Chapter 16 Villainous Thieves? 2 years ago
  17. 17
    V5 Chapter 17 Partnership 2 years ago
  18. 18
    V5 Chapter 18 Infant Care (Oh No! It's crying do something!) 2 years ago
  19. 19
    V5 Chapter 19 Infant Care (That doesn't seem right ) 2 years ago
  20. 20
    V5 Chapter 20 Beggar's Hole (What a dump) 2 years ago
  21. 21
    V5 Chapter 21 Nervous Hyenas 2 years ago
  22. 22
    V5 Chapter 22 Shaman's Fee (Disease is a Disease) 2 years ago
  23. 23
    V5 Chapter 23 Oh! Gods! Help Me! 2 years ago
  24. 24
    V5 Chapter 24 Genius explanation 2 years ago
  25. 25
    V5 Chapter 25 When did I agree to this?? 2 years ago
  26. 26
    V5 Chapter 26 Mascot Baby At It Again 2 years ago
  27. 27
    V5 Chapter 27 Baby Night Shift 1/2 2 years ago
  28. 28
    V5 Chapter 28 Baby Night Shift 2/2 2 years ago
  29. 29
    V5 Chapter 29 Depths behind blue eyes 1/2 2 years ago
  30. 30
    V5 Chapter 30 Depths behind blue eyes 2/2 2 years ago
  31. 31
    V5 Chapter 31 Do you dream? 1/2 2 years ago
  32. 32
    V5 Chapter 32 Do you dream? 2/2 2 years ago
  33. 33
    V5 Chapter 33 Parent Wish List 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 34 Parent Wish List 2/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 35 Master Thief Strikes Again 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 36 Master Thief Strikes Again 2/2 2 years ago
  37. 37
    V5 Chapter 37 Daycare 1/2 (FTC) 2 years ago
  38. 38
    V5 Chapter 38 Daycare 2/2 (FTC) 2 years ago
  39. 39
    V5 Chapter 39 Friends ? 1/2 (FTC) 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 40 Friends ? 2/2 (FTC) 2 years ago
  41. 41
    V5 Chapter 41 Kingdom Wars 1/2 (FTC) 2 years ago
  42. 42
    V5 Chapter 42 Kingdom Wars 2/2 (FTC) 2 years ago
  43. 43
    V5 Chapter 43 Linked Emotions 1/2 (FTC) 2 years ago
  44. 44
    V5 Chapter 44 Linked Emotions 2/2 (FTC) 2 years ago
  45. 45
    V5 Chapter 45 Desperation 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 46 Desperation 2/2 2 years ago
  47. 47
    V5 Chapter 47 Touched by Evil 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 48 Touched by Evil 2/2 2 years ago
  49. 49
    V5 Chapter 49 Silver Lining 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 50 Silver Lining 2/2 2 years ago
  51. 51
    V5 Chapter 51 Laidback 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 52 Laidback 2/2 2 years ago
  53. 53
    V5 Chapter 53 Caught up 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 54 Caught up 2/2 2 years ago
  55. 55
    V5 Chapter 55 Types of bonds 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 56 Types of bonds 2/2 2 years ago
  57. 57
    V5 Chapter 57 Farewell Little One 1/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 58 Farewell Little One 2/2 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 59 Shadow Territory 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 60 Bye Inner Demon 2 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 61 Abandoned Dwarf Mines 2 years ago
  62. 62
    V5 Chapter 62 The Right Path (MTC) 1 years ago
  63. 63
    V5 Chapter 63 Bulette (MTC) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 64 Lost way (MTC) 1 years ago
  65. 65
    V5 Chapter 65 A … door? (MTC) 1 years ago
  66. 66
    V5 Chapter 66 Good Trade (MTC) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 67 Am I dead? (MTC) 1 years ago
  68. 68
    V5 Chapter DS Fate Bureaucracy 1/2 (Deleted Scene) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter DS Fate Bureaucracy 2/2 (Deleted Scene) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 68 Close one! 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 69 Yes! I am the greatest! 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 70 Naughty Children 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 71 Love Letter? 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 72 Bribe 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 73 Please Wait 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 74 Death just around the corner 1 years ago
  77. 77
    V5 Chapter 75 It was the corner behind (MTC) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 76 Trap like a rat *Squeak* *Squeak* *Squeak* (MTC) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 77 Sharp Item Detector 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 78 Out of the pan, into the fire 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 79 Freed but still trapped 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 80 Time ticking out 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 81 Sreeeeeeekkkk 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 82 Hang on Apartment! 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 83 Village Holden 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 84 Death Bed?! 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 85 Darzirak's Tenant Agreement 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 86 Tenancy Chains 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 87 Team Wailing Swift Breeze 1/5 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 88 Team Wailing Swift Breeze 2/5 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 89 Team Wailing Swift Breeze 3/5 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 90 Team Wailing Swift Breeze 4/5 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 91 Team Wailing Swift Breeze 5/5 (FTC) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 92 Breaking In 1/2 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 93 Breaking In 2/2 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 94 Master Thieve At work 1/5 (MTC) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 95 Master Thieve At work 2/5 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 96 Master Thieve At work 3/5 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 97 Master Thieve At work 4/5 (MTC) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 98 Master Thieve At work 5/5 1 years ago
  101. 101
    V5 Chapter 99 Relaxation Finally 1 years ago
  102. 102
    V5 Chapter 100 Glad you're alright 1 years ago
  103. 103
    V5 Chapter 101 Recap (1/3) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 102 Recap (2/3) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 103 Recap (3/3) 1 years ago
  106. 106
    V5 Chapter 104 What the hel..met! Darzirak?! 1 years ago
  107. 107
    V5C105 (Hidden Scene C81) Darzirak's Freedom 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter 106 Revolution Summary 1 years ago
  109. 109
    V5 Chapter 107 Sleep Trauma 1/2 1 years ago
  110. 110
    V5 Chapter 108 Sleep Trauma 2/2 1 years ago
  111. 111
    V5 Chapter 109 New Dawn 1 years ago
  112. 112
    V5 Chapter 110 Price of a Demon 1 years ago
  113. 113
    V5 Chapter 111 Darzirak must you? 1 years ago
  114. 114
    V5 Chapter 112 Wish upon a tear 1 years ago
  115. 115
    V5 Chapter 113 Under The Stars 1 years ago
  116. 116
    V5 Chapter 114 Creepy Forest 1 years ago
  117. 117
    V5 Chapter 115 Hidden Beauty 1 years ago
  118. 118
    V5 Chapter 116 The baby can do it?!! 1 years ago
  119. 119
    V5 Chapter 117 Joys of camping 1 years ago
  120. 120
    V5 Chapter 118 Naughty Thieves 1 years ago
  121. 121
    V5 Chapter 119 Nice of you to drop by 1 years ago
  122. 122
    V5 Chapter 120 Distraction 1 years ago
  123. 123
    V5 Chapter 121 Challenger 1 years ago
  124. 124
    V5 Chapter 122 Play Time 1 years ago
  125. 125
    V5 Chapter 123 Play Time Over 1 years ago
  126. 126
    V5C124 (Hidden Chapter) Shadow standing in your image 1 years ago
  127. 127
    V5 Chapter 124 Unconscious 1 years ago
  128. 128
    V5 Chapter 125 Broken Demon? 1 years ago
  129. 129
    V5 Chapter 126 Darzirak the human? 1 years ago
  130. 130
    V5 Chapter 127 Town Sharnwick 1 years ago
  131. 131
    V5 Chapter 128 Used Gift 1 years ago
  132. 132
    V5 Chapter 129 Same darkness 1 years ago
  133. 133
    V5 Chapter 130 Picky Little Baby 1 years ago
  134. 134
    V5 Chapter 131 Jealousy 1 years ago
  135. 135
    V5 Chapter 132 Impatient Mistakes 1 years ago
  136. 136
    V5 Chapter 133 Not Yours 1 years ago
  137. 137
    V5 Chapter Fate Recorder's Holiday 1/3 (Deleted Scene) 1 years ago
  138. 138
    V5 Chapter Fate Recorder's Holiday 2/3 (Deleted Scene) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter Fate Recorder's Holiday 3/3 (Deleted Scene) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter Fate Recorder's Quest 1/3 (Deleted Scene) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter Fate Recorder's Quest 2/3 (Deleted Scene) 1 years ago
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    V5 Chapter Fate Recorder's Quest 3/3 (Deleted Scene) 1 years ago
  143. 143
    V5 Chapter 134 Acceptance 1 years ago
  144. 144
    V5 Chapter 135 God so Awkward 1 years ago
  145. 145
    V5 Chapter 136 Why even bother? 1 years ago
  146. 146
    V5 Chapter 137 Leaky Catacombs 1 years ago
  147. 147
    V5 Chapter 138 Evolution of wolves 1/2 1 years ago
  148. 148
    V5 Chapter 139 Evolution of wolves 2/2 1 years ago
  149. 149
    V5 Chapter 140 Somewhat dry catacombs 1 years ago
  150. 150
    V5 Chapter 141 Squeaky Steps 1 years ago
  151. 151
    V5 Chapter 142 Side tracked 11 months ago
  152. 152
    V5 Chapter 143 Village Dalelry 10 months ago
  153. 153
    V5 Chapter 144 Good Guess Lad 10 months ago
  154. 154
    V5 Chapter 145 Toddler?! 10 months ago
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    V5 Chapter 146 Doctor 10 months ago
  156. 156
    V5 Chapter 147 Mysterious Knowledge 10 months ago
  157. 157
    V5 Chapter 148 Split Objectives 10 months ago
  158. 158
    V5 Chapter 149 Distance Forming 10 months ago
  159. 159
    V5 Chapter 150 Farming Quest? 10 months ago
  160. 160
    V5 Chapter 151 Recalled memory 10 months ago
  161. 161
    V5 Chapter 152 Truth of contact 10 months ago

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