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Need more chapters!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!!
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Definitely need more chapters!! Arggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue this story, it's very good and addicting!! Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!
chapters published from 8 months ago, and only 10 reviews? gotta admit this looks hella sketchy
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Story seems good however, it's really slow. I'll admit that the author is right right and that bell is op and that the mc is an average guy, but dang it still feels a bit slow. Hopefully he gains some development ability to help with this and his eyes. Because if he is apparently starting late as an adventure he needs all the help he can get.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
good story, slow but good development, MC isn't thinking only how to smash 💯 and MC uses his mind and works hard💯💯 worth reading
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"God gives me WISHES" story. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
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Chapter 2 so far. Pacing so far is good. Sharingan powers is kind of cliche. Mc is not op but not useless either. I like the more down to earth tone, always more world building is appreciated. Especially from perspective of avg adventurer.
é realmente muito bom, o autor mostrou como uma luta é feia,cheia de caos e desesperadora e tem um potencial tremendo mesmo. bom trabalho autor e obrigado pela sua obra.
Ideia irada, historia foda, com uma progressão de poder boa que não parece ser forçada para ser overpower. Continua escrevendo cara, você brilha muito. [img=recommend]
Need more chapters!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!! More!!
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Definitely need more chapters!! Arggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue this story, it's very good and addicting!! Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!Good work!!
chapters published from 8 months ago, and only 10 reviews? gotta admit this looks hella sketchy
Nice.........................................................................................................................................
Story seems good however, it's really slow. I'll admit that the author is right right and that bell is op and that the mc is an average guy, but dang it still feels a bit slow. Hopefully he gains some development ability to help with this and his eyes. Because if he is apparently starting late as an adventure he needs all the help he can get.
Tiết lộ Spoiler good story, slow but good development, MC isn't thinking only how to smash 💯 and MC uses his mind and works hard💯💯 worth reading
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"God gives me WISHES" story. ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
Chapter 2 so far. Pacing so far is good. Sharingan powers is kind of cliche. Mc is not op but not useless either. I like the more down to earth tone, always more world building is appreciated. Especially from perspective of avg adventurer.
é realmente muito bom, o autor mostrou como uma luta é feia,cheia de caos e desesperadora e tem um potencial tremendo mesmo. bom trabalho autor e obrigado pela sua obra.
Ideia irada, historia foda, com uma progressão de poder boa que não parece ser forçada para ser overpower. Continua escrevendo cara, você brilha muito. [img=recommend]