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There's a saying that Smart characters can only be as smart as the author and the author obviously has an iq lower than forest gump. also terrible structure and stuff, this IS a translation and I don't care what the author says, hes lying.
pretty good by the read of it . i liked it it was pretty good by the way to make a living room shortof which is unbreakable this is a God of the day no death but a lot of money to pay for the security of your house across the country didn't get any short of message was automatically generated by Gmail a new one of the day no problem at all
don't listen to these harsh comments I personally liked itthough sometimes it's illogical it's a good one if u ignore some of the storytelling
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All I can say confidently is that, this is the first marvel fic that is completed, I've ever finished reading all the way through.
First mc is if I dont know beter 9001% a chinese protagonist his wife finds out about his Reincarnation which is the rule no1 never tell that you are reincarnated.
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I am supposed to put more than 140 characters to be able to give my 5-star rating, to which if I am writing that and saying that I loved this story
All I can say is one of the best. Hoping to get a sequel out of it. Thanks for the Fan-Fic Author! Your truly- Addictive Reader!
So many twist and turns. I was always at the edge of my seat. good ending to wrap it all up. keep up the good work.
I have to admit I thought this was just gonna be like most other fic’s on this app. But I confess I was wrong it was actually a really fun story to read and although it’s not a 5* story it’s definitely up there. From character development to world building,interactions with characters and decently satisfying fight scenes I would say overall its makes a pretty good story to read. Good job author!!!
so I'm going to be brutally honest, going from monkey in the multiverse to this is a downgrade of the highest order, the jokes weren't the best nor was the writing and it just didn't flow as well in some spots
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Writing can be improved but overall it is readable. Updates well its completed so yea not many make it to the end, although the ending felt very forced.
FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!......................................................................., . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .................................
Quite good actually, this novel is for people who likes reading wholesome reads I guess with a pint of tragedy. Though basically no action even though it's marvel
I have to say I had expectations after your previous fic with hiro but you have utterly destroyed it, like i have never seen such a pathetic mc. Other than the obvious loser he is, he is really dumb. I think if you add in the synopsis that a retard people would accept him without hating on you. And I honestly prefer you kept him weak at least then it would explain how he loses everytime it matters but with all his powers youre telling me he cant win a fight then thats poor writing on your part.
How the mighty have fallen, I used to be a great fan of your stories, the characters while not perfect; were still fluid. In this novel though? Not so much sadly... From funny guy writing good stories to an angry moderator who cant take criticism. I used to look forward to your posts, but not anymore, to say I'm disappointed is barely scraping the surface of your newfound ignorance. If you wished to stay at the top, than you shouldn't have insulted fans, readers, and reviewers over criticism, constructive or not. They compare it to a chinese translation because everything feels forced and generic, where they find pleasure in such writing; the western audience (your main audience) does not enjoy stiff humanoids having stiff actions with stiff brains. And knowing your previous stories, I know that you like cultivation, but that doesnt mean you should take the writing styles as ques and inspiration, when the more experienced writers and readers of your main audience are opposed to the repetitive and almost robotic like nature of generic chinese story writing, even worse when it feels and sounds like a translation.
Impossible to read The protagonist is just too weak and stupid. I think it was meant to be funny but it just isn't that funny when the mc is a worthless clown.
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this story started out extremely rough i wanted to stop reading a while ago but the author went above and beyond this is an incredible story just have a little patience
I just began reading it, but only from the description I think it’s going to be a great read.
Monkey what happened you has such a hood thing going for you with the Hiro and Zerotwo fic and cobra kak
It's a quite good fanfictions!! 👍👍 Is a crossover MCU and DC I think.. I usually doesn't like much crossover fanfiction, but this fanfic is quite good, that I can't stop after I read it.. 😁😁 I see many doesn't like the first few chapter (actually I don't like it too), but it's better latter.. Overall I enjoy this story... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author sama.. 😁👍👍👍
Thank you author for writing this wonderfull fanfic. The concept is good and mc's personality is unique although some people doesn't like it and criticize the whole story and also the whole memory reading thing and his wife knowing everything but I think it's not that bad, so ignore the retared people. I hope you will continue it.
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Overall Rating: Astoundingly good. Less to no mistake grammatical errors. The story and MC progression is well developed. Cons: Not your typical antihero/heroish MC. We can easily noticed MCs selfishness which isn't bad for me. Interaction can still be develop as well as author-san writing style as he is still progressing. Kudos for a well written FF author-san!
I think this fanfic will get much more readers if the author change the synopsis. Ope ope no mi in mcu is very attractive topic. I must admit the first few chapter can make some reader dissapointed but after that they will find this hidden gem. This story deserve a place in fanfic top ten list 👍👍
There's a saying that Smart characters can only be as smart as the author and the author obviously has an iq lower than forest gump. also terrible structure and stuff, this IS a translation and I don't care what the author says, hes lying.
pretty good by the read of it . i liked it it was pretty good by the way to make a living room shortof which is unbreakable this is a God of the day no death but a lot of money to pay for the security of your house across the country didn't get any short of message was automatically generated by Gmail a new one of the day no problem at all
don't listen to these harsh comments I personally liked itthough sometimes it's illogical it's a good one if u ignore some of the storytelling
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All I can say confidently is that, this is the first marvel fic that is completed, I've ever finished reading all the way through.
First mc is if I dont know beter 9001% a chinese protagonist his wife finds out about his Reincarnation which is the rule no1 never tell that you are reincarnated.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler love it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I am supposed to put more than 140 characters to be able to give my 5-star rating, to which if I am writing that and saying that I loved this story
All I can say is one of the best. Hoping to get a sequel out of it. Thanks for the Fan-Fic Author! Your truly- Addictive Reader!
So many twist and turns. I was always at the edge of my seat. good ending to wrap it all up. keep up the good work.
I have to admit I thought this was just gonna be like most other fic’s on this app. But I confess I was wrong it was actually a really fun story to read and although it’s not a 5* story it’s definitely up there. From character development to world building,interactions with characters and decently satisfying fight scenes I would say overall its makes a pretty good story to read. Good job author!!!
so I'm going to be brutally honest, going from monkey in the multiverse to this is a downgrade of the highest order, the jokes weren't the best nor was the writing and it just didn't flow as well in some spots
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Writing can be improved but overall it is readable. Updates well its completed so yea not many make it to the end, although the ending felt very forced.
FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!......................................................................., . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .................................
Quite good actually, this novel is for people who likes reading wholesome reads I guess with a pint of tragedy. Though basically no action even though it's marvel
I have to say I had expectations after your previous fic with hiro but you have utterly destroyed it, like i have never seen such a pathetic mc. Other than the obvious loser he is, he is really dumb. I think if you add in the synopsis that a retard people would accept him without hating on you. And I honestly prefer you kept him weak at least then it would explain how he loses everytime it matters but with all his powers youre telling me he cant win a fight then thats poor writing on your part.
How the mighty have fallen, I used to be a great fan of your stories, the characters while not perfect; were still fluid. In this novel though? Not so much sadly... From funny guy writing good stories to an angry moderator who cant take criticism. I used to look forward to your posts, but not anymore, to say I'm disappointed is barely scraping the surface of your newfound ignorance. If you wished to stay at the top, than you shouldn't have insulted fans, readers, and reviewers over criticism, constructive or not. They compare it to a chinese translation because everything feels forced and generic, where they find pleasure in such writing; the western audience (your main audience) does not enjoy stiff humanoids having stiff actions with stiff brains. And knowing your previous stories, I know that you like cultivation, but that doesnt mean you should take the writing styles as ques and inspiration, when the more experienced writers and readers of your main audience are opposed to the repetitive and almost robotic like nature of generic chinese story writing, even worse when it feels and sounds like a translation.
Impossible to read The protagonist is just too weak and stupid. I think it was meant to be funny but it just isn't that funny when the mc is a worthless clown.
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this story started out extremely rough i wanted to stop reading a while ago but the author went above and beyond this is an incredible story just have a little patience
I just began reading it, but only from the description I think it’s going to be a great read.
Monkey what happened you has such a hood thing going for you with the Hiro and Zerotwo fic and cobra kak
It's a quite good fanfictions!! 👍👍 Is a crossover MCU and DC I think.. I usually doesn't like much crossover fanfiction, but this fanfic is quite good, that I can't stop after I read it.. 😁😁 I see many doesn't like the first few chapter (actually I don't like it too), but it's better latter.. Overall I enjoy this story... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good job author sama.. 😁👍👍👍
Thank you author for writing this wonderfull fanfic. The concept is good and mc's personality is unique although some people doesn't like it and criticize the whole story and also the whole memory reading thing and his wife knowing everything but I think it's not that bad, so ignore the retared people. I hope you will continue it.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Overall Rating: Astoundingly good. Less to no mistake grammatical errors. The story and MC progression is well developed. Cons: Not your typical antihero/heroish MC. We can easily noticed MCs selfishness which isn't bad for me. Interaction can still be develop as well as author-san writing style as he is still progressing. Kudos for a well written FF author-san!
I think this fanfic will get much more readers if the author change the synopsis. Ope ope no mi in mcu is very attractive topic. I must admit the first few chapter can make some reader dissapointed but after that they will find this hidden gem. This story deserve a place in fanfic top ten list 👍👍
trash . .