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Absolute ridiculous. Wanna read something an author gets bored in the second chapter? Go on. Author himself got so bored he just overpowered the MC as the strongest in the world, as a child. When a 12 year old child joined the marine he became immediately an admiral. And frankly, there's nothing really written but what I told you. Despite being born as Luffy's brother, he had no interaction whatsoever, we don't know his personality, goals, how he talks. This fic is so trashy, I really wish I hadn't wasted my time.
It's ok, it is something to read while bored, but it is not something that I would prefer to read over other fanfics. Things progress very quickly, too quickly in my opinion.
Absolute ridiculous. Wanna read something an author gets bored in the second chapter? Go on. Author himself got so bored he just overpowered the MC as the strongest in the world, as a child. When a 12 year old child joined the marine he became immediately an admiral. And frankly, there's nothing really written but what I told you. Despite being born as Luffy's brother, he had no interaction whatsoever, we don't know his personality, goals, how he talks. This fic is so trashy, I really wish I hadn't wasted my time.
It's ok, it is something to read while bored, but it is not something that I would prefer to read over other fanfics. Things progress very quickly, too quickly in my opinion.