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Very interesting first chapter. It vicidly gives the readers info about the world background as well as the power system that will be in play. Moreover, it also adds a bit of realism to this fantasy world given how humans had made certain decisions out of greed and whatnot. Overall, incredible start. Good luck, author.
Great Story, unique from all points. Having read 112 episodes, I can say that it's a story that's normal at start and fun to read at beginning but it just get better as you read. It's a growth type story in which emotions are slowly grown and make you attached to the story. The more you read it, the more you feel related to the characters in the story, that's just how believable it is. This will be my short review because I don't know what I can say to really better the review. That's all I'll say . I'm still reading and will read it to latest point. I want to say that if there is a loss there is gain then, bear with the dumb moments where mc is doing dumb stuffs like punching tree, or scared of height and later when he learns from his mistake you will feel the gain, the emotions. This makes the story great because only through such naive and negative actions do we realise how positive they are in the end. Thank you for making this great novel. I was just reading the flashback story of Leon, where his mother was killed and he started hating his Dad, without knowing I had tears in my eyes. This is so emotional and that's when I decided that this story is already a diamond in rough.
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The Novel is really nice I won't lie when I started reading I didn't have much expectations about the just wanted to kill time but I you got me hooked the Novel is great and it being your first novel you did an amazing job Am amaze with the way you developed the characters and the other aspect of the novel Keep the good work
😈 --------------------------------++-++--+---------&&--&+-&&-+---+&-+&+--+--+-&+-&+&++&+-&+-&-:-&-&--&+6&-6(&5-&&6-+&&++&&-+&-+-&+-&+-&-&--&+-5--+&-+-&+&--&---&&-+&--&+-&-+-&-&&--&(-&+75-+5+--+--+-++(!;;((-----+;--&''"":;+-++-+(+-++++-++-+--+-+-+-------++-++😈 😈. 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈
I cant believe I wasted my time reading this, isnt this suppose to be a world or monsters & ability? Instead we've got gang fights & underground fights. It feels like it's been written by a gang member or someone who loves to join a gang but never got the opportunity
honestly from what Ive seen so far it seems like this system's main two goal are helping the user attain higher levels of power and help the user acquire the knowledge to recreate and probably improve the system otherwise there would be no reason to show anything more than the first video log
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The most lovable part of this book is the background story of the different characters. The build up is lit. Good job.
The human interaction is just a bit too forced and unrealistic, the author tries to push a forgiving naruto-esque kind of MC which is calm but it’s too rushed and it interrupts the immersion. I mean i threaten to kill you and insult the one family member you ever had and you forgive me in a jiffy? Not saying the MC has to be vengeful but at least make it realistic, drag it out a bit, hint at it initially and carefully build up to it rather than lazily skip to that point all of a sudden. We’re all humans and it makes no sense cause even the best of people would find it difficult to forgive that easily. Storyline seems good and your writing isn’t bad either but the MC keeps ruining the immersion. Good luck on your story mate✌🏾
I am at Chapter 200 so just a quick question there is mention of the power system you introduced ( like Rookie,alpha,master, grand master ,legendary) could we expect it in the future
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! It's a captivating magic novel that explores a world where magic is harnessed through a unique and interconnected power system. The story follows a group of young wizards as they navigate the intricacies of this magical world, uncovering ancient secrets and facing thrilling challenges along the way. The author does a fantastic job of describing the magic system and its rules, making it feel immersive and believable. The characters are well-developed, and their journeys are filled with excitement, mystery, and personal growth. Overall, it's a must-read for any magic and fantasy lover! 📚✨
dropped book started off strong system had a backing of its origin main character seemed fine everything was normal but then the reaction side characters had to the main character was illogical and not believable then we get a side arc with an antagonist that really doesn't show any redeeming qualities or believable change of perspective and suddenly the main character decides to help him The antagonist threatened to kill the main character and would have if given the opportunity suddenly shows up on the main characters doorstep and is given a high grade healing item no questions asked?
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if i hoestly have to say anything, its the fact that the test to get into the military was waaaaaaaaaay to drawn out. i like the details, but i feel there are certain things that are focused on to much (ie, some of the notifications from the system are to unnecessarily focused on), especially with the word count per chapter. the chapters are quite short, and a lot of them go into explaining small details, rather than focusing on the main story. i know a lot of people enjoy slow paced novels, and there was a lot of information being divulged, but the entrance test for the military was from chapter 77 to 219 of (from what ive picked up) was only 15ish days long in the story. im not saying thats bad, certain people enjoy the focus on all the minute details, but frankly, it feels like there was a lot of filler, and repeated information. idrc about the characters traits, as those are bound to change with time, and i like to see the end result, but i feel like it would take to much time with that kind of pace. Im not meaning to dog or anything, im just saying theres a lot of filler and repeat information. and unless the pace of the story picks up, theres bound to be a lot of dissatisfaction arrising over time. i havent read past 219, and as i said, there was a lot of information to process, but the fact that its over 200 chapters, and we havent made it off the base planet, is a buzzkill for me so imma just drop it. i hope you still keep going with it, and wish you luck, but as much patience as id like to believe i have, thats way to slow paced for me.
well here is my honest opinion story isn't that bad as some people are saying but it also isn't a masterpiece it's something of you can read to pass time about MC personality he is enthusiastic yet braindead he wanna do great things but is coward. Overall society is trash if you don't have powers you are trash a lot of social status differences and a few things here and there doesn't make sense still I am writing this review after reading early chapter I think it has potential but whether or not author perform good or not who knows
Amazing book my guy it got me pretty hooked up that I literally read in a full rush and read over chp 50 In a whole book. The Character building is amazing with the slight humour makes it so worth my time.Looking forward to see this book become a famous hit. I'm countin on ya.
everything about the novel is great except I don't see a lot of romance doesn't he have charm there are plenty of novels out there but people lose interest when finding out there's no female characters interested in the protagonist
I was expecting a realistic story after reading the 1st chapter but by 7th chapter i realized that this will be just another pipedream novel about world peace and a hero raised out of tragedy (quite appealing to ignorant masses). The deceased grand mother character made sure that the MC will be person who is happy to have people walk all over him with an assuring attitude that he wont take any revenge even when he becomes powerful in the future. I guess these kind of MC's appeal to the hidden masochistic side of whimps.
I haven’t read but ust the imagination I’ve seen from the synapsis is enough, cheers to the author and keep that wonder I love it!
At first, I thought this was just a copy of The bloodline system and my vampire system. But no, even though at the start they might seem similar, as the story progresses it becomes better. I just read 25 chapters and already am in love with it. Hope that you publish more chapters
Well to be honest i saw a lot of potential on ur history but i don't like the type of mc that i've saw. Hi tries to be some kinda of Captain America like but this is not the type that i like. So to summarize the author either is sadic or want to run totally from any sign of a edgy mc. To be rlly honest everything i liked except the mc just not my cup of tea.
I've enjoyed the story so far. despite having a system the mc doesn't feel just stupidly op from the get go. I think the ability skills would be better if he had to create his own after the initial ones given by the ability books or purchase but that's just my view. overall a great start to an adventure
he lives in a technological advanced world and doesn't know how stats work........... he put his first 2 stats into perception which he didn't. eed at all at the moment and nit strength....... why? seriously why? He has been beaten to the point of near death for years and could barley finish the exercises and he was just like oh well I'll just put these 2 points Into the Stat I don't understand, even though I literally just ready a very clear straight forward description, and not into the one thing I need right now........
Great book author sama I just want to confirm if there are updates for this book or like 1/2 chapters for week then it will be tough.. Hope you can figure it out If there is daily updates i definitely give my support
Interesting plotline and a decent start but your upload schedule needs some work.
Excellent work brother! I can definately see the worth of the novel , the Grammer, the starting everything was way ahead. Keep working hard and keep grinding. I wish the ending will be as good as the beginning.
The writing was fantastic! From the grammar to the vocabulary, to the imagery and flow, everything was absolutely stellar! The only gripe I have (which is definitely more of a personal opinion than anything the author did wrong) is the average length of the paragraphs. They strike me as more of a light novel format, rather than being created as a Webnovel. Other than that, fantastic job!
Bro listen this was one heck of an adventure for me cuz first of all I'm not interested in these kind of novels but my friend insisted and boy was shocked like what an amazing story so far, you really represented the Webnovels writers potential with your work, keep up the gud work.#UPS gang❤️
Very interesting first chapter. It vicidly gives the readers info about the world background as well as the power system that will be in play. Moreover, it also adds a bit of realism to this fantasy world given how humans had made certain decisions out of greed and whatnot. Overall, incredible start. Good luck, author.
Great Story, unique from all points. Having read 112 episodes, I can say that it's a story that's normal at start and fun to read at beginning but it just get better as you read. It's a growth type story in which emotions are slowly grown and make you attached to the story. The more you read it, the more you feel related to the characters in the story, that's just how believable it is. This will be my short review because I don't know what I can say to really better the review. That's all I'll say . I'm still reading and will read it to latest point. I want to say that if there is a loss there is gain then, bear with the dumb moments where mc is doing dumb stuffs like punching tree, or scared of height and later when he learns from his mistake you will feel the gain, the emotions. This makes the story great because only through such naive and negative actions do we realise how positive they are in the end. Thank you for making this great novel. I was just reading the flashback story of Leon, where his mother was killed and he started hating his Dad, without knowing I had tears in my eyes. This is so emotional and that's when I decided that this story is already a diamond in rough.
Tiết lộ Spoiler The Novel is really nice I won't lie when I started reading I didn't have much expectations about the just wanted to kill time but I you got me hooked the Novel is great and it being your first novel you did an amazing job Am amaze with the way you developed the characters and the other aspect of the novel Keep the good work
😈 --------------------------------++-++--+---------&&--&+-&&-+---+&-+&+--+--+-&+-&+&++&+-&+-&-:-&-&--&+6&-6(&5-&&6-+&&++&&-+&-+-&+-&+-&-&--&+-5--+&-+-&+&--&---&&-+&--&+-&-+-&-&&--&(-&+75-+5+--+--+-++(!;;((-----+;--&''"":;+-++-+(+-++++-++-+--+-+-+-------++-++😈 😈. 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈 😈
I cant believe I wasted my time reading this, isnt this suppose to be a world or monsters & ability? Instead we've got gang fights & underground fights. It feels like it's been written by a gang member or someone who loves to join a gang but never got the opportunity
honestly from what Ive seen so far it seems like this system's main two goal are helping the user attain higher levels of power and help the user acquire the knowledge to recreate and probably improve the system otherwise there would be no reason to show anything more than the first video log
Tiết lộ Spoiler The most lovable part of this book is the background story of the different characters. The build up is lit. Good job.
The human interaction is just a bit too forced and unrealistic, the author tries to push a forgiving naruto-esque kind of MC which is calm but it’s too rushed and it interrupts the immersion. I mean i threaten to kill you and insult the one family member you ever had and you forgive me in a jiffy? Not saying the MC has to be vengeful but at least make it realistic, drag it out a bit, hint at it initially and carefully build up to it rather than lazily skip to that point all of a sudden. We’re all humans and it makes no sense cause even the best of people would find it difficult to forgive that easily. Storyline seems good and your writing isn’t bad either but the MC keeps ruining the immersion. Good luck on your story mate✌🏾
I am at Chapter 200 so just a quick question there is mention of the power system you introduced ( like Rookie,alpha,master, grand master ,legendary) could we expect it in the future
Tiết lộ Spoiler ! It's a captivating magic novel that explores a world where magic is harnessed through a unique and interconnected power system. The story follows a group of young wizards as they navigate the intricacies of this magical world, uncovering ancient secrets and facing thrilling challenges along the way. The author does a fantastic job of describing the magic system and its rules, making it feel immersive and believable. The characters are well-developed, and their journeys are filled with excitement, mystery, and personal growth. Overall, it's a must-read for any magic and fantasy lover! 📚✨
dropped book started off strong system had a backing of its origin main character seemed fine everything was normal but then the reaction side characters had to the main character was illogical and not believable then we get a side arc with an antagonist that really doesn't show any redeeming qualities or believable change of perspective and suddenly the main character decides to help him The antagonist threatened to kill the main character and would have if given the opportunity suddenly shows up on the main characters doorstep and is given a high grade healing item no questions asked?
Tiết lộ Spoiler if i hoestly have to say anything, its the fact that the test to get into the military was waaaaaaaaaay to drawn out. i like the details, but i feel there are certain things that are focused on to much (ie, some of the notifications from the system are to unnecessarily focused on), especially with the word count per chapter. the chapters are quite short, and a lot of them go into explaining small details, rather than focusing on the main story. i know a lot of people enjoy slow paced novels, and there was a lot of information being divulged, but the entrance test for the military was from chapter 77 to 219 of (from what ive picked up) was only 15ish days long in the story. im not saying thats bad, certain people enjoy the focus on all the minute details, but frankly, it feels like there was a lot of filler, and repeated information. idrc about the characters traits, as those are bound to change with time, and i like to see the end result, but i feel like it would take to much time with that kind of pace. Im not meaning to dog or anything, im just saying theres a lot of filler and repeat information. and unless the pace of the story picks up, theres bound to be a lot of dissatisfaction arrising over time. i havent read past 219, and as i said, there was a lot of information to process, but the fact that its over 200 chapters, and we havent made it off the base planet, is a buzzkill for me so imma just drop it. i hope you still keep going with it, and wish you luck, but as much patience as id like to believe i have, thats way to slow paced for me.
well here is my honest opinion story isn't that bad as some people are saying but it also isn't a masterpiece it's something of you can read to pass time about MC personality he is enthusiastic yet braindead he wanna do great things but is coward. Overall society is trash if you don't have powers you are trash a lot of social status differences and a few things here and there doesn't make sense still I am writing this review after reading early chapter I think it has potential but whether or not author perform good or not who knows
Amazing book my guy it got me pretty hooked up that I literally read in a full rush and read over chp 50 In a whole book. The Character building is amazing with the slight humour makes it so worth my time.Looking forward to see this book become a famous hit. I'm countin on ya.
everything about the novel is great except I don't see a lot of romance doesn't he have charm there are plenty of novels out there but people lose interest when finding out there's no female characters interested in the protagonist
I was expecting a realistic story after reading the 1st chapter but by 7th chapter i realized that this will be just another pipedream novel about world peace and a hero raised out of tragedy (quite appealing to ignorant masses). The deceased grand mother character made sure that the MC will be person who is happy to have people walk all over him with an assuring attitude that he wont take any revenge even when he becomes powerful in the future. I guess these kind of MC's appeal to the hidden masochistic side of whimps.
I haven’t read but ust the imagination I’ve seen from the synapsis is enough, cheers to the author and keep that wonder I love it!
At first, I thought this was just a copy of The bloodline system and my vampire system. But no, even though at the start they might seem similar, as the story progresses it becomes better. I just read 25 chapters and already am in love with it. Hope that you publish more chapters
Well to be honest i saw a lot of potential on ur history but i don't like the type of mc that i've saw. Hi tries to be some kinda of Captain America like but this is not the type that i like. So to summarize the author either is sadic or want to run totally from any sign of a edgy mc. To be rlly honest everything i liked except the mc just not my cup of tea.
I've enjoyed the story so far. despite having a system the mc doesn't feel just stupidly op from the get go. I think the ability skills would be better if he had to create his own after the initial ones given by the ability books or purchase but that's just my view. overall a great start to an adventure
he lives in a technological advanced world and doesn't know how stats work........... he put his first 2 stats into perception which he didn't. eed at all at the moment and nit strength....... why? seriously why? He has been beaten to the point of near death for years and could barley finish the exercises and he was just like oh well I'll just put these 2 points Into the Stat I don't understand, even though I literally just ready a very clear straight forward description, and not into the one thing I need right now........
Great book author sama I just want to confirm if there are updates for this book or like 1/2 chapters for week then it will be tough.. Hope you can figure it out If there is daily updates i definitely give my support
Interesting plotline and a decent start but your upload schedule needs some work.
Excellent work brother! I can definately see the worth of the novel , the Grammer, the starting everything was way ahead. Keep working hard and keep grinding. I wish the ending will be as good as the beginning.
The writing was fantastic! From the grammar to the vocabulary, to the imagery and flow, everything was absolutely stellar! The only gripe I have (which is definitely more of a personal opinion than anything the author did wrong) is the average length of the paragraphs. They strike me as more of a light novel format, rather than being created as a Webnovel. Other than that, fantastic job!
Bro listen this was one heck of an adventure for me cuz first of all I'm not interested in these kind of novels but my friend insisted and boy was shocked like what an amazing story so far, you really represented the Webnovels writers potential with your work, keep up the gud work.#UPS gang❤️