Is It Wrong to be Like Roy Mustang in Danmachi

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shiro_43

everything is fine but the cringe worthy personality of the mc its bad really bad. the powerset is unique it honestly would have been better if had just fire alchemy nah he got a charm ability cause he cant get girls without it . I genuinely think would bell will NTR the protag XD

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Soulkingdeino

Good

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Alusec_BR1

very good, worth reading XD <<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>><<>>

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Grayfoxmg1

I really like the premise. Sending someone into Danmachi with Roy Mustang's powers should be an interesting read. The problem is I cannot power through the poor writing quality. There is also the matter of the MC instantly being the most attractive male to every character. There might be an interesting story hidden in here, I just can't force myself to find it. Maybe if the author gets a beta reader or something.

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SAD_DKL_13

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