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While this is a Naruto story which I always love and a great idea on paper, the execution falls short and the poor grammar makes it difficult to read.
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When will you upload more chapters? Will they be uploaded every month?...................................................................................................................
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Great story 👍 Hopefully the mc actually spends time with his family unlike Sasuke and shows them love ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Oye puede hacer que ser llame yamato y puede hace que sasuke cae la mundo Highschool dxd cuando pelee con jigen y sasuke tenga mismo nivel que jigen pero Sasuke esta apuntó abril porta hacia aldea pero Sasuke cae la highschool dxd y puede hace sasuke aprendes la puerta interna y que aprende modo sabio serpiente
While this is a Naruto story which I always love and a great idea on paper, the execution falls short and the poor grammar makes it difficult to read.
goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
When will you upload more chapters? Will they be uploaded every month?...................................................................................................................
[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Great story 👍 Hopefully the mc actually spends time with his family unlike Sasuke and shows them love ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Oye puede hacer que ser llame yamato y puede hace que sasuke cae la mundo Highschool dxd cuando pelee con jigen y sasuke tenga mismo nivel que jigen pero Sasuke esta apuntó abril porta hacia aldea pero Sasuke cae la highschool dxd y puede hace sasuke aprendes la puerta interna y que aprende modo sabio serpiente