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I'm a sucker for Vampires, Werewolves, and all creatures of the night. I loved how you started the novel with a dream shattering and brining the reader back to reality. The emotions portrayed by the MC is very descriptive. Overall, fantastic start to the story. I look forward to reading more! Keep up the good work!
I am so jealous of your writing skills. You describe details very good,i am envious... Story development is hmm how should i say? it could be slower? It felt like went a little bit fast at first chapter. But your overall quality is good. Though your stability of updates is a mess it could be better to fix that brother!
If you are into a real adventure with real-life characters, then this book is for you. You have nothing to fear as the author is an exceptional writer and storyteller. And if that's not your style, I still recommend you give this a try.
Love the play of words and the emotion the characters show. I love dark supernatural stories and this explores the daily drama that young adults and teens face in the world, but with a fictional setting to make it more intriguing. Please do read
The first thing I was drawn to was the cover, then the synopsis and when I read the prologue, I was a goner. This book, just like Justice and Desire is amazing. I am now a loyal fan.
The world building is pretty good to be honest, not gonna lie, and the writing quality is very good to be honest. You took time with this one.
Killer Synopis...love the title and cover...i love the book...it well fleshed out, easy to understand...steady follow of chapter realease...there nothing better than this..and its worth the five stars..Keep shinning author...simping for our Fl[img=recommend]
I read some chapters and I must say that I like the flow of the story which makes me want to read more. My favorite character Ava, and I wonder what will become of her if her dream turns into reality.
What I like about this book is the intense action scene where the guy was trying to survive himself from all the dangers he had encountered. A few thing you need to improve is your grammars and some of the sentences you wrote seems brought a different meaning that doesn't seem suitable with the scene E.g. 'She's so hot'. In this sentences, are you telling the readers about Ava being a hot woman or you were trying to convey that she felt hot because of the humid air? Also, you always mistyped the guy's name in a few paragraphs as I read a few of your chapters. The guy's name is Jack River but sometimes you typed his name as Tom. I suggest you to proofread again.
You have a very enjoyable writing style. When I read stories the immersion and fluidity is what is the most important to me and your book captured that aspect perfectly. It is also very good at setting the tone and letting you sink into the scene, almost like experiencing it yourself. So far, it’s a great book. Keep up the good Quality!
Quite enjoyed the first 17 chapters. Jack, the innocent ML being thrust into circumstances he has no control over and the FL, Ava, possessing a bloodline through no fault of her own, are brought together by the hands of fate, where they must struggle, fight and even kill to get what they want - freedom. The story is still in its infancy, but it shows great promise as characters are well fleshed and have strong individual motivation. Recommended for anyone with a love for the werewolf genre
Author, I am glad you update as often as you do but can you please update more often than that? This book is just too interesting, please. Thank you.
I have only one word to say: MASTERPIECE. The author writing quality is top-notch. The story development is 10/10. The characters are just perfect. The world background is just something else. I have to say, I am glad I found you, author Jenival. Your books are amazing.
I am an avid fan of werewolf, vampire stories and this book is definitely going to my library. I love how the descriptions are so vivid, the world-building is really great. A lot of descriptive words are used in the story which makes it easier for the readers to imagine or construct a scene in their head. Good going author!
It's so good, I mean cover and synopsis it self is so intriguing. must read , highly recommended ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Wow, for a werewolf book I think the book is so nice, the characters description is so enthralling and then your cover is attractive. Keep it up author [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Very much enjoyed reading these ten chapters. Your writing style makes it easy to understand the plot and characters' emotions and motives. The story is also interesting and I like the personalities of Jack and Ava.
This really but different, I actually never read a story about werewolves before, but oh boy… after this I can assure you it’ll be going to my genre of books. I love it~!
Can't wait to read more. This book is well written and absolutely thrilling. I couldn't stop for a minute. I'll add it go my library and make sure I read to the end.🥰
I have no choice but to give this book a freaking 5 star considering it's just four perfect chapters available and I am already completely hooked. I'm reading your other book and I love it and all but this book just takes the cake. It is so well written, that I want to cry in relief. Thank you so much for this story and please, I am on my knees begging. UPDATE! 🥵
Hey there! I just want to say the fact that you are giving this book a chance greatly warms my heart. Some of you already know this, but writing isn't easy at all. it takes time, physical and mental work and a lot of creativity and passion to pull off. But the highlight of it all is getting people who not only enjoy but appreciate all that hard work. So thank you, not just for reading and reviewing, but for supporting me with gifts and follows and shares. You are the reason I write and you make it worth my while. Love, Author. @Jenivalwrites
I'm a sucker for Vampires, Werewolves, and all creatures of the night. I loved how you started the novel with a dream shattering and brining the reader back to reality. The emotions portrayed by the MC is very descriptive. Overall, fantastic start to the story. I look forward to reading more! Keep up the good work!
I am so jealous of your writing skills. You describe details very good,i am envious... Story development is hmm how should i say? it could be slower? It felt like went a little bit fast at first chapter. But your overall quality is good. Though your stability of updates is a mess it could be better to fix that brother!
If you are into a real adventure with real-life characters, then this book is for you. You have nothing to fear as the author is an exceptional writer and storyteller. And if that's not your style, I still recommend you give this a try.
Love the play of words and the emotion the characters show. I love dark supernatural stories and this explores the daily drama that young adults and teens face in the world, but with a fictional setting to make it more intriguing. Please do read
The first thing I was drawn to was the cover, then the synopsis and when I read the prologue, I was a goner. This book, just like Justice and Desire is amazing. I am now a loyal fan.
The world building is pretty good to be honest, not gonna lie, and the writing quality is very good to be honest. You took time with this one.
Killer Synopis...love the title and cover...i love the book...it well fleshed out, easy to understand...steady follow of chapter realease...there nothing better than this..and its worth the five stars..Keep shinning author...simping for our Fl[img=recommend]
I read some chapters and I must say that I like the flow of the story which makes me want to read more. My favorite character Ava, and I wonder what will become of her if her dream turns into reality.
What I like about this book is the intense action scene where the guy was trying to survive himself from all the dangers he had encountered. A few thing you need to improve is your grammars and some of the sentences you wrote seems brought a different meaning that doesn't seem suitable with the scene E.g. 'She's so hot'. In this sentences, are you telling the readers about Ava being a hot woman or you were trying to convey that she felt hot because of the humid air? Also, you always mistyped the guy's name in a few paragraphs as I read a few of your chapters. The guy's name is Jack River but sometimes you typed his name as Tom. I suggest you to proofread again.
You have a very enjoyable writing style. When I read stories the immersion and fluidity is what is the most important to me and your book captured that aspect perfectly. It is also very good at setting the tone and letting you sink into the scene, almost like experiencing it yourself. So far, it’s a great book. Keep up the good Quality!
Quite enjoyed the first 17 chapters. Jack, the innocent ML being thrust into circumstances he has no control over and the FL, Ava, possessing a bloodline through no fault of her own, are brought together by the hands of fate, where they must struggle, fight and even kill to get what they want - freedom. The story is still in its infancy, but it shows great promise as characters are well fleshed and have strong individual motivation. Recommended for anyone with a love for the werewolf genre
Author, I am glad you update as often as you do but can you please update more often than that? This book is just too interesting, please. Thank you.
I have only one word to say: MASTERPIECE. The author writing quality is top-notch. The story development is 10/10. The characters are just perfect. The world background is just something else. I have to say, I am glad I found you, author Jenival. Your books are amazing.
I am an avid fan of werewolf, vampire stories and this book is definitely going to my library. I love how the descriptions are so vivid, the world-building is really great. A lot of descriptive words are used in the story which makes it easier for the readers to imagine or construct a scene in their head. Good going author!
It's so good, I mean cover and synopsis it self is so intriguing. must read , highly recommended ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Wow, for a werewolf book I think the book is so nice, the characters description is so enthralling and then your cover is attractive. Keep it up author [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Very much enjoyed reading these ten chapters. Your writing style makes it easy to understand the plot and characters' emotions and motives. The story is also interesting and I like the personalities of Jack and Ava.
This really but different, I actually never read a story about werewolves before, but oh boy… after this I can assure you it’ll be going to my genre of books. I love it~!
Can't wait to read more. This book is well written and absolutely thrilling. I couldn't stop for a minute. I'll add it go my library and make sure I read to the end.🥰
I have no choice but to give this book a freaking 5 star considering it's just four perfect chapters available and I am already completely hooked. I'm reading your other book and I love it and all but this book just takes the cake. It is so well written, that I want to cry in relief. Thank you so much for this story and please, I am on my knees begging. UPDATE! 🥵
Hey there! I just want to say the fact that you are giving this book a chance greatly warms my heart. Some of you already know this, but writing isn't easy at all. it takes time, physical and mental work and a lot of creativity and passion to pull off. But the highlight of it all is getting people who not only enjoy but appreciate all that hard work. So thank you, not just for reading and reviewing, but for supporting me with gifts and follows and shares. You are the reason I write and you make it worth my while. Love, Author. @Jenivalwrites