To Make And Kill A King

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Oni_Kehinde

I really love how sassy the female lead, Diane is. The way she talks and all I want to say is, go girl 🤣 I love her tongue though . It's saucy. Anyways I really enjoyed reading this book and I hope to finish it. Just 3 chapters in and I'm laughing. Good job!

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Sandipan_Dutta_7440

The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck

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appricotblossom

Needs, has to get popular. The story's great, the story telling and description, wonderful. Really have nothing to say. Very good work. Just hope the author can improve the grammar used a bit. otherwise 👍👍

I’ve really enjoyed this so far. At first I expected another villainess story, but I like how the main character is mouthy and has an attitude. She clearly used to be a lawyer lol

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Fictor

Wonderfully articulated novel! The characters each have personalities that bring them to life through their narrations,the atmosphere of the story keeps it suspenseful as well as amusing due to the MC persona.Absolutely love the sarcastic and overall sassy attitude of the MC it keeps the reader hooked on each line,wondering what cheeky things she will utter next. The narrative does feel a be tasking to follow with the third person perspective but that also makes it as interesting as it is.The only two areas that I think need improving is character description and setting/world description,for example, a mysterious woman appeared from the mist,scarlet eyes piercing through gray gloom as her silvery hair flash back and forth behind her slender frame.By doing this readers understand characters better as well as appreciate them more. Overall good narrative and I wish you success in your novel writing!

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An_Average_Author

I have truly never seen this trope before! I love how the main character just hates the kingdom and wants to overrule it. Also, the characters and world are amazing!

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Flower_Something

Very interesting idea, not something ive seen before on here!! Absolutely love it and can’t wait to see more of it in the future!! This is actually the most amazing thing ive read!!!