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DaoisteKpFKF

A really fun story -- The mix of the worlds is a lot of fun and Fallout is a great setting for it. My only minor complaint is the explanations get a little lengthy but the story and character development is awesome. I really hope that they pick this back up and give us some more chapters :)

1mth
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Alfonziak

This is a really good story great implementation and pacing of story there are almost no writing mistakes and Even though I Only know fallout and from that mostly fallout 4, and bit of Las Vegas because I like to see Speedruns and bits of obscured lore I really enjoyed this story about really Smart person from future coming to the area of fallout 3 and it is really shame that there is still no new chapter yet but U have come pretty late so It could be that there is a really long period between characters or it is dead( I hope it's not)

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4mth
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CheesyPotatoes

if there is any hope of more chapters please reply cause this is a great story

5mth
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dirt_bro

This is a great book. Please keep writing it.

6mth
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Jackleell

Good grammar, decent word count, but overall the story has slow development. The main character is overall boring. She's so driven to become a robot or android, but it takes so much for her to get things done. Even though she seems like she can do things in months that should take longer, she does not change her ways. From the world 'Eclipse Phase,' she does not even use her old Earth memories. Maybe use mangas as inspiration. also no more updates i really enjoy this novel

11mth
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Darktokio

Hace poco la encontre y me encantó. Hay más capitulos en otra paguina o ya se cayó. O el autor murio de covid Saludos.................................................

1yr
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S_P1
LV 3 Badge

Read all 99 chapters over the course of 3 days and loved it. I love skitterdoc and hope you come back to this story eventually. Thank you so much for writing such great stories!(BTW I'm sure a lot of your readers would donate to you if you had a link, I definitely would)

1yr
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Nick_Cline

this is great, unfortunantly on hiatus for now at 99 chapters, but hopefully the author will keep up on their two books!

1yr
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John_Wolfie

Please come back,I'm begging you,this story is bloody perfect! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... ..............

1yr
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Borg
LV 14 Badge

gem history, fallout and a firm background, secondary character well-read and developed, this book is a gem and the history time and development e perfect 🥰

1yr
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Nekowithoutascythe

I absolutely love this story. The Author is really great at fleshing out their characters and is able to add more lore and mystery without completely ruining the continuation of the story. 100/10

1yr
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billlz
LV 12 Badge

As a fallout fan. I really liking this series. please keep on updating, can't wait to read more of this story.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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SporadicEffort

Honsetly a legit 5 star book, has enough details to Paint the picture while also going down rabit holes of science, its a fantastic take on the fallout universe and had to binge it all after i found it, would recomend to anyone who likes a smart mc, heck most the time i dont like female leads, its usually too much drama and emotional for me, like can appreciate a good romance but all romance aint for me, rambled a bit there but honestly just give this a read it a wonderfuly balanced books super fun to read!

1yr
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MerCurius_

I don’t really go out of my way to write reviews as the book and it’s first few chapters speak for it’s quality. However, the amount of attention this fic has gotten isn’t nearly enough for how good of a story this is. And if the author reads this if I may suggest: change the genre as even though this is a video game based fan fic that genre doesn’t have nearly as big as a readerbase. Anime and comic’s or movies have more people and most authors tend to use them even if their fic doesn’t fit the genre. Keep up the work!

2yr
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ArSolaris

Honestly very, very good. as of writing this it's already longer than most of the fallout fics I've seen started on Webnovel, and I hope the author has the inspiration to finish it. it builds up on the fallout world and lore in a lore friendly way, characters are well written for their roles and well written just in general. And the main character is lovely and perfectly -just- unhinged enough. 5/5.

2yr
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Ashashashasha_bone

I like the idea, and I always appreciate a well written book about fallout or anything interesting like this one .,.,.,.,., ,.,, . . . .,.,. .

2yr
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grimmhorizon

.............. ............female MC ...................... ........

2yr
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Airforce_821

Great book with an amazing premise not many people write about eclipse phase, so I was surprised when I realized you were crossing eclipse phase with fallout. You have done very well so far and as long as you continue posting I will continue reading.

2yr
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Zeke_From

this is one of those stories that you find yourself accidentally reading 20 chapters during break and having to explain why you are late. it's so easy to get lost in the scenario the author is providing

2yr
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Lapias

Good story, enjoyable to read, you can see the time and effort the author put into it. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
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Fito
LV 5 Badge

a good fallout fic, well written and with interesting characters, although the premise is very rushed and is not well understood but it is not very important for the story beyond explaining their skills and knowledge.

2yr
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Jack_Orchard

Its a great story, i definitely recommen reading. the ideas are original and well thought out as well as one of the best fall out fanfics I've read and i really hope the author continues to write the story and can not wait to see her finally become SpiderWitch 2.0, its also a great morally grey mc with sci-fi technology and ideals mixed with modern ones and by far my favourite fic currently

2yr
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cosmic_caveman

I mean what can I say this is pretty good 👍.,its well written plot of a mc, from a high tech civilization later in the dystopian world of fallout. Mc follows the path of a scientist and a well design character design.Its worth a read.

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2yr
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The_cursed_one

Very well written, it’s a shame by brain can’t comprehend half of it.

2yr
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joshua_hei

One of the most well researched and written fallout fanfictions I have had the pleasure of reading you can tell the author put a lot of work into it.

2yr
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BigStig97

Chapter 39 now and still an amazing story. A lot of medical and science shenanigans. Engineering, Yuri goodness, and fallout savagery. What else do you need?

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2yr
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coldpyr0

An absolute gem of a novel. Clearly thought out story progression, the MC is well balanced and actually feels like a person instead of a pure wish fulfillment insert. The writing quality is among the best on this site and the release schedule is never fast enough with stories this good but I'll admit it is more than good enough if I take away my never-ending need for infinite chapters. I hope the author never drops this and I look forward to where they go from here!

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2yr
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Kiiiddd
LV 14 Badge

A very well written story with a lot of well written science lore that I have no idea what is actually science or not but reading it makes me feel like it plausible because it's written so well

2yr
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BigStig97

on Chapter 19 now and it's a great story. The MC is genius and funny. An amazing fallout story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2yr
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sethrohan

Very fun, always a fan of transhumanism stuff. looking forward to seeing more. I seriously dont understand why webnovel makes me write so much.

2yr
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DaoisteKpFKF

A really fun story -- The mix of the worlds is a lot of fun and Fallout is a great setting for it. My only minor complaint is the explanations get a little lengthy but the story and character development is awesome. I really hope that they pick this back up and give us some more chapters :)

1mth
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Alfonziak

This is a really good story great implementation and pacing of story there are almost no writing mistakes and Even though I Only know fallout and from that mostly fallout 4, and bit of Las Vegas because I like to see Speedruns and bits of obscured lore I really enjoyed this story about really Smart person from future coming to the area of fallout 3 and it is really shame that there is still no new chapter yet but U have come pretty late so It could be that there is a really long period between characters or it is dead( I hope it's not)

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4mth
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CheesyPotatoes

if there is any hope of more chapters please reply cause this is a great story

5mth
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dirt_bro

This is a great book. Please keep writing it.

6mth
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Jackleell

Good grammar, decent word count, but overall the story has slow development. The main character is overall boring. She's so driven to become a robot or android, but it takes so much for her to get things done. Even though she seems like she can do things in months that should take longer, she does not change her ways. From the world 'Eclipse Phase,' she does not even use her old Earth memories. Maybe use mangas as inspiration. also no more updates i really enjoy this novel

11mth
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Darktokio

Hace poco la encontre y me encantó. Hay más capitulos en otra paguina o ya se cayó. O el autor murio de covid Saludos.................................................

1yr
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S_P1
LV 3 Badge

Read all 99 chapters over the course of 3 days and loved it. I love skitterdoc and hope you come back to this story eventually. Thank you so much for writing such great stories!(BTW I'm sure a lot of your readers would donate to you if you had a link, I definitely would)

1yr
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Nick_Cline

this is great, unfortunantly on hiatus for now at 99 chapters, but hopefully the author will keep up on their two books!

1yr
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John_Wolfie

Please come back,I'm begging you,this story is bloody perfect! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................... ..............

1yr
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Borg
LV 14 Badge

gem history, fallout and a firm background, secondary character well-read and developed, this book is a gem and the history time and development e perfect 🥰

1yr
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Nekowithoutascythe

I absolutely love this story. The Author is really great at fleshing out their characters and is able to add more lore and mystery without completely ruining the continuation of the story. 100/10

1yr
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billlz
LV 12 Badge

As a fallout fan. I really liking this series. please keep on updating, can't wait to read more of this story.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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SporadicEffort

Honsetly a legit 5 star book, has enough details to Paint the picture while also going down rabit holes of science, its a fantastic take on the fallout universe and had to binge it all after i found it, would recomend to anyone who likes a smart mc, heck most the time i dont like female leads, its usually too much drama and emotional for me, like can appreciate a good romance but all romance aint for me, rambled a bit there but honestly just give this a read it a wonderfuly balanced books super fun to read!

1yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
MerCurius_

I don’t really go out of my way to write reviews as the book and it’s first few chapters speak for it’s quality. However, the amount of attention this fic has gotten isn’t nearly enough for how good of a story this is. And if the author reads this if I may suggest: change the genre as even though this is a video game based fan fic that genre doesn’t have nearly as big as a readerbase. Anime and comic’s or movies have more people and most authors tend to use them even if their fic doesn’t fit the genre. Keep up the work!

2yr
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ArSolaris

Honestly very, very good. as of writing this it's already longer than most of the fallout fics I've seen started on Webnovel, and I hope the author has the inspiration to finish it. it builds up on the fallout world and lore in a lore friendly way, characters are well written for their roles and well written just in general. And the main character is lovely and perfectly -just- unhinged enough. 5/5.

2yr
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Ashashashasha_bone

I like the idea, and I always appreciate a well written book about fallout or anything interesting like this one .,.,.,.,., ,.,, . . . .,.,. .

2yr
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grimmhorizon

.............. ............female MC ...................... ........

2yr
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Airforce_821

Great book with an amazing premise not many people write about eclipse phase, so I was surprised when I realized you were crossing eclipse phase with fallout. You have done very well so far and as long as you continue posting I will continue reading.

2yr
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Zeke_From

this is one of those stories that you find yourself accidentally reading 20 chapters during break and having to explain why you are late. it's so easy to get lost in the scenario the author is providing

2yr
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Lapias

Good story, enjoyable to read, you can see the time and effort the author put into it. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

2yr
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Fito
LV 5 Badge

a good fallout fic, well written and with interesting characters, although the premise is very rushed and is not well understood but it is not very important for the story beyond explaining their skills and knowledge.

2yr
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Jack_Orchard

Its a great story, i definitely recommen reading. the ideas are original and well thought out as well as one of the best fall out fanfics I've read and i really hope the author continues to write the story and can not wait to see her finally become SpiderWitch 2.0, its also a great morally grey mc with sci-fi technology and ideals mixed with modern ones and by far my favourite fic currently

2yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
cosmic_caveman

I mean what can I say this is pretty good 👍.,its well written plot of a mc, from a high tech civilization later in the dystopian world of fallout. Mc follows the path of a scientist and a well design character design.Its worth a read.

img
2yr
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The_cursed_one

Very well written, it’s a shame by brain can’t comprehend half of it.

2yr
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joshua_hei

One of the most well researched and written fallout fanfictions I have had the pleasure of reading you can tell the author put a lot of work into it.

2yr
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BigStig97

Chapter 39 now and still an amazing story. A lot of medical and science shenanigans. Engineering, Yuri goodness, and fallout savagery. What else do you need?

img
2yr
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coldpyr0

An absolute gem of a novel. Clearly thought out story progression, the MC is well balanced and actually feels like a person instead of a pure wish fulfillment insert. The writing quality is among the best on this site and the release schedule is never fast enough with stories this good but I'll admit it is more than good enough if I take away my never-ending need for infinite chapters. I hope the author never drops this and I look forward to where they go from here!

img
2yr
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Kiiiddd
LV 14 Badge

A very well written story with a lot of well written science lore that I have no idea what is actually science or not but reading it makes me feel like it plausible because it's written so well

2yr
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BigStig97

on Chapter 19 now and it's a great story. The MC is genius and funny. An amazing fallout story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2yr
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sethrohan

Very fun, always a fan of transhumanism stuff. looking forward to seeing more. I seriously dont understand why webnovel makes me write so much.

2yr
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