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well I hate the concept of one piece being turned into something like this .... i don't think this deserves 5 stars so I will have to reduce it .
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It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! This is the first time I read that reincarnator possesed someone and must be a teacher and collect poins before he can have his body in real life.. I like that he change Ohara fate (Robin, Olvia, Saul, etc).. I also like MC/Qin Tian character, he care for Robin and cruel to enemies (I know it bad to train a child to kill, but I agree that most of pirates/bad guys will not changed his life if given second change, they only say that to save their lives).. Can't wait to see his next student.. Keep up the great job author sama 👍👍😁😍😍
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Muy buena la historia agrégale lemon pero de resto está muy buena la historia sigue así me encanta 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
at least give the raws its already sad there's no update but I don't mind shedding a few brain power to read it so doea anyone want to share it?
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Is This book worth 5 stars? Yeah it worth all of the, Its really great book although its chinese one but I like it so much, Thank you very much author san for translate it.
Little Robin so cute❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Thank you for this book BlackStar, I love you❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Read this, although the source is Chinese, the translator is very good at his work, this novel is really great, worth your time.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
A novel worth reading, thanks for the great translation BlackStar... I've always wanted to read this novel but the horrible translation in raw made me unable to do so, I hope you keep updating the chapters... Here, 5 stars from me.
ADVERTENCIA: esta reseña esta en base a mi opinión no lean esto en caso a que la reseña sea muy diferente a después de los 150 cap esto es una primera impresión en general me gusta la idea es bastante original que el protagonista sea el que posea a la gente para que haga estragos, bastante innovadora y fresca si estas algo cansado de lo mismo. Según veo también los personajes que posera son personajes principales y que lo mas posible que tal ves sea harem algo que la verdad es un poco predecible pero ya será cosa del autor si es así o si mas adelante .lo modifiquen. creo que la idea es muy buena y puede dar bastante sin embargo depende de como uses la premisa como autor que decidirá si es interesante o no. propongo que durante el viaje el protagonista pueda controlar mas cosas dentro de su cuerpo astral y que cada ves pueda tener un poco mas de control del cuerpo completo pero con limitaciones como que el poseído tenga que estar de acuerdo eso es todo gracias por la historia que se aproxima
love the story so far... .................... ........................... ........................................................ ....
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I liked it, I hope the translator posts chapters for this fanfic again......... ..................................................... ...................................
well I hate the concept of one piece being turned into something like this .... i don't think this deserves 5 stars so I will have to reduce it .
Tiết lộ Spoiler It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! This is the first time I read that reincarnator possesed someone and must be a teacher and collect poins before he can have his body in real life.. I like that he change Ohara fate (Robin, Olvia, Saul, etc).. I also like MC/Qin Tian character, he care for Robin and cruel to enemies (I know it bad to train a child to kill, but I agree that most of pirates/bad guys will not changed his life if given second change, they only say that to save their lives).. Can't wait to see his next student.. Keep up the great job author sama 👍👍😁😍😍
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Muy buena la historia agrégale lemon pero de resto está muy buena la historia sigue así me encanta 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
at least give the raws its already sad there's no update but I don't mind shedding a few brain power to read it so doea anyone want to share it?
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Is This book worth 5 stars? Yeah it worth all of the, Its really great book although its chinese one but I like it so much, Thank you very much author san for translate it.
Little Robin so cute❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Thank you for this book BlackStar, I love you❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Read this, although the source is Chinese, the translator is very good at his work, this novel is really great, worth your time.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
A novel worth reading, thanks for the great translation BlackStar... I've always wanted to read this novel but the horrible translation in raw made me unable to do so, I hope you keep updating the chapters... Here, 5 stars from me.
ADVERTENCIA: esta reseña esta en base a mi opinión no lean esto en caso a que la reseña sea muy diferente a después de los 150 cap esto es una primera impresión en general me gusta la idea es bastante original que el protagonista sea el que posea a la gente para que haga estragos, bastante innovadora y fresca si estas algo cansado de lo mismo. Según veo también los personajes que posera son personajes principales y que lo mas posible que tal ves sea harem algo que la verdad es un poco predecible pero ya será cosa del autor si es así o si mas adelante .lo modifiquen. creo que la idea es muy buena y puede dar bastante sin embargo depende de como uses la premisa como autor que decidirá si es interesante o no. propongo que durante el viaje el protagonista pueda controlar mas cosas dentro de su cuerpo astral y que cada ves pueda tener un poco mas de control del cuerpo completo pero con limitaciones como que el poseído tenga que estar de acuerdo eso es todo gracias por la historia que se aproxima
love the story so far... .................... ........................... ........................................................ ....
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
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I liked it, I hope the translator posts chapters for this fanfic again......... ..................................................... ...................................