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Plot is good. As is the romance. The writing itself is a 4 out of 5 tho. The lemon scenes are 3 out of 5. I’m at ch 105 Nice touch not neglecting the balls tho. As a true man of culture who has read and is reading numerous smutty and erotic works I know spice and it must flow so don’t be shy and be freaky.lol
dang! I wouldn't expect I found something good here! The plot is a bit weird but the execution for me is great! specially how the relationship progress in the later chaps about 200+.. I hope author won't drop this kind of masterpiece !!
one of the more unique fic in this platform. tho its not so unique if you compare this to mobage and japanese novel. handler and beauty weapon stories like this have written so many times. hope you can write better than the rest.
I am at chapter 15 but I will stop there and not come back got bored of this quickly this is just not for me and it’s annoying
I thought it was a normal story at first but it completely exceeded my expectations with its story and characters. It keeps me wanting to read more and more.
Let me guess. You saw the word Valkyrie and Smash and thought of either A. Super Smash Bros or B. Smashing Valkyries to make Lemonade right? Well we both know we came here for the lemons but that's not what you want to know right? Is this novel worth reading? I'd say yes. Here's a more detailed review.After reading the first volume or the equivalent of 140ish chapters I have to say the novel grew on me. Sam our smart horn dog of a MC is rather interesting. He's not strong and neither is he brave starting out. But seeing this lifeless husk of a man slowly grow while somehow getting a harem has been a rather fun read. The world building I should add is rather interesting as well. I won't deny I came here for the lemons but stayed to see how the lemonade was made. And I gotta say it was a ride. Personal Score 8.0/10 Would recommend to lemon lovers only.
Incredible so far, beyond what you usually find here on Webnovel. Premise amazing! Story? highly engaging! Action and battle scenes? Superb!! The Sauce?....beyond tasty. I can highly recommend giving this wonderful piece of work a try.
Really good book Fights are great and lemons are great also And good plot 💯 would recommend
One of the best nsfw novels with a great world. The only criticism is that there isn't enough chapters.
I'm giving it five stars. I love everything about this book, especially the Valkyries which are all human like. MC is a bit of a... perv but he's by no means a coward. To the author: Thanks for continuing the book. I've waited for so long.
I recommend reading it. Very good story and it's well written, haven't noticed grammar mistakes. Overall great potential, just hope it dosen't get dropped.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
It''s on the same level as those award winning Hollywood movies (it gives vibes of a proper Apocalypse based movies with harem and other extra elements thrown in between). You Usually don't find such a intricate work on this Platform. Thanks for the your Hardwork, man
Amazing story. I started reading expecting a generic harem story with hopefully decent H-scenes, but this turned out to be a story with deep and multi-dimensional characters, amazing plot with some twists that left me with my mouth hanging open, great writing that hooked me within a few chapters and kept its grip until the end, and even quite some philosophical depth. And yeah, the H-scenes are good, though I kinda wish there were more of them. Honestly, the story isn't completely my cup of tea, because I'm an escapist and the desperation of impending doom isn't exactly what I enjoy reading about - that's why I don't read apocalyptic stories often. Also, the blurring of lines between AI or an electronic brain and biological, natural sentient life is territory I'm not entirely comfortable with. Even so, the story is just so good that I remained hooked to it until I finished all the 152 chapters available. It's been a while since I last read a story so clearly worth full 5/5 stars.
Have binge-read in 2 days till chapter 152 at the time of this review. If you are reading this then know that this novel is really good and you should just start reading it. But if you need more than just "it's really good", then here is why... At first, I thought that this is just a quick right hand exercise program. But I was wrong. And now I am so happy about it because now I have another interesting work of art to follow. So what you will get if you start reading this novel? ---->[img=coins]NO annoying cliches. While reading this I didn't have even a single "ugh" or "that's so stup!d" and no second-hand embarrassment. You won't be bang!ng your head against the wall and you don't need to turn off your brain and filter out all the inconsistencies. ---->[img=coins]If something doesn't make full sense, then that's how it's supposed to be. Then keep that in mind and see how the author unfolds the answer and the real truth to you. ---->[img=coins]Yes. It is a lemon novel but... that is not important- you will stay reading it for the real plot and story, not the mindless PLOT that is so easy to find everywhere and makes us dumber. ---->[img=coins]And talking about lemon scenes... they are ok. Not the best I have read but not the worst too. The author has some ways to make them even better and improve- but me being a real man of culture, I had no problems with it. None. ---->[img=coins]No fillers and no useless information. Everything you read is important and I never felt like Nomanalive (the author) was just writing for the word count. I don't recommend skipping any chapter or even one conversation. ---->[img=coins]The first few chapters of the story might seem slow, but it keeps taking up the pace and is fast and exciting now, and I think that the build-up at the start was perfectly paced. Should not be a problem even for someone with ADHD. ---->[img=coins]The characters don't feel like cardboard cutouts and even if there is not that much information and story development for everyone- each of them has their own role they are playing in the novel and they don't exist only because of the mc. ---->[img=coins]MC is not some shounen protag with super plot armor. He is not even a fighter at the moment and is a normal guy, except that he has become a really talented scientist because of his hard work and will from a determination he had from childhood. ---->[img=coins]The action is not boring nor seems too long. It's easy to read and imagine. I didn't want to skip any of them even if the ones fighting were cute girls and not MC. And even then- why should I skip cute girls fighting monsters? I am a man of culture. ---->[img=coins]World building... Nothing wrong with it. It's just Earth and places whose names are numbers. It's realistic fiction and not some medieval fantasy where you need to know all the power levels, and all the kingdoms or realms to get a sense of where MC is at the moment. ---->[img=coins]MC is not a beta, nor is indecisive. He is just normal and he has his reasons for everything he has done or does and they are understandable. As one who h@tes beta Japanese mc types- it's okay to read. ---->[img=coins]NO net0 rare. The author knows who is THE man in his story. BUT- There is one scene about Nine in the library where she sneaked and saw one couple doing something. If that somehow offends you then you are too soft. It's just something that helps the plot- because of that Nine will be more intimate with our MC and that is all. Don't whine about such a small detail. ---->[img=coins]The biggest minus is the updates. We need more chapters! And there are some typos and mistakes. But as a man of culture I have an inbuilt auto-correcter where I just slide past all of the typos or wrong words. Don't let some typos stop you from enjoying this novel. They are not that bad and not that annoying like some works from authors whose 1st language is not English. This is better. ---->[img=coins]The sentences and the flow of words and conversations are smooth and easy to read. Hope no one drops it and reviews it as tr@sh only because of some typos ignoring everything else that is good about this novel. Would want to watch this animated- that would be perfect. To Nomanalive- thanks for the hard work you have put into your story and I hope that you don't drop this novel and continue to improve your writing so that writing becomes like breathing for you and the right words and sentences flow in your mind like unstoppable rivers. AND please start using something like Gr@mmarly- it will take care of the typos.
A well-developed story, with plenty of action, a surprising amount of emotion, and an overall story with several surprises!
It's a nice story,whit a great development,but I came here seeking action and snu snu, here is snu snu, but the action is lacking. And the MC is kinda pathetic,as for his reactions and his thoughts, and more for his actions whit his female friend. I stopped in the 100 chaps. The mc mature in some latter chapters? he feels like a fat neet taking advantage of some poor defenseless and naive girls, than anything else.
One of the few novels that makes me read even the weekly chapters, the writing quality is one of the best I've seen, the story is very good so much so that I didn't even expect Shizuru to be a "traitor", I hate n-
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the latest chapters are just lit man...with the twist and turns it just makes the heart go haywire, the character development is also good, some people can find the starting a little boring(information dumps) , but they are somewhat needed also and yep u also get echhi which is just acts as the cheery on top
Valkyrie smash? more like smash the Valkyrie!!!kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Really liked this novel. At least some good novel finally. But it seems like the chapters are coming slow (but it's a nice thing because it has quality)
Never one that I found the story is so compelling that I can't stop the urge to read since the first couple of the chapters. The story pacing and world building is just perfect, mystery valkyries that the MC slowly learns about, the hidden truth of the valkyries and enemy they were fighting as they have the same origin. Sometimes there was a typo here and there but overall the writing quality is good. Would recommend you to give it a try!
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Like for likes Need likes and I am sure not the only one. Let’ Karma it up Book is a good read as well.
The premise is really interesting. Cannot wait to see where this is going! The grammar and writing are also quite good. Thank you very much wordsmith!
Plot is good. As is the romance. The writing itself is a 4 out of 5 tho. The lemon scenes are 3 out of 5. I’m at ch 105 Nice touch not neglecting the balls tho. As a true man of culture who has read and is reading numerous smutty and erotic works I know spice and it must flow so don’t be shy and be freaky.lol
dang! I wouldn't expect I found something good here! The plot is a bit weird but the execution for me is great! specially how the relationship progress in the later chaps about 200+.. I hope author won't drop this kind of masterpiece !!
one of the more unique fic in this platform. tho its not so unique if you compare this to mobage and japanese novel. handler and beauty weapon stories like this have written so many times. hope you can write better than the rest.
I am at chapter 15 but I will stop there and not come back got bored of this quickly this is just not for me and it’s annoying
I thought it was a normal story at first but it completely exceeded my expectations with its story and characters. It keeps me wanting to read more and more.
Let me guess. You saw the word Valkyrie and Smash and thought of either A. Super Smash Bros or B. Smashing Valkyries to make Lemonade right? Well we both know we came here for the lemons but that's not what you want to know right? Is this novel worth reading? I'd say yes. Here's a more detailed review.After reading the first volume or the equivalent of 140ish chapters I have to say the novel grew on me. Sam our smart horn dog of a MC is rather interesting. He's not strong and neither is he brave starting out. But seeing this lifeless husk of a man slowly grow while somehow getting a harem has been a rather fun read. The world building I should add is rather interesting as well. I won't deny I came here for the lemons but stayed to see how the lemonade was made. And I gotta say it was a ride. Personal Score 8.0/10 Would recommend to lemon lovers only.
Incredible so far, beyond what you usually find here on Webnovel. Premise amazing! Story? highly engaging! Action and battle scenes? Superb!! The Sauce?....beyond tasty. I can highly recommend giving this wonderful piece of work a try.
Really good book Fights are great and lemons are great also And good plot 💯 would recommend
One of the best nsfw novels with a great world. The only criticism is that there isn't enough chapters.
I'm giving it five stars. I love everything about this book, especially the Valkyries which are all human like. MC is a bit of a... perv but he's by no means a coward. To the author: Thanks for continuing the book. I've waited for so long.
I recommend reading it. Very good story and it's well written, haven't noticed grammar mistakes. Overall great potential, just hope it dosen't get dropped.
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
It''s on the same level as those award winning Hollywood movies (it gives vibes of a proper Apocalypse based movies with harem and other extra elements thrown in between). You Usually don't find such a intricate work on this Platform. Thanks for the your Hardwork, man
Amazing story. I started reading expecting a generic harem story with hopefully decent H-scenes, but this turned out to be a story with deep and multi-dimensional characters, amazing plot with some twists that left me with my mouth hanging open, great writing that hooked me within a few chapters and kept its grip until the end, and even quite some philosophical depth. And yeah, the H-scenes are good, though I kinda wish there were more of them. Honestly, the story isn't completely my cup of tea, because I'm an escapist and the desperation of impending doom isn't exactly what I enjoy reading about - that's why I don't read apocalyptic stories often. Also, the blurring of lines between AI or an electronic brain and biological, natural sentient life is territory I'm not entirely comfortable with. Even so, the story is just so good that I remained hooked to it until I finished all the 152 chapters available. It's been a while since I last read a story so clearly worth full 5/5 stars.
Have binge-read in 2 days till chapter 152 at the time of this review. If you are reading this then know that this novel is really good and you should just start reading it. But if you need more than just "it's really good", then here is why... At first, I thought that this is just a quick right hand exercise program. But I was wrong. And now I am so happy about it because now I have another interesting work of art to follow. So what you will get if you start reading this novel? ---->[img=coins]NO annoying cliches. While reading this I didn't have even a single "ugh" or "that's so stup!d" and no second-hand embarrassment. You won't be bang!ng your head against the wall and you don't need to turn off your brain and filter out all the inconsistencies. ---->[img=coins]If something doesn't make full sense, then that's how it's supposed to be. Then keep that in mind and see how the author unfolds the answer and the real truth to you. ---->[img=coins]Yes. It is a lemon novel but... that is not important- you will stay reading it for the real plot and story, not the mindless PLOT that is so easy to find everywhere and makes us dumber. ---->[img=coins]And talking about lemon scenes... they are ok. Not the best I have read but not the worst too. The author has some ways to make them even better and improve- but me being a real man of culture, I had no problems with it. None. ---->[img=coins]No fillers and no useless information. Everything you read is important and I never felt like Nomanalive (the author) was just writing for the word count. I don't recommend skipping any chapter or even one conversation. ---->[img=coins]The first few chapters of the story might seem slow, but it keeps taking up the pace and is fast and exciting now, and I think that the build-up at the start was perfectly paced. Should not be a problem even for someone with ADHD. ---->[img=coins]The characters don't feel like cardboard cutouts and even if there is not that much information and story development for everyone- each of them has their own role they are playing in the novel and they don't exist only because of the mc. ---->[img=coins]MC is not some shounen protag with super plot armor. He is not even a fighter at the moment and is a normal guy, except that he has become a really talented scientist because of his hard work and will from a determination he had from childhood. ---->[img=coins]The action is not boring nor seems too long. It's easy to read and imagine. I didn't want to skip any of them even if the ones fighting were cute girls and not MC. And even then- why should I skip cute girls fighting monsters? I am a man of culture. ---->[img=coins]World building... Nothing wrong with it. It's just Earth and places whose names are numbers. It's realistic fiction and not some medieval fantasy where you need to know all the power levels, and all the kingdoms or realms to get a sense of where MC is at the moment. ---->[img=coins]MC is not a beta, nor is indecisive. He is just normal and he has his reasons for everything he has done or does and they are understandable. As one who h@tes beta Japanese mc types- it's okay to read. ---->[img=coins]NO net0 rare. The author knows who is THE man in his story. BUT- There is one scene about Nine in the library where she sneaked and saw one couple doing something. If that somehow offends you then you are too soft. It's just something that helps the plot- because of that Nine will be more intimate with our MC and that is all. Don't whine about such a small detail. ---->[img=coins]The biggest minus is the updates. We need more chapters! And there are some typos and mistakes. But as a man of culture I have an inbuilt auto-correcter where I just slide past all of the typos or wrong words. Don't let some typos stop you from enjoying this novel. They are not that bad and not that annoying like some works from authors whose 1st language is not English. This is better. ---->[img=coins]The sentences and the flow of words and conversations are smooth and easy to read. Hope no one drops it and reviews it as tr@sh only because of some typos ignoring everything else that is good about this novel. Would want to watch this animated- that would be perfect. To Nomanalive- thanks for the hard work you have put into your story and I hope that you don't drop this novel and continue to improve your writing so that writing becomes like breathing for you and the right words and sentences flow in your mind like unstoppable rivers. AND please start using something like Gr@mmarly- it will take care of the typos.
A well-developed story, with plenty of action, a surprising amount of emotion, and an overall story with several surprises!
It's a nice story,whit a great development,but I came here seeking action and snu snu, here is snu snu, but the action is lacking. And the MC is kinda pathetic,as for his reactions and his thoughts, and more for his actions whit his female friend. I stopped in the 100 chaps. The mc mature in some latter chapters? he feels like a fat neet taking advantage of some poor defenseless and naive girls, than anything else.
One of the few novels that makes me read even the weekly chapters, the writing quality is one of the best I've seen, the story is very good so much so that I didn't even expect Shizuru to be a "traitor", I hate n-
Tiết lộ Spoiler the latest chapters are just lit man...with the twist and turns it just makes the heart go haywire, the character development is also good, some people can find the starting a little boring(information dumps) , but they are somewhat needed also and yep u also get echhi which is just acts as the cheery on top
Valkyrie smash? more like smash the Valkyrie!!!kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Really liked this novel. At least some good novel finally. But it seems like the chapters are coming slow (but it's a nice thing because it has quality)
Never one that I found the story is so compelling that I can't stop the urge to read since the first couple of the chapters. The story pacing and world building is just perfect, mystery valkyries that the MC slowly learns about, the hidden truth of the valkyries and enemy they were fighting as they have the same origin. Sometimes there was a typo here and there but overall the writing quality is good. Would recommend you to give it a try!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Like for likes Need likes and I am sure not the only one. Let’ Karma it up Book is a good read as well.
The premise is really interesting. Cannot wait to see where this is going! The grammar and writing are also quite good. Thank you very much wordsmith!