30Các đánh giá
4.9
- Chất lượng bài viết
- Tính ổn định của các bản cập nhật
- Phát triển câu chuyện
- Thiết kế nhân vật
- Bối cảnh thế giới
Chia sẻ suy nghĩ của bạn với người khác
Viết đánh giá
💞💞💞💞💞💞💞❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️💞💞💞💞💞💞❣️❣️❣️❣️💖❣️💖❣️💖💖❣️💞💞❣️💞❣️❣️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💞💞💞💞💞❣️❣️❣️❣️💞💞💞💖💖💖💖💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Good job author. I love the chapter flow...keep writing 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
This is so lovable. This book is really intriguing and exciting. Even if this author decides to lock this book at chapter five, I'm ready to unlock the remaining chapters! Please update more chapters dear author
As an author, I also read my book and I'm happy with my achievements so far. I'm also happy with the reviews and comments I've seen and for thanks also for the correction 🥰
It's always the shock in books like this for me actually. why this one is so different, even j can't tell🥺🥺 this has to be a CEO masterpiece. Y'all has to check it out...
This is good, keep it up, author more ink to your pen. Keep up the good work and keep the novel flowing I just love everything about this book, it is awesome
nice piece of art, it's synopsis is intriguing and every plot gets you stuck to it. kudos to the author, you're doing a great job, I would recommend this book.
So much love this work!🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘
I love this! The story line is perfectly written and I feel like I'm in this book. Ava is getting married to that jerk? Wow...she has a boyfriend, an ex, a crush, a lover...who is this the lucky man to wed her finally?
Mhm, a promising read. I was hooked by the synopsis alone. I don't want to spoil anything and urge you to read this amazing work. If you are looking for books under this genre, I assure you that it will be worth your while. [img=recommend][img=recommend] Read. Read. Read. Kudos the author >.<
Thanks for all the reviews and comments I've received so far. I am happy to see you all happy...please keep reading and I'll continue updating new chapters.
Nice work! Well-done! Keep it up. Please keep updating chapters...I'm in need of more. 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
I really love this work. I can't stop reading this over and over again. Author you are improving and doing a great job. Please update next chapter.
A shameless author is giving her review.😅yeah...the other one was done by my sister with my phone. So from everything I've read here, people's reviews which are honest and comments too, I'd like to say thanks for speaking your minds to me and pointing out corrections to me. Also, I'll adhere to it and I'm grateful. To give a review for my work, I am giving it 5.0 star rating because I know my work is too good. I have the ideas well plotted out but might be having issues with presenting them especially breaking them down for other experts to read. I'm a coming up writer who of course, is taking note of all corrections and suggestions being pointed out to me. Thanks dear readers for such wonderful reviews. I'm grateful. please continue reading and supporting me as you've done. I love you all.😘
Okay so I'm going to start with an honest review. By all means I'm not swapping to generic ones, but I'll give you with a roasted one. First, the title. You got the hit market of Webnovel with CEO theme and Mafia genre. I already got the point or yours to make it enthralling as it is, but believe me, you need to improve on the title itself. Maybe you can do it as 'He Accidentally Became My Husband' or 'The CEO guarded me, I became his wife!' A lot of titles with vague descriptions are an issue, too. Second, the synopsis. It's clear that there were redundant words that interrupt the readers flow of reading. Remember that the synopsis is the THIRD thing the readers see, so if you fail to catch the readers in the synopsis, then the chapters will go stale. Third, you just have to go with the little tweaks of your first chapter. What I firs observed is your descriptions. Your descriptions were telling the characters what are they doing rather than showing them. Remember to show the readers what they are doing, not telling it as if you're the narrator. They, your characters, should be the one narrating their actions. So all in all, I'd say that you're doing a good job with dealing in the plot at all. You just have to arrange everything so that the readers will fill intrigued in every chapter. Good luck on your future endeavors!
This story has a deep and romantic feeling to it, the opening chapter really set the scene of the world in a way that I truly enjoyed . I usually don't read novels of this genre, but this one is great and I definitely recommend that people give it a read. 5 out of 5 rating! This is some quality writing and I loved every second of it.
Oh my gosh. It literally reminds me of someone I know. Ava smith 😅 it's thrilling and exciting, loved the beginning by way, hope we get to see Ava on her own as well.
The story was good and you did a good job at making me wanting to punch the heck out of the loan shark guy🤭keep up the good work, author👍🏻
Loving it so far! You've done a great job Author! It is definitely a good read! Keep it up Author 👍 [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like this story a lot it took me inside it the backgroung is great the events are exciting, i wish you continue this artwork im waiting you new chaptres
Awesome content. Good story plot and progression. I really loved the intro and I'm definitely going to recommend this title to someone else. Keep up the good work 👍👍
This is actually a nice book. I really like the ML. Such an amazing book😊😊😊.The Author really did a great job in writing the book. Kudos!
This story is one of the kind! Highly recommended. I hope there's more chapters to come. It is beautifully written and the words strewn perfectly together. Keep up the good work author 🥰
Really an excellent piece of writing. The author know how to write every scene perfectly, which makes you delve into the soul of the main character.
The book is actually a great one, very interesting, I will love to read the remaining chapter and see what is going to happen, I recommend this book to everyone. Keep it up author.
Great book! I highly recommend this if you are looking for a CEO new novel to read. This author is doing such a good work and I'm here to support this work!
This work is perfect to me and I really love it. I had to come back and give it a review. I recommend this book to everyone, please read and be amazed. Author that's a great job. keep it up. I'm supporting this work!
I am loving these chapters. The whole story is just captivating...I am just out of words to give to this book. More grease dear author, I'll love to see more chapters soon!
I love the pace at which this book is going. Maxwell is pretty annoying and cold. Will he ever love a lady? Author you're doing a great job. I need more chapters please🥺
What a wow! Beautiful story, beautiful chapters, beautiful scenes! This looks like a drama to me and I love dramas. Author please continue to update.
💞💞💞💞💞💞💞❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️💞💞💞💞💞💞❣️❣️❣️❣️💖❣️💖❣️💖💖❣️💞💞❣️💞❣️❣️💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💞💞💞💞💞❣️❣️❣️❣️💞💞💞💖💖💖💖💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Good job author. I love the chapter flow...keep writing 💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
This is so lovable. This book is really intriguing and exciting. Even if this author decides to lock this book at chapter five, I'm ready to unlock the remaining chapters! Please update more chapters dear author
As an author, I also read my book and I'm happy with my achievements so far. I'm also happy with the reviews and comments I've seen and for thanks also for the correction 🥰
It's always the shock in books like this for me actually. why this one is so different, even j can't tell🥺🥺 this has to be a CEO masterpiece. Y'all has to check it out...
This is good, keep it up, author more ink to your pen. Keep up the good work and keep the novel flowing I just love everything about this book, it is awesome
nice piece of art, it's synopsis is intriguing and every plot gets you stuck to it. kudos to the author, you're doing a great job, I would recommend this book.
So much love this work!🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰😘🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘😘😘
I love this! The story line is perfectly written and I feel like I'm in this book. Ava is getting married to that jerk? Wow...she has a boyfriend, an ex, a crush, a lover...who is this the lucky man to wed her finally?
Mhm, a promising read. I was hooked by the synopsis alone. I don't want to spoil anything and urge you to read this amazing work. If you are looking for books under this genre, I assure you that it will be worth your while. [img=recommend][img=recommend] Read. Read. Read. Kudos the author >.<
Thanks for all the reviews and comments I've received so far. I am happy to see you all happy...please keep reading and I'll continue updating new chapters.
Nice work! Well-done! Keep it up. Please keep updating chapters...I'm in need of more. 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
I really love this work. I can't stop reading this over and over again. Author you are improving and doing a great job. Please update next chapter.
A shameless author is giving her review.😅yeah...the other one was done by my sister with my phone. So from everything I've read here, people's reviews which are honest and comments too, I'd like to say thanks for speaking your minds to me and pointing out corrections to me. Also, I'll adhere to it and I'm grateful. To give a review for my work, I am giving it 5.0 star rating because I know my work is too good. I have the ideas well plotted out but might be having issues with presenting them especially breaking them down for other experts to read. I'm a coming up writer who of course, is taking note of all corrections and suggestions being pointed out to me. Thanks dear readers for such wonderful reviews. I'm grateful. please continue reading and supporting me as you've done. I love you all.😘
Okay so I'm going to start with an honest review. By all means I'm not swapping to generic ones, but I'll give you with a roasted one. First, the title. You got the hit market of Webnovel with CEO theme and Mafia genre. I already got the point or yours to make it enthralling as it is, but believe me, you need to improve on the title itself. Maybe you can do it as 'He Accidentally Became My Husband' or 'The CEO guarded me, I became his wife!' A lot of titles with vague descriptions are an issue, too. Second, the synopsis. It's clear that there were redundant words that interrupt the readers flow of reading. Remember that the synopsis is the THIRD thing the readers see, so if you fail to catch the readers in the synopsis, then the chapters will go stale. Third, you just have to go with the little tweaks of your first chapter. What I firs observed is your descriptions. Your descriptions were telling the characters what are they doing rather than showing them. Remember to show the readers what they are doing, not telling it as if you're the narrator. They, your characters, should be the one narrating their actions. So all in all, I'd say that you're doing a good job with dealing in the plot at all. You just have to arrange everything so that the readers will fill intrigued in every chapter. Good luck on your future endeavors!
This story has a deep and romantic feeling to it, the opening chapter really set the scene of the world in a way that I truly enjoyed . I usually don't read novels of this genre, but this one is great and I definitely recommend that people give it a read. 5 out of 5 rating! This is some quality writing and I loved every second of it.
Oh my gosh. It literally reminds me of someone I know. Ava smith 😅 it's thrilling and exciting, loved the beginning by way, hope we get to see Ava on her own as well.
The story was good and you did a good job at making me wanting to punch the heck out of the loan shark guy🤭keep up the good work, author👍🏻
Loving it so far! You've done a great job Author! It is definitely a good read! Keep it up Author 👍 [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like this story a lot it took me inside it the backgroung is great the events are exciting, i wish you continue this artwork im waiting you new chaptres
Awesome content. Good story plot and progression. I really loved the intro and I'm definitely going to recommend this title to someone else. Keep up the good work 👍👍
This is actually a nice book. I really like the ML. Such an amazing book😊😊😊.The Author really did a great job in writing the book. Kudos!
This story is one of the kind! Highly recommended. I hope there's more chapters to come. It is beautifully written and the words strewn perfectly together. Keep up the good work author 🥰
Really an excellent piece of writing. The author know how to write every scene perfectly, which makes you delve into the soul of the main character.
The book is actually a great one, very interesting, I will love to read the remaining chapter and see what is going to happen, I recommend this book to everyone. Keep it up author.
Great book! I highly recommend this if you are looking for a CEO new novel to read. This author is doing such a good work and I'm here to support this work!
This work is perfect to me and I really love it. I had to come back and give it a review. I recommend this book to everyone, please read and be amazed. Author that's a great job. keep it up. I'm supporting this work!
I am loving these chapters. The whole story is just captivating...I am just out of words to give to this book. More grease dear author, I'll love to see more chapters soon!
I love the pace at which this book is going. Maxwell is pretty annoying and cold. Will he ever love a lady? Author you're doing a great job. I need more chapters please🥺
What a wow! Beautiful story, beautiful chapters, beautiful scenes! This looks like a drama to me and I love dramas. Author please continue to update.