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The Worst One Piece Fic Ever Created, Even The Chinese With Their Boring Clichés Beat It[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
what happened author y no more chapters (is it because of power stones 😞 I am sorry I don't have any money to buy more and I only got 2 daily and it may be rude to say but I have given it to different story)
I like the story 10/10000👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I approve of his devil fruit, it is base on luck but he still needed to wait for his luck to accumulate or fight a life or death battle to gain strength...it is not an strengthening devil fruit, it is more like a double edge support type devil fruit...the balance between getting stronger by defeating your enemy or be defeated and lose all your hard work is a new path to power concept, it is perfect for his ability to gamble his hard work and life for his enemies power and life...like his gamble to gain strength fast, he achieved it but there a backlash involved...he can't recklessly use his devil fruit because even if there a fast way and short cut to power using his devil fruit, if used wrongly there will be severe consequences, everytime he use his devil fruit there's a price to pay, like stealing other people's devil fruit, if his will is weaker he will not be able to steal the devil fruit and from what I understand is damage his will or something, that's why he needed luck or someone with conquer's haki to help him remove devil fruit even from an unconscious opponent, in gamble to fighting his enemy to gain their stats, if he lose he will also lost something equivalent to those of his bet...it is both dangerous and beneficial for the user, the author's plan to balance the power of the mc to the danger he put himself to attained it is balanced and well thought for me...it only seems op since he used it rightly, if he use it recklessly he will kill himself...
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I gave up on this filler book. Because that's what it is. Why that type of devil fruit? simple plot armor. Should have just eat the first one.
Thank you for the kind gentleman at chapter 1 commenting that this is garbage and i see that his devil fruit is trash too? it's like adding at trash trash =? puahahahaahahahhaI even read some comments that the author deletes sa bad reviews so i guess this will be deleted later?meh worth it.
Good one, i recommend reading it but dont read too much fan fics at the same time the information from each one will get mixed up lol. I hope the author complete the story and dont give up midway
You need to update more chapters this is a great novel about one piece i have ever read
good story, liked the comedy, when i read the other reviews there are a lot of complains about liam's devil fruit. to that i say, yes luck plays a part on liam's devil fruit, but only if the enemy his making a bet on is more powerful then himself. liam's devil fruit isn't entirely depends on luck alone, which is nice. also is this dropped?
Didnt like the mc devil fruit so i dropped it after that, it was very good until he got the fruit tho
Hola me gusta mucho esta novela espero que pueda subir más rápido los capítulos me dijo picado jijijij sigue así 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I’ll be dropping this for now, after reaching 62 chapters. Here are some remarks for future readers: 1. Until now story mostly follows canon without many major changes except for meeting and getting nearly killed by an admiral level figure in East Blue which was ridicilous. 2. Mc starts extremely weak but grows rapidly, almost reaching the level of Luffy before the crew arrived at Alabasta which made author suddenly nerf him; basicly MC trained too hard and now cant train at all for 5 months (Which would mean before arriving at Sabody Mc cant power up much). Probably in an attempt to not stray too far from canon since author seems unwilling to try and write a more original fanfic. 3. Mc personality is mostly fine until author starts to develop romance between him and Nami, and the reason Mc didnt confess his feelings was because ”he swore he would never confess to a girl, but if a girl confesses to him, he will love her with all of his heart”. This was such a childish reason that I almost blew it, and final nail in the coffin was that he cant train for 5 months. It was just too much for me. 4. MC gets a gamblibg devil fruit which frankly doesn’t work like a devil fruit should, its more of a conditional power which is bordering on Nen from HxH universe. 5. Update stability is not very good with very few chapters released monthly.
I really liked the writing of this, especially with how the characters are written, but I did not like one think and one think only, the DF that was given. I personally highly recommend this novel, at least the first 24 chapters to everyone!!! It is incredibly well done, but to me the DF seems just like a convincing plot device created by author to randomly nerf or powe up mc for the plot It just takes so much away from the very nature of the word building of one piece and how characters are written. DF allows the mc to gamble to either strengthen him or weaken him at random, with also a luck bar that slowly fills up for an especially powerful deus ex machina plot point to come in and save everything randomly. Instead, giving mc even a super duper weak fruit would have been so much more rewarding to see mc slowly develope his powers to try and keep up with real mc puffy and zoro, while also balancing the crew and the plot of the original OP Overall, I really liked this novel thus the the 4 stars and the recommendation, since most people might like the DF or be able to ignore it. I personally cannot and so I dropped, I am sorry author and other readers, but having something like this just takes away from a fic that was shaping up to be an incredible piece with so much potential. I truest enjoyed reading it for the little bit that I did. I am leaving this review here as a token for a potential masterpiece
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Great story one piece fan faction so far 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. Need more chapter. Need more chapter. Need more chapter. Gshsisjsjdijddidijshssjsjsisijsjssjjsjssjsjzjjzjsnsnzznjssisjjshdhdjsjsjssjznznzjznznzjzjjzsjzjnsbssbnsnzznzjjdjdixzjjdxhhxnzjsjzjzjzjzjznznznznznznznznzjzjzjjsjzjzjzjzjsjzjzjzjszjjzzjjsjznzjzzjjzjzjzjzhdhdhdhdhzjdjsjdjdjsjsjzjhdhzjzjsjzhdbshsjsjsjzjhdjzhdjzhdjzjdjzjsjsjzjzjzjzjsjzjsj
Boring Df and Mc 😒 rating of 4.5 is too high for this, the only thing that produces is a desire to sleep 😴 😴 😴 ZZZZZZZZZ[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Very boring story with such a dumbly boring devil fruit if you wanted a power that had to do with luck you could have used the baccarat fruit
I read the story up to about chapter 60.story was amazing UNTILL chapter 34 where the author gave the mc the dumbest nerf/df ever. just flat out killed it. but I persisted a s kept reading until 60 where the story takes another dive. and I can't for the life of me understand why. good book ruined by dumb reasoning and silly author. = DROPPED.
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One of the worst things on this platform, I don't understand how it has such a high rating, it implies that those who read this are bots or the author deletes the bad reviews[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
loved it.... 👍 👌 great novel so far...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Me gusta mucho la historia. La forma en como se desarrolla el personaje, como pelea y se esfuerza para ser el visecapitan, como zoro en el anime pero más inteligente y no menos valiente. La fruta del diablo no me convenció, me hubiera gustado una fruta del diablo zoan o zoan mítica que no veo en los fanfit, por lo menos en uno con una buena historia. O no darle una y que sea un luchador físico puro pero para igualar
one of the best one piece fics out here. not without flaws, but definitely worth reading!
The Worst One Piece Fic Ever Created, Even The Chinese With Their Boring Clichés Beat It[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
what happened author y no more chapters (is it because of power stones 😞 I am sorry I don't have any money to buy more and I only got 2 daily and it may be rude to say but I have given it to different story)
I like the story 10/10000👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I approve of his devil fruit, it is base on luck but he still needed to wait for his luck to accumulate or fight a life or death battle to gain strength...it is not an strengthening devil fruit, it is more like a double edge support type devil fruit...the balance between getting stronger by defeating your enemy or be defeated and lose all your hard work is a new path to power concept, it is perfect for his ability to gamble his hard work and life for his enemies power and life...like his gamble to gain strength fast, he achieved it but there a backlash involved...he can't recklessly use his devil fruit because even if there a fast way and short cut to power using his devil fruit, if used wrongly there will be severe consequences, everytime he use his devil fruit there's a price to pay, like stealing other people's devil fruit, if his will is weaker he will not be able to steal the devil fruit and from what I understand is damage his will or something, that's why he needed luck or someone with conquer's haki to help him remove devil fruit even from an unconscious opponent, in gamble to fighting his enemy to gain their stats, if he lose he will also lost something equivalent to those of his bet...it is both dangerous and beneficial for the user, the author's plan to balance the power of the mc to the danger he put himself to attained it is balanced and well thought for me...it only seems op since he used it rightly, if he use it recklessly he will kill himself...
Tiết lộ Spoiler I gave up on this filler book. Because that's what it is. Why that type of devil fruit? simple plot armor. Should have just eat the first one.
Thank you for the kind gentleman at chapter 1 commenting that this is garbage and i see that his devil fruit is trash too? it's like adding at trash trash =? puahahahaahahahhaI even read some comments that the author deletes sa bad reviews so i guess this will be deleted later?meh worth it.
Good one, i recommend reading it but dont read too much fan fics at the same time the information from each one will get mixed up lol. I hope the author complete the story and dont give up midway
You need to update more chapters this is a great novel about one piece i have ever read
good story, liked the comedy, when i read the other reviews there are a lot of complains about liam's devil fruit. to that i say, yes luck plays a part on liam's devil fruit, but only if the enemy his making a bet on is more powerful then himself. liam's devil fruit isn't entirely depends on luck alone, which is nice. also is this dropped?
Didnt like the mc devil fruit so i dropped it after that, it was very good until he got the fruit tho
Hola me gusta mucho esta novela espero que pueda subir más rápido los capítulos me dijo picado jijijij sigue así 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I’ll be dropping this for now, after reaching 62 chapters. Here are some remarks for future readers: 1. Until now story mostly follows canon without many major changes except for meeting and getting nearly killed by an admiral level figure in East Blue which was ridicilous. 2. Mc starts extremely weak but grows rapidly, almost reaching the level of Luffy before the crew arrived at Alabasta which made author suddenly nerf him; basicly MC trained too hard and now cant train at all for 5 months (Which would mean before arriving at Sabody Mc cant power up much). Probably in an attempt to not stray too far from canon since author seems unwilling to try and write a more original fanfic. 3. Mc personality is mostly fine until author starts to develop romance between him and Nami, and the reason Mc didnt confess his feelings was because ”he swore he would never confess to a girl, but if a girl confesses to him, he will love her with all of his heart”. This was such a childish reason that I almost blew it, and final nail in the coffin was that he cant train for 5 months. It was just too much for me. 4. MC gets a gamblibg devil fruit which frankly doesn’t work like a devil fruit should, its more of a conditional power which is bordering on Nen from HxH universe. 5. Update stability is not very good with very few chapters released monthly.
I really liked the writing of this, especially with how the characters are written, but I did not like one think and one think only, the DF that was given. I personally highly recommend this novel, at least the first 24 chapters to everyone!!! It is incredibly well done, but to me the DF seems just like a convincing plot device created by author to randomly nerf or powe up mc for the plot It just takes so much away from the very nature of the word building of one piece and how characters are written. DF allows the mc to gamble to either strengthen him or weaken him at random, with also a luck bar that slowly fills up for an especially powerful deus ex machina plot point to come in and save everything randomly. Instead, giving mc even a super duper weak fruit would have been so much more rewarding to see mc slowly develope his powers to try and keep up with real mc puffy and zoro, while also balancing the crew and the plot of the original OP Overall, I really liked this novel thus the the 4 stars and the recommendation, since most people might like the DF or be able to ignore it. I personally cannot and so I dropped, I am sorry author and other readers, but having something like this just takes away from a fic that was shaping up to be an incredible piece with so much potential. I truest enjoyed reading it for the little bit that I did. I am leaving this review here as a token for a potential masterpiece
Tiết lộ Spoiler Great story one piece fan faction so far 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. Need more chapter. Need more chapter. Need more chapter. Gshsisjsjdijddidijshssjsjsisijsjssjjsjssjsjzjjzjsnsnzznjssisjjshdhdjsjsjssjznznzjznznzjzjjzsjzjnsbssbnsnzznzjjdjdixzjjdxhhxnzjsjzjzjzjzjznznznznznznznznzjzjzjjsjzjzjzjzjsjzjzjzjszjjzzjjsjznzjzzjjzjzjzjzhdhdhdhdhzjdjsjdjdjsjsjzjhdhzjzjsjzhdbshsjsjsjzjhdjzhdjzhdjzjdjzjsjsjzjzjzjzjsjzjsj
Boring Df and Mc 😒 rating of 4.5 is too high for this, the only thing that produces is a desire to sleep 😴 😴 😴 ZZZZZZZZZ[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Very boring story with such a dumbly boring devil fruit if you wanted a power that had to do with luck you could have used the baccarat fruit
I read the story up to about chapter 60.story was amazing UNTILL chapter 34 where the author gave the mc the dumbest nerf/df ever. just flat out killed it. but I persisted a s kept reading until 60 where the story takes another dive. and I can't for the life of me understand why. good book ruined by dumb reasoning and silly author. = DROPPED.
Tiết lộ Spoiler One of the worst things on this platform, I don't understand how it has such a high rating, it implies that those who read this are bots or the author deletes the bad reviews[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
loved it.... 👍 👌 great novel so far...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Me gusta mucho la historia. La forma en como se desarrolla el personaje, como pelea y se esfuerza para ser el visecapitan, como zoro en el anime pero más inteligente y no menos valiente. La fruta del diablo no me convenció, me hubiera gustado una fruta del diablo zoan o zoan mítica que no veo en los fanfit, por lo menos en uno con una buena historia. O no darle una y que sea un luchador físico puro pero para igualar
one of the best one piece fics out here. not without flaws, but definitely worth reading!