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Sarah and villiam are best siblings who care each other. I think Sarah love with John but she can't say. Her brother doesn't like John 😂 couse of the insident villiam is the comedy character 😂
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this story really so good i suggest that you should read this story superb this novel is really funny . Whenever I read this Novel ,it's plays like movie in my mind. Action story sarah rock john shock, I can read this story with family they love it because its in hindi and original.
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I wish you will make story l like your story🤩🤩 sarah bahut kind h really. Sarah very strong and mighty girl. I really excited next chapter 🙂
Sarah and villiam are best siblings who care each other. I think Sarah love with John but she can't say. Her brother doesn't like John 😂 couse of the insident villiam is the comedy character 😂
Tiết lộ Spoiler I have given 5 star because this author nothing include any kissing scene and it's really funny that boys suddenly kiss🤣🤣 now I wanna read next story 🤙🤙
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