The Villain's Story

LV 13

Blazuku

As a new author who doesn't really know a lot about how to write good stuff, I request you guys to give me 'Constructive' criticism. Whether it's a mistake in my grammar, sentence formation, etc. Also, I'm not doing this just to add another 5-star review to my novel. Definitely Not

LV 4

Anxtraa_

So good please don’t drop 🔥🔥🔥🔥So good please don’t drop 🔥🔥🔥🔥So good please don’t drop 🔥🔥🔥🔥So good please don’t drop 🔥🔥🔥🔥So good please don’t drop 🔥🔥🔥🔥

LV 13

Xerzxes

Nah no way Alan the mc is powerful to some exten but is a pushover and no villain worthy demeanor the title should be change as it’s misleading the novel even resemble of any type of villain he’s just your typical average cliche protagonist in those wuxia cultivation world novels that relies on plot armor. This novel says romance also? Wow Elijah the suppose protagonist of the novel he reincarnated to got more romance development in 4 chapters than Alan’s romance development in the whole 150 chapters I read in fact there wasn’t even a single relation ship development with the female lead in those chapters what is a disappointment

LV 11

Kim_Sungyeol

the mc is so irritating to me i cant take it anymore im gonna drop it for now and maybe pick it back up few months laters for a second chance to me.. and i hate that he swears too much.

LV 1

Daoist2OgclH

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LV 14

Carbon_6597

it starts off great but starts to get worse. MC feels weaker over time. Author doesn't finish some plot points or leaves the states of relationships for ages and ages. Author shows early on that it can be annoying to be shown something that either you can't use or is taken away with the aranus soul. and the. starts to do that over and over. this just makes it frustrating to read. also any chapters that are announcements or clarifications that arnt part of the story should not be paid chapters.

LV 4

Mickaelle09

I write this review after reading 268chapters.At first, I thought this book would have a great future. But as we started nearing this future, I was left disappointed .First,here are the pros : - The author is devoted and constantly improving his writing skills.- The updates are quite regulars .- There's little to no info dumps, and everything is slowly introduced and explained.- The plot isintriguing .- The pace is nor quick nor slow.-There's some comedy.Then, the cons :- The characters are too shallow.There are so many chapters, yet it feels like we don't know enough about the characters. First, the MC. Alan is honestly sooooo annoying.Each time an important thing happens to him, it feels like he will grow as a person. However it's only that. A "feeling" . He is still that mentally weak person whom everyone brags about the potential but that we don't see acting as he should when the situation is dire. The case Ezra Fornum; thefight with the orc( if I remember correctly),were all occasions for him to grow more powerful; both physically and mentally. Yet, it didn't happen.Plus , he is always complainingabout his weakness, which makes hisinexistent progress even more annoying.Also , the mc isn't even a villain until now.(Ps: He is also not smart nor stupid, which some might not like.)Second , the fl . Sabrina's relationship with the Mc is so suprlerficial. Yet the author TELLS us that "they're SO in love! They just do not want to be together for now."Apart from the shallowness of theirrelationship, Sabrina herself feels 2D. Sure,we know about her background. But the fact is that we don't really know her aside from this. What is her goal in life ? What does she like ?What are her pet-peeves?lt feels likeshe's not really a person.And this appliesto every other characters of the book. - The author gave a too powerful cheat to the Mc.The ice dragon breathing technique ( if I remember well) made him go from E rank to C- rank at the first try . So if the technique is so powerful and the Mc wants to be strong, isn't using it( descretly) enough for him to attain his objectives ?There have been so many traumatizing events that him not using the technique sooner doesn't make sense.Moreover , recently( chapter 260 or ), he used it again and only got up to C- rank; which makes it SO obvious that the author is attempting to nerf the Mc. - The feelings are clumsily expressed .I honestly feel so tired of reading paragraphs of Alan rambling about his pain and burden. But if they are not exagerated, the emotions aren't palpable.This all mostly stems from the lackof description of the thing that provokesthese emotions and its possible impactson the Mc or his loved ones.For example, If a character is afraid of something, you can describe the thing accordingly from his/ her perspective . But describing it is not enough.One should also show the impacts of the said thing so the reader, too, genuinely feels how imperative it is for the Mc to win against it.-Last but not least , what are the Mc's goals?It is understandable that Alan is perturbed by the fact that he is only a sort of 'fake Alan Peccator '. However , his confusion shouldn't be stretched out for 100 chapters as it hasbeen the case since now.It seems that rather than thinking pragmatically , the Mc is evolving in his world and waiting for answers, which will not come if he stays as static as he is . All in all, this bookfailed my expectations. Nonetheless, I wish all the best to the author and pray for his improvement .

LV 3

23r0

The story had its exciting moments, but the development of the main character ruined everything. Even after 520 chapters, the main character behaves foolishly, failing to use his space power when necessary, and constantly getting beaten up by others. He still hasn't developed his Aura, which all the other characters have already accomplished. He recklessly engages in death matches all the time, yet there's still no progress in his Aura development. I've decided to stop reading this because I can't push forward anymore.

LV 3

Salem_Zaed

Honestly I had a high expectation for this novel, but the author tried play smart and made the Mc a slave for a girl that he barely knew, he got injured in the most stupid way, I mean the the two Supreme dragons can talk to him, they could have warned him about it but no they decided to let him get injured seriously so they can make him a slave, it’s so forceful that I felt like vomiting when I read that part. Let’s not forget about his sister who at first seemed to be injured then became cursed, main character doesn’t even have the body memory except for his parents being tortured and him running away. And the main character was supposed to be smart and ruthless he couldn’t sleep because he was traumatized please, he couldn’t stand the stares he was receiving please, he almost couldn’t hold himself because of a girl please man that’s stupid. And the worst part is the main character refusing to get stronger in a world that he knew that strength is everything because of stupid fear that he will gather attention. I think the autho should remake it, and will not talk about the name of the novel. Good luck

LV 3

OOP_HELP

The book starts off a little rough, but by the time you get to the good parts you won’t be able to stop reading. (I read 147 chapters in a single day). The characters are simplistic but grow into their plot requirements very well, the world development is realistic and descriptive. It’s clear a lot of effort has been put into this story, if it’s dropped I’ll cry myself to bed.

LV 1

x22_5100

awful novel. MC gets spells but never uses them after he freeze his training room. he gets a Mana technique 7 star then only uses it once, then never uses it, he's a dragon but somehow gets phoenix bloodline cause plot. he basically becomes a slave cause "its important to the plot". i would go on but if you wanna read it and find out have fun

LV 3

Shaun_H_5012

The story started off really well, but as we passed chapter 200, it began to slow down significantly. There were too many characters introduced that we didn't really care about. At some point, it felt like every chapter was just filler and the story didn't progress at all. Additionally, the main characters doesn't get any stronger beyond chapter 50. Personally, I'm dropping this because it has only gotten worse with each chapter. The story its just not moving.

LV 4

Ashborn1609

this novel is very good from the plot to the world building and design of characters. I particularly like mc's personality who is a psychopath because of what his family in his previous life had done to him. the writing quality is top notch too. even if the mc is op , he is not too op either and the story develop well too. I hope you'll continue writing this great book

LV 14

Sebimon

The story starts really good, but the character fragmentation ( the MC went from a calculative decision maker to just a dumb kid in a couple of chapters) and the pacing on the tower of trials affects the novel a lot. Overall is a decent read but to much is happening all the time, with a MC with constantly changing personalities and pacing getting affected by overcomplicated visions and stagnants arcs

LV 11

xEnvy

The story was good at the start, AT THE START!!! cool headed, have patience doesn't care about the world except her sister... the story goes downhill the longer it goes, and it starts when he goes stronger... I notice it when the tournament starts when Kyle Flare and Alex were fighting, his dialogue and lucas dialogue was pure idiocy. theres was no joker that was mentioned in his personality. The dragon, snake, and the phoenix were not a joked, and even if we say that he is a substitute, he should have the conscience of the original.(NO DUMB ENTITY) and not to mention JAMES that was also one of the personality which is smart, I cannot just fathom why did he become so dumb. and the latest chapters is just full of nonsense story... Maybe the author lost some of his drive and now satisfied with its downhill workss...

LV 2

AbyssmalReader

It's good. Don't let chapter 36 (if I dont remember wrongly) fool you, even though this chapter may disappoint you with all the soul crystal thing, dont drop the novel yet. It will become better. The only critic I would make is: the mc is not a villain so the title is misleading and all the plot exposed in the synopsis (three souls in a body and all that stuff) appears only around chapters 100-130 (and is explained quite poorly tbh). The chapters are too short and have a lot of useless information. There is no character development. Even though the mc went trough a lot of things and "mental breakdowns" there is no difference between him before the mental breakdown and after that. These mental breakdowns and "lessons" just serve the purpose of making you believe that the main character is growing, but he still acts and thinks the same way. Anyway, the novel is entertaining if you can ignore or overcome the points mentioned above, so that's all that matters I guess

LV 14

Antihero2

The story has too many filler chapters that we could care less about, after chapter 100 we get the pov of different dragons and it’s honestly annoying and complicated to try and connect everything to together

LV 13

unkwnplyr

I read till 300 . I will be honest to develop a character taking 300+ chapters is too much. 300 chapter and lots of things happened but time moves fking slow. writing quality is average because of constant switching between povs. Most annoying thing is slow progression and stupidity of mc not to level up. I don't understand why some idiots tried to compare this with The Author's Pov . it can't even come close to it. ONLY good thing about this novel is story has potential but author does best job in ruining it. I'm complaining because of time wasted to read till here hoping it would get better but never did.