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Deleted my previous review since I've caught up. SPOILER AHEAD. Warning for certain readers: For those who expect to read some sociopath 'chad', 'alpha male', run of the mill MC...you can leave now. Jin (MC) isn't anything like that. He's a normal guy who is given quite an early and lucky start in his new life and doesn't turn power hungry psycho. Now then spoilers. Writing Quality: It's great, Author has stated that they're not a native English speaker but it's a lot better than other novels I've read on this site. While there some typos here and there, it's nothing bad. Story Development: I personally love it. The author has canon and a lot of original plot in it. Adding OCs that stay relevant and are not just one time villains, even having an original plot that involves the Greek Mythology as a whole to an original plot line, I liked it (The Monkai Association, a new faction in Khaos Brigade. Since their leader was involved with the Greek Gods in the past.) Character Design: We don't get much of what Jin(MC) looks like early on, but later on the story we do find out what he looks like since it ties back to his personal backstory. I love his growth throughout the novel so far. He goes into the world quite powerful and doesn't take too many things seriously, he sees it as a game. But one scolding from DDraig and a certain incident at the start of Volume 3 changes his personality quite a bit. Jin isn't perfect and it shows and I personally love it, he has flaws as a person and can't do everything right. I've read too many perfect MCs in novels lately so I like this. Update Stability: Consistent, certain chapter will release later since there's a lot to read. Volume 3 chapter 8 (5 parts) is 77k words in total which is a whole light novel volume which is wild. World Background: Best that I've in in a DXD fanfic. The author has said he'll be expanding on many mythologies, so far the Irish and Greek Mythology have been expanded on. For Volume 4 it looks like the author is going to expand on the Shinto, Egyptian and Norse Mythologies too. He doesn't just mentions it, but the MC goes there and their realm is expanded upon. mini story arcs and plots are in them that may tie into the DXD world as a whole. The harem seems to be very big, a comment by the MC says 47, but it's probably more than that. It also seems like many OCs will join the MCs harem. an example is a Goddess in the Irish Mythology, Goddess Danu. Romance isn't rushed and in the released chapters he has 13 in it so far. Many slice of life and character interactions which I personally enjoy. I love Jin's relationship with both Ddraig and Albion. Jin is an Outer God who will evolve into something else in the future. The one who reincarnated him (Azathoth) seemed to give him these two as sort of support pillars. He uses them on occasion but they have brotherly relationship and support one another. They're also comedic relief throughout the novel along with Jin. I've laughed a lot reading their interactions. Anyway, if you read this...then give this novel a chance, it's a rare gem among the novels in this site.
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I found this on Ao3 and recently found out you mainly upload here, so I'll be regularly reading this fan fiction here. Anyhow, to my review. I will put a summary at the very bottom. Of course, this is also just all my biased opinion, so feel free to agree or disagree. Off topic: Firstly, when I first started reading this back in Ao3 (Archive of Our Own) I was kind of put off by the very first chapter, and decided to put it on my backlog, however, in the last few weeks I have gone through and read it all (Including the newest chapters here since on Ao3 only the end of Volume 4 has been uploaded.) HEAVY SPOILERS AHEAD, PROCEED WITH CAUTION. Long: As I mentioned in my off topic section, I felt off reading this since the very first chapter had a seemingly OP MC, and that's been done a hundred times over, however, it's written well, and that kept me going. So, onto chapter 2 and it's a flashback that explained the 1-week time skip which I liked, and introduced many other characters and things. What worried me the most was how the system was going to be handled and if it were going to be riddled with just status sheets and skill sheets, anyway, just stats pages to fill up word count, but by chapter 3 most of the functions were removed because (spoiler) the MC evolved. However, the stats page was still being used albeit not very frequently (And by around Volume 2/3 it's barely used and only seen sparingly.) Now reading a more detailed and revised synopsis tells us a little more on what this is about, also, chapter 1 gives us a snippet of what to expect (World building, romance, slice of life, harem and so on.) The MC, from Volume 1 seemed perfect at the start. However, cracks early on start to appear as he didn't utilize many of his abilities, and then he starts to hear voices and that made it an even bigger mystery for us as readers which I personally liked. However, by Volume 2 and onwards (Especially Volume 3) the MC starts to grow and improve, it isn't in a stupidly fast rate, and as we see in Volume 3 and at the end of Volume 4, he sometimes doubts his own decisions and actions (Because of the events at the start of Volume 3 which force him to mature and grow.) Watching Jin (MC) grow through the entirety of Volume 3 and the 1st part of his character arc at the end of Volume 4 was wonderful. In Elsha or Rudra's words: He needed to learn to forgive himself for what had happened at the start of Volume 3, accept what happened, grow and love himself again. And yes, his first character arc/development phase was just that. Acceptance, and self-love. From the small flashbacks, dream sequences we saw about Jin's personal past, he had stopped growing and maturing before his untimely death, however, upon reincarnating in DXD, he was given that opportunity and he has done wonderfully in that aspect. The people he meets, the friends he made and the lovers he has, they supported him through it, unlike in his past where his parents were emotionally absent, and his one friend abandoned him because it got a bit too much (Although it's a very realistic reason, most of us are not equipped to help someone through trauma.). Here in DXD, he has a great emotional support group. I PERSONALLY think the second and probably final part of Jin's character development is... Moving forward, completely, and breaking away from his old world or self. In most of Volume 5's storyline, the author has shown many side characters moving forward in their lives with the help of Jin or his lovers, or with the help of both of them. (Kurousagi with her own insecurities and doubts, Sekhmet with her husband, and recently, Aine, Rayanre and Yasaka.) Jin has been there and seen them moving forward in life. I can't wait to see the conclusion to his second arc, I will say that it will be definitely be emotional like his first arc (His fight with Sairaorg was definitely emotional, especially his [Queen] chant. It was great.) I read your review, and agree the first 3 girls joined quite quickly, however, the rest of the current harem joins him at a steady pace and with good development between them. I especially like what happened to Yasaka in Volume 5. Now the final part is world building. Honestly, I love it. DXD has been expanded upon a lot, especially the pantheons and factions. Jin still enjoys his school life to the fullest with even some minor characters (His two friends Najima and Kouta.) On the way to getting girlfriends themselves. Anyway, a lot of detail and lore went into the pantheons and factions themselves, so I'm looking forward to more of it in the future. And especially how you will write the future Tensura arc. Short: TLDR: Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Not many complaints here, the occasional typos, but nothing too serious. Updates: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I mean, it's being updated, there's not much to complain about. Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I put it in detail, but personally, I love it. A great mix of Canon and Original plot. Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ One of the best OCs I've read about. His growth has been great to follow. World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ It's High School DXD and it's being expanded upon, and a lot, I mean, it's great. No complaints at all.
it's great, a bit slow paced but it's well explained. The MC is a bit lazy or doing everything half assed tho. If he really makes the restaurant, why not make it so others could transport themselves in kuoh via those he partnered with? then moving in with the multi/omega verse at the end game.
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Incredible story telling, unique spin on DxD and loving the slice of life. Some parts were a bit difficult to get through, especially the self loathing arcs but it was good for character growth. Waiting for the next chapter, it’s been a month, hoping it’s not on hiatus?
What does Sheen have to do with Jin's harem? In what sense does he adore his (predestined) ones? And what kind of relationship does he have with Lavinia Reni if he's been seen hugging her every time Lavinia takes Shin away from Jin? Please tell me!! And if possible, in which chapter were they seen hugging?? It will depend on the answer if I read this fanfiction
Definitely 5 stars! The chapter's length is long enough to enjoy! Also, I'm only at the first volume and I begin liking it more and more!
This story is really good, but I have two points I want to criticise: 1. The updates, but that is just a minor point. I understand that with such a good story and 15k words per chapter you need your time. This is just my spoiled mind. 2. The second point is my biggest point, the growth of the relationships MC and the heroines other than the first three. I understand that you want to develop the relationships between the MC and the girls and because of the events it is understandable that the development is a little slow. But that goes all down the drain when the time skips are introduced. I mean i.e. the relationship between MC and Yasaka needs a dozen years to develop. I mean come on even if he spends only half an hour per day quality time with Yasaka it is over 2 months. It will be even more outrageous when the 100 year time skip comes. I refuse to believe that they only slept, trained and eat during their stay in the pocket dimension, that is mentally nearly impossible. Yasaka isn't the only one, nearly four fifth of the girls need years to develop their relationship and we still aren't over the half of the harem. Don't misunderstand, I just wanted to get this specific point (the 2nd) rid of my heart, the story is one of the best I've ever read. My congratulations.
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so fare a great story, just heads up chapters 17 and the main plot still has yet to start. dragon of dreams dragon of Infinity dragon of creation
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this is the best I just don't want this to stop so please write more ch author 🥲❤️❤️❤️😁
The writing quality and the overall story was pretty boring at the beginning, but it overall gets better later. 😊
Well written i like the story. Just waiting for tensura arc. ..................................................................... ........... .................. ...... ..... .......
Been following your work, since you first posted, and I love it! Has everything I would want in a fanfiction, you aren't afraid to change things, and don't stick to what happened in the main LN, bringing your own touch to this work. Keep up the good work and look forward to seeing what you have in store for the future
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It's one of the best fanfictions I have ever read .This fanfiction looks like impossible in itself if you look at the sheer size of harem and OP MC, but the way romances and story plots are done. The author has explored other myths well instead of focusing on just Biblical Faction .It's one of the best DXD fanfictions alongside DXD : A rise of new opportunity & DxD : Reborn as Thor.So give it a read guys
I cannot write a good review, but I will be straight! if you love DxD universe, all of the heroine in there and hope for top notch storyline. This was for you!
love this fanfic and love how you explored the lore of DxD while also incorporating your own stuff. Although this isn't much but still love the work you do and I how you can continue plus if you ever finish this fanfic it would be awesome if u could do a fate fanfic and an arknights fanfic since the last good one I read was dropped since the author(RIP to her). Anyway thanks for the hard [img=Feeling it]
I’m so late reading this it’s been sitting in my library for so long but this is just awesome the detail the build up wow such a great job author.. the amount of research you have done to create this just that alone has been so amazing. Did I already say how much I’m enjoying this?!
wow.. Author really know how to use "I do whatever I want to do", but I like it. this is so inspiring. good job Author-san and Wish you luck.
Im back to reading this story, now thare is so many chapters. Btw My favorite DXD waifu is Akeno.
hey author, i've beem reading your work and i gotta say it's one of the best dxd fanfic i have ever read and i started to read other dxd fanfic but they kinda disappointed me, i don't know why but after reading your work, it seems my standards have gotten high anyway readers, does anyone here have read a dxd fanfic with sona sitri as the solo fl? i read that novel a couple months ago and now i've forgotten the novel's name, if anyone saw it, please tell me it's name and that novel has more than 100 chapters if i remember correctly.....please if anyone saw it or know it's name please tell me
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if a fanfic has 2.5x the word count of the entire Harry Potter series, whether good or bad, then it gets 5 stars from dedication alone. fyi as of writing this I haven't started reading it yet...
Title: An Epic Tale of Magic and Adventure - "Winds of Change (DXD)" "Winds of Change (DXD)" is a gripping web novel that has captured my imagination from the very beginning. As an avid reader of online literature, I've come across many stories, but this one truly stands out for its incredible storytelling, well-developed characters, and the unique blend of magic and adventure. In this review, I will dive into the reasons why "Winds of Change (DXD)" is a must-read for any fan of the fantasy genre. First and foremost, what sets "Winds of Change (DXD)" apart is its captivating storyline. The author, whose narrative skills are nothing short of exceptional, weaves a tale that keeps readers on the edge of their seats. From the very first chapter, I was drawn into a world filled with magic, mystery, and intrigue. The story unfolds with a perfect balance of action, drama, and suspense, making it impossible to put down. One of the strongest aspects of this web novel is its world-building. The author has created a rich and immersive universe where magic and supernatural creatures are an integral part of everyday life. The attention to detail is astounding, and it's clear that a tremendous amount of thought and creativity has gone into crafting this world. Whether it's describing the mystical landscapes, the intricate magic systems, or the various fantastical races, every aspect is well thought out and vividly described. The characters in "Winds of Change (DXD)" are another highlight of the story. The protagonist, in particular, is a complex and relatable character who undergoes significant growth throughout the narrative. His journey from an ordinary individual to a formidable force in the world of magic is both inspiring and engaging. The supporting cast is equally well-developed, each with their own unique personalities and motivations that add depth to the story. Furthermore, the character interactions and relationships in the novel are beautifully portrayed. The bonds of friendship, loyalty, and love that form between the characters feel genuine and heartwarming. This emotional depth adds a layer of authenticity to the story, making it all the more engaging for the reader. The magic system in "Winds of Change (DXD)" is both intricate and fascinating. The author has created a unique system of magic that is based on elemental affinities, and the way it is integrated into the plot is nothing short of brilliant. The battles and magical duels are described with such precision and creativity that they come alive on the page. Whether it's a clash of fire and water or a summoning of powerful creatures, the magic in this world is a spectacle to behold. In addition to the captivating storyline and well-developed characters, "Winds of Change (DXD)" also excels in its pacing. The novel strikes a perfect balance between action-packed sequences and moments of introspection and character development. This ensures that the story never feels rushed, allowing the reader to savor every moment and become fully immersed in the narrative. Another aspect worth mentioning is the author's writing style, which is both eloquent and easy to follow. The prose flows smoothly, and the descriptions are vivid without being overly verbose. This makes for an enjoyable and effortless reading experience, allowing the reader to become fully engrossed in the story without any distractions. Moreover, the novel's accessibility on the webnovel.com platform is a huge plus. It's incredibly convenient to read and follow updates, and the user interface is user-friendly. The ability to interact with other readers through comments and reviews adds a sense of community to the reading experience, allowing fans of the novel to discuss and share their thoughts and theories. In terms of character development, "Winds of Change (DXD)" shines brightly. As the story progresses, the characters undergo significant growth and transformation. It's a joy to witness the protagonist and his companions evolve, facing their flaws and challenges head-on. The character development adds depth to the story and creates a stronger emotional connection between the reader and the characters. Furthermore, the novel explores thought-provoking themes such as destiny, power, and the consequences of one's choices. It prompts readers to reflect on their own lives and decisions, adding an intellectual layer to the narrative that goes beyond mere entertainment. In conclusion, "Winds of Change (DXD)" is a masterfully crafted web novel that deserves every bit of praise it receives. With its compelling storyline, rich world-building, well-developed characters, and captivating magic system, it offers a reading experience that is nothing short of exceptional. I wholeheartedly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys fantasy and adventure, as it is a journey well worth embarking upon. I eagerly await each new chapter and look forward to seeing where the winds of change will take our beloved characters next.
I'm not good at reviewing but I felt in my heart that it deserves 5 star. I love this novel and we wuv u author-san!😚
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Hello the author here, this is my first time uploading a fanfic online so actual criticism will be appreciated. I won’t delete any reviews that complain or whine about things they don’t like since I’m too lazy to. I created this fanfic back in 2020, and it sat in a random folder in my laptop for 2 years. I write fanfics for my own fun and I have a bunch of other unfinished fanfics still on my laptop. Chapter 1 is probably my worst work out of all the released chapters so far (Chapter 12) as of writing this. Since my writing has (hopefully) changed and gotten better over the last two years, I also want to keep on improving. I also continued this as a way to improve my English, grammar, writing and storytelling. I have read a lot of fanfics on this site, great fanfics (In my opinion) left unfinished or abandoned. The rest are okay and a good past time to read, while others are just nearly identical, though, they have their own flavor (I’m not saying it’s bad, just repetitive.) I created this as a way to break away from them, yes, the MC is OP I won’t deny that. If you don’t like what’s in this fanfic, you’re free to leave or drop it. But I wish for you to read chapter 1 and go to chapter 2 and then give me judgement (Until I rewrite Chapter 1), if you like it, then thank you for your future support, if not then drop it and be on your way. My goal in this is to tell the MC’s story, I don’t just want him to go into the world and just start killing anyone who doesn’t agree with him. While a fun read at first, it gets stale, like really quickly. I want to make this into a somewhat realistic romance (In anime/manga/light novel standards) and have some build-up to it. I admit that the first 3 are a bit quick, but they’re not done with their development. I want all of his harem and the MC himself to grow, not just in power. I believe that every fanfic is already an Alternate Universe. Anyway, for anyone who likes my story, thank you for supporting me thus far, and I look forward to creating more in the future, also for anyone giving me actual criticism, I appreciate you. I can learn from that and improve. For those who do not like this fanfic, I’m sorry, I have a somewhat of a plan for this story, if it doesn’t go the way it does right now for you, it probably will never. Thank you @Lykita for pointing out my review isn’t being seen. I was wondering why I couldn’t Pin it.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Deleted my previous review since I've caught up. SPOILER AHEAD. Warning for certain readers: For those who expect to read some sociopath 'chad', 'alpha male', run of the mill MC...you can leave now. Jin (MC) isn't anything like that. He's a normal guy who is given quite an early and lucky start in his new life and doesn't turn power hungry psycho. Now then spoilers. Writing Quality: It's great, Author has stated that they're not a native English speaker but it's a lot better than other novels I've read on this site. While there some typos here and there, it's nothing bad. Story Development: I personally love it. The author has canon and a lot of original plot in it. Adding OCs that stay relevant and are not just one time villains, even having an original plot that involves the Greek Mythology as a whole to an original plot line, I liked it (The Monkai Association, a new faction in Khaos Brigade. Since their leader was involved with the Greek Gods in the past.) Character Design: We don't get much of what Jin(MC) looks like early on, but later on the story we do find out what he looks like since it ties back to his personal backstory. I love his growth throughout the novel so far. He goes into the world quite powerful and doesn't take too many things seriously, he sees it as a game. But one scolding from DDraig and a certain incident at the start of Volume 3 changes his personality quite a bit. Jin isn't perfect and it shows and I personally love it, he has flaws as a person and can't do everything right. I've read too many perfect MCs in novels lately so I like this. Update Stability: Consistent, certain chapter will release later since there's a lot to read. Volume 3 chapter 8 (5 parts) is 77k words in total which is a whole light novel volume which is wild. World Background: Best that I've in in a DXD fanfic. The author has said he'll be expanding on many mythologies, so far the Irish and Greek Mythology have been expanded on. For Volume 4 it looks like the author is going to expand on the Shinto, Egyptian and Norse Mythologies too. He doesn't just mentions it, but the MC goes there and their realm is expanded upon. mini story arcs and plots are in them that may tie into the DXD world as a whole. The harem seems to be very big, a comment by the MC says 47, but it's probably more than that. It also seems like many OCs will join the MCs harem. an example is a Goddess in the Irish Mythology, Goddess Danu. Romance isn't rushed and in the released chapters he has 13 in it so far. Many slice of life and character interactions which I personally enjoy. I love Jin's relationship with both Ddraig and Albion. Jin is an Outer God who will evolve into something else in the future. The one who reincarnated him (Azathoth) seemed to give him these two as sort of support pillars. He uses them on occasion but they have brotherly relationship and support one another. They're also comedic relief throughout the novel along with Jin. I've laughed a lot reading their interactions. Anyway, if you read this...then give this novel a chance, it's a rare gem among the novels in this site.
Tiết lộ Spoiler I found this on Ao3 and recently found out you mainly upload here, so I'll be regularly reading this fan fiction here. Anyhow, to my review. I will put a summary at the very bottom. Of course, this is also just all my biased opinion, so feel free to agree or disagree. Off topic: Firstly, when I first started reading this back in Ao3 (Archive of Our Own) I was kind of put off by the very first chapter, and decided to put it on my backlog, however, in the last few weeks I have gone through and read it all (Including the newest chapters here since on Ao3 only the end of Volume 4 has been uploaded.) HEAVY SPOILERS AHEAD, PROCEED WITH CAUTION. Long: As I mentioned in my off topic section, I felt off reading this since the very first chapter had a seemingly OP MC, and that's been done a hundred times over, however, it's written well, and that kept me going. So, onto chapter 2 and it's a flashback that explained the 1-week time skip which I liked, and introduced many other characters and things. What worried me the most was how the system was going to be handled and if it were going to be riddled with just status sheets and skill sheets, anyway, just stats pages to fill up word count, but by chapter 3 most of the functions were removed because (spoiler) the MC evolved. However, the stats page was still being used albeit not very frequently (And by around Volume 2/3 it's barely used and only seen sparingly.) Now reading a more detailed and revised synopsis tells us a little more on what this is about, also, chapter 1 gives us a snippet of what to expect (World building, romance, slice of life, harem and so on.) The MC, from Volume 1 seemed perfect at the start. However, cracks early on start to appear as he didn't utilize many of his abilities, and then he starts to hear voices and that made it an even bigger mystery for us as readers which I personally liked. However, by Volume 2 and onwards (Especially Volume 3) the MC starts to grow and improve, it isn't in a stupidly fast rate, and as we see in Volume 3 and at the end of Volume 4, he sometimes doubts his own decisions and actions (Because of the events at the start of Volume 3 which force him to mature and grow.) Watching Jin (MC) grow through the entirety of Volume 3 and the 1st part of his character arc at the end of Volume 4 was wonderful. In Elsha or Rudra's words: He needed to learn to forgive himself for what had happened at the start of Volume 3, accept what happened, grow and love himself again. And yes, his first character arc/development phase was just that. Acceptance, and self-love. From the small flashbacks, dream sequences we saw about Jin's personal past, he had stopped growing and maturing before his untimely death, however, upon reincarnating in DXD, he was given that opportunity and he has done wonderfully in that aspect. The people he meets, the friends he made and the lovers he has, they supported him through it, unlike in his past where his parents were emotionally absent, and his one friend abandoned him because it got a bit too much (Although it's a very realistic reason, most of us are not equipped to help someone through trauma.). Here in DXD, he has a great emotional support group. I PERSONALLY think the second and probably final part of Jin's character development is... Moving forward, completely, and breaking away from his old world or self. In most of Volume 5's storyline, the author has shown many side characters moving forward in their lives with the help of Jin or his lovers, or with the help of both of them. (Kurousagi with her own insecurities and doubts, Sekhmet with her husband, and recently, Aine, Rayanre and Yasaka.) Jin has been there and seen them moving forward in life. I can't wait to see the conclusion to his second arc, I will say that it will be definitely be emotional like his first arc (His fight with Sairaorg was definitely emotional, especially his [Queen] chant. It was great.) I read your review, and agree the first 3 girls joined quite quickly, however, the rest of the current harem joins him at a steady pace and with good development between them. I especially like what happened to Yasaka in Volume 5. Now the final part is world building. Honestly, I love it. DXD has been expanded upon a lot, especially the pantheons and factions. Jin still enjoys his school life to the fullest with even some minor characters (His two friends Najima and Kouta.) On the way to getting girlfriends themselves. Anyway, a lot of detail and lore went into the pantheons and factions themselves, so I'm looking forward to more of it in the future. And especially how you will write the future Tensura arc. Short: TLDR: Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Not many complaints here, the occasional typos, but nothing too serious. Updates: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I mean, it's being updated, there's not much to complain about. Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I put it in detail, but personally, I love it. A great mix of Canon and Original plot. Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ One of the best OCs I've read about. His growth has been great to follow. World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ It's High School DXD and it's being expanded upon, and a lot, I mean, it's great. No complaints at all.
it's great, a bit slow paced but it's well explained. The MC is a bit lazy or doing everything half assed tho. If he really makes the restaurant, why not make it so others could transport themselves in kuoh via those he partnered with? then moving in with the multi/omega verse at the end game.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Incredible story telling, unique spin on DxD and loving the slice of life. Some parts were a bit difficult to get through, especially the self loathing arcs but it was good for character growth. Waiting for the next chapter, it’s been a month, hoping it’s not on hiatus?
What does Sheen have to do with Jin's harem? In what sense does he adore his (predestined) ones? And what kind of relationship does he have with Lavinia Reni if he's been seen hugging her every time Lavinia takes Shin away from Jin? Please tell me!! And if possible, in which chapter were they seen hugging?? It will depend on the answer if I read this fanfiction
Definitely 5 stars! The chapter's length is long enough to enjoy! Also, I'm only at the first volume and I begin liking it more and more!
This story is really good, but I have two points I want to criticise: 1. The updates, but that is just a minor point. I understand that with such a good story and 15k words per chapter you need your time. This is just my spoiled mind. 2. The second point is my biggest point, the growth of the relationships MC and the heroines other than the first three. I understand that you want to develop the relationships between the MC and the girls and because of the events it is understandable that the development is a little slow. But that goes all down the drain when the time skips are introduced. I mean i.e. the relationship between MC and Yasaka needs a dozen years to develop. I mean come on even if he spends only half an hour per day quality time with Yasaka it is over 2 months. It will be even more outrageous when the 100 year time skip comes. I refuse to believe that they only slept, trained and eat during their stay in the pocket dimension, that is mentally nearly impossible. Yasaka isn't the only one, nearly four fifth of the girls need years to develop their relationship and we still aren't over the half of the harem. Don't misunderstand, I just wanted to get this specific point (the 2nd) rid of my heart, the story is one of the best I've ever read. My congratulations.
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so fare a great story, just heads up chapters 17 and the main plot still has yet to start. dragon of dreams dragon of Infinity dragon of creation
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this is the best I just don't want this to stop so please write more ch author 🥲❤️❤️❤️😁
The writing quality and the overall story was pretty boring at the beginning, but it overall gets better later. 😊
Well written i like the story. Just waiting for tensura arc. ..................................................................... ........... .................. ...... ..... .......
Been following your work, since you first posted, and I love it! Has everything I would want in a fanfiction, you aren't afraid to change things, and don't stick to what happened in the main LN, bringing your own touch to this work. Keep up the good work and look forward to seeing what you have in store for the future
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It's one of the best fanfictions I have ever read .This fanfiction looks like impossible in itself if you look at the sheer size of harem and OP MC, but the way romances and story plots are done. The author has explored other myths well instead of focusing on just Biblical Faction .It's one of the best DXD fanfictions alongside DXD : A rise of new opportunity & DxD : Reborn as Thor.So give it a read guys
I cannot write a good review, but I will be straight! if you love DxD universe, all of the heroine in there and hope for top notch storyline. This was for you!
love this fanfic and love how you explored the lore of DxD while also incorporating your own stuff. Although this isn't much but still love the work you do and I how you can continue plus if you ever finish this fanfic it would be awesome if u could do a fate fanfic and an arknights fanfic since the last good one I read was dropped since the author(RIP to her). Anyway thanks for the hard [img=Feeling it]
I’m so late reading this it’s been sitting in my library for so long but this is just awesome the detail the build up wow such a great job author.. the amount of research you have done to create this just that alone has been so amazing. Did I already say how much I’m enjoying this?!
wow.. Author really know how to use "I do whatever I want to do", but I like it. this is so inspiring. good job Author-san and Wish you luck.
Im back to reading this story, now thare is so many chapters. Btw My favorite DXD waifu is Akeno.
hey author, i've beem reading your work and i gotta say it's one of the best dxd fanfic i have ever read and i started to read other dxd fanfic but they kinda disappointed me, i don't know why but after reading your work, it seems my standards have gotten high anyway readers, does anyone here have read a dxd fanfic with sona sitri as the solo fl? i read that novel a couple months ago and now i've forgotten the novel's name, if anyone saw it, please tell me it's name and that novel has more than 100 chapters if i remember correctly.....please if anyone saw it or know it's name please tell me
Tiết lộ Spoiler if a fanfic has 2.5x the word count of the entire Harry Potter series, whether good or bad, then it gets 5 stars from dedication alone. fyi as of writing this I haven't started reading it yet...
Title: An Epic Tale of Magic and Adventure - "Winds of Change (DXD)" "Winds of Change (DXD)" is a gripping web novel that has captured my imagination from the very beginning. As an avid reader of online literature, I've come across many stories, but this one truly stands out for its incredible storytelling, well-developed characters, and the unique blend of magic and adventure. In this review, I will dive into the reasons why "Winds of Change (DXD)" is a must-read for any fan of the fantasy genre. First and foremost, what sets "Winds of Change (DXD)" apart is its captivating storyline. The author, whose narrative skills are nothing short of exceptional, weaves a tale that keeps readers on the edge of their seats. From the very first chapter, I was drawn into a world filled with magic, mystery, and intrigue. The story unfolds with a perfect balance of action, drama, and suspense, making it impossible to put down. One of the strongest aspects of this web novel is its world-building. The author has created a rich and immersive universe where magic and supernatural creatures are an integral part of everyday life. The attention to detail is astounding, and it's clear that a tremendous amount of thought and creativity has gone into crafting this world. Whether it's describing the mystical landscapes, the intricate magic systems, or the various fantastical races, every aspect is well thought out and vividly described. The characters in "Winds of Change (DXD)" are another highlight of the story. The protagonist, in particular, is a complex and relatable character who undergoes significant growth throughout the narrative. His journey from an ordinary individual to a formidable force in the world of magic is both inspiring and engaging. The supporting cast is equally well-developed, each with their own unique personalities and motivations that add depth to the story. Furthermore, the character interactions and relationships in the novel are beautifully portrayed. The bonds of friendship, loyalty, and love that form between the characters feel genuine and heartwarming. This emotional depth adds a layer of authenticity to the story, making it all the more engaging for the reader. The magic system in "Winds of Change (DXD)" is both intricate and fascinating. The author has created a unique system of magic that is based on elemental affinities, and the way it is integrated into the plot is nothing short of brilliant. The battles and magical duels are described with such precision and creativity that they come alive on the page. Whether it's a clash of fire and water or a summoning of powerful creatures, the magic in this world is a spectacle to behold. In addition to the captivating storyline and well-developed characters, "Winds of Change (DXD)" also excels in its pacing. The novel strikes a perfect balance between action-packed sequences and moments of introspection and character development. This ensures that the story never feels rushed, allowing the reader to savor every moment and become fully immersed in the narrative. Another aspect worth mentioning is the author's writing style, which is both eloquent and easy to follow. The prose flows smoothly, and the descriptions are vivid without being overly verbose. This makes for an enjoyable and effortless reading experience, allowing the reader to become fully engrossed in the story without any distractions. Moreover, the novel's accessibility on the webnovel.com platform is a huge plus. It's incredibly convenient to read and follow updates, and the user interface is user-friendly. The ability to interact with other readers through comments and reviews adds a sense of community to the reading experience, allowing fans of the novel to discuss and share their thoughts and theories. In terms of character development, "Winds of Change (DXD)" shines brightly. As the story progresses, the characters undergo significant growth and transformation. It's a joy to witness the protagonist and his companions evolve, facing their flaws and challenges head-on. The character development adds depth to the story and creates a stronger emotional connection between the reader and the characters. Furthermore, the novel explores thought-provoking themes such as destiny, power, and the consequences of one's choices. It prompts readers to reflect on their own lives and decisions, adding an intellectual layer to the narrative that goes beyond mere entertainment. In conclusion, "Winds of Change (DXD)" is a masterfully crafted web novel that deserves every bit of praise it receives. With its compelling storyline, rich world-building, well-developed characters, and captivating magic system, it offers a reading experience that is nothing short of exceptional. I wholeheartedly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys fantasy and adventure, as it is a journey well worth embarking upon. I eagerly await each new chapter and look forward to seeing where the winds of change will take our beloved characters next.
I'm not good at reviewing but I felt in my heart that it deserves 5 star. I love this novel and we wuv u author-san!😚
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Hello the author here, this is my first time uploading a fanfic online so actual criticism will be appreciated. I won’t delete any reviews that complain or whine about things they don’t like since I’m too lazy to. I created this fanfic back in 2020, and it sat in a random folder in my laptop for 2 years. I write fanfics for my own fun and I have a bunch of other unfinished fanfics still on my laptop. Chapter 1 is probably my worst work out of all the released chapters so far (Chapter 12) as of writing this. Since my writing has (hopefully) changed and gotten better over the last two years, I also want to keep on improving. I also continued this as a way to improve my English, grammar, writing and storytelling. I have read a lot of fanfics on this site, great fanfics (In my opinion) left unfinished or abandoned. The rest are okay and a good past time to read, while others are just nearly identical, though, they have their own flavor (I’m not saying it’s bad, just repetitive.) I created this as a way to break away from them, yes, the MC is OP I won’t deny that. If you don’t like what’s in this fanfic, you’re free to leave or drop it. But I wish for you to read chapter 1 and go to chapter 2 and then give me judgement (Until I rewrite Chapter 1), if you like it, then thank you for your future support, if not then drop it and be on your way. My goal in this is to tell the MC’s story, I don’t just want him to go into the world and just start killing anyone who doesn’t agree with him. While a fun read at first, it gets stale, like really quickly. I want to make this into a somewhat realistic romance (In anime/manga/light novel standards) and have some build-up to it. I admit that the first 3 are a bit quick, but they’re not done with their development. I want all of his harem and the MC himself to grow, not just in power. I believe that every fanfic is already an Alternate Universe. Anyway, for anyone who likes my story, thank you for supporting me thus far, and I look forward to creating more in the future, also for anyone giving me actual criticism, I appreciate you. I can learn from that and improve. For those who do not like this fanfic, I’m sorry, I have a somewhat of a plan for this story, if it doesn’t go the way it does right now for you, it probably will never. Thank you @Lykita for pointing out my review isn’t being seen. I was wondering why I couldn’t Pin it.
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