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Liked the story up until chapter 43, as between chapters 43 to 48, the author seems to do a soft reboot of it, suddenly changing the name of the mc, along turning him into human, not to mention completely changing the direction and tone of the story, quality still somewhat good, but nothing of what happened in the story so far seems to matter anymore.
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Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo
Started off as if inspired by that time I was reincarnated as a slime, then went in a different direction. Then became very random. like is it even about a slime anymore?
Reason for book. “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this”
I’m not going to try to nitpick the book, because overall it’s a decent book. However, the grammar takes me out of it. I can’t help but notice it, and if it were once or twice it would not be a big deal. But it’s almost every paragraph and for a book that is trying to go premium? Not a great showing. That being said, the overall writing style is decent and not a ton of info dumps which is good. But honestly? Not very original, it legit is I reincarnated as a slime.
why did you change the story I liked the slime one??? ......................................................................... ...........
mc without brain, mc without intelligence, mc without logic, this novel will not continue..................... ..........................................
his novel is here bıraktım.mc in the next section, he is hunted by guards, or the object of research of sorcerers olur.mc if he ate her and then started hunting in the woods, I would continue reading, but when Mc became someone who didn't work with his brain, tried to be heroic, didn't have intelligence, I quit the novel
I tried but I can't read more than 15 chapters. and stupidly equal to tensura up to this point that I read :/ [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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Really cliché and the mc is just so bland and lifeless and there’s basically no world building and the ecchi sense just make no sense and they’re just cringe and embarrassing to imagine that someone wrote that and thought that is was good and it bring shame to that time I got reincarnated as a slime and it’s like a really bad remake
belive it or not in a anime (when a rpg life is sh*ttier than your real life) or something along those lines if I recall slimes were 5x stronger than humans and goblins where 50+x stronger capable of moving at super Sonic speeds and would normally kill hundreds of humans before even getting a single injury unless it's that one overpowed mc that I'm not spoiling
Cidden çok güzel hikaye şimdilik oldukca guzel gidiyor. Olaylar biraz hızlı gelişsede insanı bıktırmıyor. Yazara başarılarının devamını diliyorum. o(〃＾▽＾〃)o
A fine read, I like the concept very much. I hope this novel continue to thrive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The beginning was really interesting. Kudos, my fellow Author. I could hardly find any fault or grammatical typos. It was well edited. I could have gifted this story a power stone but I don't have one. Am loving the way the story is going and about the boy who became a slime and had powers is making me want to become a slime myself. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😄😄😄😄😍
So far, after 24 chapters, a decent story, that’s interesting and enjoyable to read the most part. The story feels neither rushed or like it it’s dragging its feet, and there have been no major info dumps so far at least. Though you should prepare yourself for some spelling erro and wonky grammar here and there, but author is often quick to correct or address them when pointed out. If none of that is turning you off, you should give it a try, you might like it.
I really wanted slime to be a human but he is still slime though atleast as far as I read. however simple wordings yet so clear like water. it is a good piece of work and i hope the Writer Maybe! continue uploading....as the story needs a satisfying end...lol it was gross for me to read cause i feel i have slime on my head. but ren reminds me of that jelly monster in candy crush that pink one....which is very annoying when we climb the bean tree....
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Definitely a newbie author, but the story is definitely unique and has good potential grammar could be better. Descriptions could be better. Fast paced. Mc is sort of heartless and does things for his own benefit.
As I read this, I thought that the slime was gonna be OP at the start but it turns out it isn't. I hope the slime will get more powerful as the story progresses on, but surely slowly.
This even if I don't want to, my subconsciously compared it to another masterpiece... But even then this is a good novel... though there's some development necessary which will come with time... so with little chapters now... I can say is this goes as I hope then this will be a super awesome novel... Thanks author ... keep it up... make it another masterpiece...
This novel takes inspiration from tensura, not much and it is it's own interesting world, it has only two times when it takes something from tensura, that's the skill ranking (maybe) and the fact he starts with a skill that takes skills and other things, but that's all. It's so good, if you like tensura read this NOW, it's funny the story is good. I hope the author continues to write this.
An interesting book I'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage. For now, I do not know if the MC will later evolve into a human, but I guess I've got to be patient with the author. Just keep a steady update time and try your best... I highly recommend this book to other readers.
A nice story. I have read up to chapter 4, and I like it. Writing is good, not complicated words, simple, and the general plot looks good. Please continue updating the chapter.
So good. On 4 chapter but it was fun to read. It doesn't have fancy writing but it isn't bad too. Hope u continue publishing chapter. Moreeeeeeeeeeeee.
Liked the story up until chapter 43, as between chapters 43 to 48, the author seems to do a soft reboot of it, suddenly changing the name of the mc, along turning him into human, not to mention completely changing the direction and tone of the story, quality still somewhat good, but nothing of what happened in the story so far seems to matter anymore.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo
Started off as if inspired by that time I was reincarnated as a slime, then went in a different direction. Then became very random. like is it even about a slime anymore?
Reason for book. “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this” “Do not read this”
I’m not going to try to nitpick the book, because overall it’s a decent book. However, the grammar takes me out of it. I can’t help but notice it, and if it were once or twice it would not be a big deal. But it’s almost every paragraph and for a book that is trying to go premium? Not a great showing. That being said, the overall writing style is decent and not a ton of info dumps which is good. But honestly? Not very original, it legit is I reincarnated as a slime.
why did you change the story I liked the slime one??? ......................................................................... ...........
mc without brain, mc without intelligence, mc without logic, this novel will not continue..................... ..........................................
his novel is here bıraktım.mc in the next section, he is hunted by guards, or the object of research of sorcerers olur.mc if he ate her and then started hunting in the woods, I would continue reading, but when Mc became someone who didn't work with his brain, tried to be heroic, didn't have intelligence, I quit the novel
I tried but I can't read more than 15 chapters. and stupidly equal to tensura up to this point that I read :/ [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
Really cliché and the mc is just so bland and lifeless and there’s basically no world building and the ecchi sense just make no sense and they’re just cringe and embarrassing to imagine that someone wrote that and thought that is was good and it bring shame to that time I got reincarnated as a slime and it’s like a really bad remake
belive it or not in a anime (when a rpg life is sh*ttier than your real life) or something along those lines if I recall slimes were 5x stronger than humans and goblins where 50+x stronger capable of moving at super Sonic speeds and would normally kill hundreds of humans before even getting a single injury unless it's that one overpowed mc that I'm not spoiling
Cidden çok güzel hikaye şimdilik oldukca guzel gidiyor. Olaylar biraz hızlı gelişsede insanı bıktırmıyor. Yazara başarılarının devamını diliyorum. o(〃＾▽＾〃)o
A fine read, I like the concept very much. I hope this novel continue to thrive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The beginning was really interesting. Kudos, my fellow Author. I could hardly find any fault or grammatical typos. It was well edited. I could have gifted this story a power stone but I don't have one. Am loving the way the story is going and about the boy who became a slime and had powers is making me want to become a slime myself. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😄😄😄😄😍
So far, after 24 chapters, a decent story, that’s interesting and enjoyable to read the most part. The story feels neither rushed or like it it’s dragging its feet, and there have been no major info dumps so far at least. Though you should prepare yourself for some spelling erro and wonky grammar here and there, but author is often quick to correct or address them when pointed out. If none of that is turning you off, you should give it a try, you might like it.
I really wanted slime to be a human but he is still slime though atleast as far as I read. however simple wordings yet so clear like water. it is a good piece of work and i hope the Writer Maybe! continue uploading....as the story needs a satisfying end...lol it was gross for me to read cause i feel i have slime on my head. but ren reminds me of that jelly monster in candy crush that pink one....which is very annoying when we climb the bean tree....
Tiết lộ Spoiler Definitely a newbie author, but the story is definitely unique and has good potential grammar could be better. Descriptions could be better. Fast paced. Mc is sort of heartless and does things for his own benefit.
As I read this, I thought that the slime was gonna be OP at the start but it turns out it isn't. I hope the slime will get more powerful as the story progresses on, but surely slowly.
This even if I don't want to, my subconsciously compared it to another masterpiece... But even then this is a good novel... though there's some development necessary which will come with time... so with little chapters now... I can say is this goes as I hope then this will be a super awesome novel... Thanks author ... keep it up... make it another masterpiece...
This novel takes inspiration from tensura, not much and it is it's own interesting world, it has only two times when it takes something from tensura, that's the skill ranking (maybe) and the fact he starts with a skill that takes skills and other things, but that's all. It's so good, if you like tensura read this NOW, it's funny the story is good. I hope the author continues to write this.
An interesting book I'd say... No much info dumps and easy yet good grammar usage. For now, I do not know if the MC will later evolve into a human, but I guess I've got to be patient with the author. Just keep a steady update time and try your best... I highly recommend this book to other readers.
A nice story. I have read up to chapter 4, and I like it. Writing is good, not complicated words, simple, and the general plot looks good. Please continue updating the chapter.
So good. On 4 chapter but it was fun to read. It doesn't have fancy writing but it isn't bad too. Hope u continue publishing chapter. Moreeeeeeeeeeeee.
The summary : Do not read thisMe : Understandable have a great day