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It's another "Oh let's protect the straw hats" fic. But with the flavor of an op swordswoman OC with an attitude. Writing quality is good though.
Please, upload more chapters, since your story is great ......................................................................................................
Mala idea tu prota anda jodiendo cada tanto su increible poder y como es el mas perron pero anda de niñera de luffy No a logrado nada y parece que no tiene gana de hacer nada ea pura boca
It has an interesting beginning and I liked the personality of the MC. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I realized I hadn’t given this story a review yet!! I am already loving this story and the MC and how she interacts with everyone!! I’m enjoying her time with Luffy and everyone!! He would definitely think she was super cool!! And I‘m really enjoying a certain pairing with the MC and looking forward to more in the future!! Keep up the good work!!!
Putting someone to protect Luffy and his crew is a dumb idea. Not only would Luffy never agree to this, but I'm sure rayleigh would never have offered it, for the simple reason that the crew couldn't grow if they were constantly protected.
EVERYONE THIS IS NOT A FANFIC WHERE MC STAYS WITH STRAW HATS!!! SHE HAS HER OWN STORY!!!
It's another "Oh let's protect the straw hats" fic. But with the flavor of an op swordswoman OC with an attitude. Writing quality is good though.
Please, upload more chapters, since your story is great ......................................................................................................
Mala idea tu prota anda jodiendo cada tanto su increible poder y como es el mas perron pero anda de niñera de luffy No a logrado nada y parece que no tiene gana de hacer nada ea pura boca
It has an interesting beginning and I liked the personality of the MC. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I realized I hadn’t given this story a review yet!! I am already loving this story and the MC and how she interacts with everyone!! I’m enjoying her time with Luffy and everyone!! He would definitely think she was super cool!! And I‘m really enjoying a certain pairing with the MC and looking forward to more in the future!! Keep up the good work!!!
Putting someone to protect Luffy and his crew is a dumb idea. Not only would Luffy never agree to this, but I'm sure rayleigh would never have offered it, for the simple reason that the crew couldn't grow if they were constantly protected.
EVERYONE THIS IS NOT A FANFIC WHERE MC STAYS WITH STRAW HATS!!! SHE HAS HER OWN STORY!!!