The Viltrumite Irregular

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ThePandaCritic

Grammar is ok. The premise of the story was interesting. Why not the story of how he grew to become so strong or how he concur that planet with 3 year. Nope, you choose to send him to earth to go to school tf why? This dude is a warrior bread for destruction, hand-picked by their leader and I want me to believe they just allowed him to go to earth as some sort of a vacation. The story became after the whole earth incident. There is no room to grow power-wise. Maybe in character but I'm not here for a slice of life.

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SwayStar

Shameless Author Review! Sue me. ......................................................................................

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adeadlegend

The main character is a simp. We're splitting up. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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A_Stupid_Story

It's a really good book And i hope you will give a good reason for him turning against the vultrumite empire..... Easy 5 stars ...................

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SurelyNotEli

Unique premise + plus the grammar and writing is well done??? Easy five stars

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TreacherousVoid

How long has it been since i was sincerely excited about and wholeheartedly able to enjoy a novel? I feel like its been years! I am proud to say this novel, though new, and not without its flaws has earned a 5 star review from me. One of the very few ive given out. Because there are only 17 chapters out, My disappointment is immeasurable and my day is ruined, but alas, ill be back in a few months to binge read again! Great work here author (if you drop this….You better be ready for the consequences)

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DOKKAEBII

I really like this fic! I like that you chose her as the love interest and that you don’ get swayed by upset comments because they want to see Anissa or eve, both of which are overused and ruin the story of most fics, I’ve seen Anissa work once and eve ends up cucking mark for no reason and she’s always the fl in invincible works. I hope you keep updating as this is my favorite up and coming fan fic to read. I also really like the way you wrote Taz’s character with how looks down on everyone and has the strength to back it up. Not many stoic MLs on this site, and how he defends FL as she’ his woman and who would dare to talk to his woman that way. I see a lot of potential in this as the story progresses and I’m really looking forward to the viltrumite invasion. Ps my favorite “scene” is the eating in the Chinese restaurant. Displays Taz’s character and his relationship with earthlings as a whole

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the_banana_catfrfr

the only reason i checked this novel is because of dc light human but it turns out this one is also very good ovjoevjiodfvkdfdfvfdjvklfvkldfjvkfjvlkf

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JOKER_JAY

This story is very good and I'm looking forward to seeing how this story will progress. And please don't drop this cuz it would be a shame if it was so keep up the good work.

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DaoistOwcKbp

It has been a very good and interesting start. Let's hope you continue with the good work and this novel is not abandoned like the other invincible novels.[img=recommend]

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Havabjamw

easily one of the best invincible fanfic that i have ever read. chad mc + violence and gore. just like the tv show and the comics...........

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rak_iwal

it's is really good!!!.....a must read!! but why did you change the cover it was so good and depicted the current arc soooo wellll.

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Darth_Evolution898

Very well written the main character doesn't seem out of place in the story. As well as the Grammer and pacing being perfect highly recommend.

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DarlingNico

The story is great and I have fun reading it. A lo more fun than any other novels I’ reading right now. The emotions and character development is superb and is making me itch for more.

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PriamusTheBright

There should be more Invincible docs but sadly there isn’t. This book is good read I would highly recommend to my friends. What’s special is adding the kryptonian abilities.

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Jhonathan_Carrasco

I really love this story so please keep it up.!

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Luis_Salinas_8936

I hope the next part comes out soon because this is great

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Lost_Wanderer

Enjoyed everthing about the story and just wished it continued

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hellspawn3933938

good store 👍 can't wait for the next chapter 👍

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Milton_Villarreal_9111

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