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Viết đánh giáI really wanted to get into this one in the MTL, but MC kept being called Waking Up instead of Su Xing. It was a chore to figure out his name, I'm giving 5 stars since I like DD/Soul Land. Good stuff
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Tiết lộ Spoilersaya menghargai karya anda dan walaupun ada beberapa yang tidak sesuai dengan keinginan saya pribadi,tapi saya akan tetap menilai ini sudah cukup bagus....semoga author bisa semakin mengembangkan karya tulis anda dan membuat ceerita yang lebih menarik lagi untuk kedepannya.....
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i had high hope for it but its a dissapoinment.Rape really.he thinks with his dick.rape is not for me bro.translation is readeble👎👎👎👎👎👎
Just want review myself 1.if you ask what link i Will silent and why i'am upload this fanfic if i just can give link and don't do anything else i just give link for next chapter and be lazy to update 2.its not from mtl this from outside site , why always mtl are you mtl worker so you promo on this content 3. i'am using translate from PC so what if you don't like this translate then don't read i'am not force you to read,and you not pay me (and vote just to motivate to update not to pay ) 4.and of you want complaine why not you translate funfic who have good story' so i Will critic you
Tiết lộ Spoileramazing translation "Harem MC" .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Tiết lộ SpoilerNot sure If this isn't all just google translated from some Chinese writer (very hard to read sometimes) but the story itself in essence is very good. Whoever wrote all those stories is a genius at writing Soul Land fanfics. Very creative.
translation is so botched, cant even get the name right ........................................................a..a..a.a.a.a..a.a.a..a.a.a.a..a.a.a.a.
Wow! Another bad mtl translation of a chinese fanfiction with no links to nor permission from the original? This man must truly have no women on his phone.
The protagonist is similar to Yun Che. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. ... ... .. ... .
amazing translation .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
sorry but it's unreadable for me, i hope someone could fix and edit it, it has good concept but like most Fanfic by this author the english is so bad.
La idea es simplemente fenomenal rompe los conceptos de la edad de un anillo espiritual y lo hace de una forma fantástica implementado ideas de otros mundos
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I really wanted to get into this one in the MTL, but MC kept being called Waking Up instead of Su Xing. It was a chore to figure out his name, I'm giving 5 stars since I like DD/Soul Land. Good stuff
👍[img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Tiết lộ Spoilersaya menghargai karya anda dan walaupun ada beberapa yang tidak sesuai dengan keinginan saya pribadi,tapi saya akan tetap menilai ini sudah cukup bagus....semoga author bisa semakin mengembangkan karya tulis anda dan membuat ceerita yang lebih menarik lagi untuk kedepannya.....
😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤓🤓🤓🤓🤥🤓🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥🤥👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾😭👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾👾👍🏾👾👍🏾👾👍🏾👾👾👍🏾👍🏾😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😀😀😀🤓🤓😀😀
i had high hope for it but its a dissapoinment.Rape really.he thinks with his dick.rape is not for me bro.translation is readeble👎👎👎👎👎👎
Just want review myself 1.if you ask what link i Will silent and why i'am upload this fanfic if i just can give link and don't do anything else i just give link for next chapter and be lazy to update 2.its not from mtl this from outside site , why always mtl are you mtl worker so you promo on this content 3. i'am using translate from PC so what if you don't like this translate then don't read i'am not force you to read,and you not pay me (and vote just to motivate to update not to pay ) 4.and of you want complaine why not you translate funfic who have good story' so i Will critic you
Tiết lộ Spoileramazing translation "Harem MC" .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
Tiết lộ SpoilerNot sure If this isn't all just google translated from some Chinese writer (very hard to read sometimes) but the story itself in essence is very good. Whoever wrote all those stories is a genius at writing Soul Land fanfics. Very creative.
translation is so botched, cant even get the name right ........................................................a..a..a.a.a.a..a.a.a..a.a.a.a..a.a.a.a.
Wow! Another bad mtl translation of a chinese fanfiction with no links to nor permission from the original? This man must truly have no women on his phone.
The protagonist is similar to Yun Che. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. ... ... .. ... .
amazing translation .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
sorry but it's unreadable for me, i hope someone could fix and edit it, it has good concept but like most Fanfic by this author the english is so bad.
La idea es simplemente fenomenal rompe los conceptos de la edad de un anillo espiritual y lo hace de una forma fantástica implementado ideas de otros mundos
Я в восторге, продолжайте в том же духе![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]