First Love of mine

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Michael_Vishal_mz

This story is really very well written as i was reading this i was really much amazed by the writers thoughts which flowed in throught the chapter's. The author has portrayed the feelings of a teenage girl who was trying to fight with the world, the world in which her eyes seemed cruel and unfaithful. By the way it's a great teenage romance novel to start your day with. And one other thing is that you may also fall in love with this NOVEL. 😊

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Lunarwriter

The synopsis is fire 🔥 As for Ayla, her story is totally relatable. over thinking situations when there is a slight change in environment. I hope everything works out fine for her at the end. I will check on her in my free times, and try to advice her😂 even though her fate has been decided by the author 😂💔

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Agnst_Ella

Hey there , it's the author of the novel .I m here to express my thoughts .I won't say that my novel is very unique and you have to read but I sure will say this is something I poured my emotions while writing and I m trying to make the storyline as intresting as I can So whoever supporting me thanks for being here with me

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Jenival_Enyia

I love how you show Alya vulnerability right at the beginning. The characters are flawed but that's how human beings really are. As a teen book I look forward to watching your characters grow.

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Stefan_Bernard

This is well written. I love the build up that it's got. I enjoy how it clearly depicts the mind of a girl and how hard it is to move away from where she is used to.

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Janie_Endah

the synopsis is quite interesting. the dialogue between the characters is good as well. But, the narrative is a little bit confusing to me. Nonetheless, you're doing great.

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DaoistStDV7U

Can I just say how much I love this story?? I mean, its a new story that creates awareness on bullying and family relationships. It's also something that I can relate to. Keep up the good work author. More ink to your pens

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Wekpe_Efe

This book is so good. It's the way you started for me. Your first paragraph successfully drew me in and I wanted to see how your main character would survive her first day of high school with the hot Aaron lurking around. Nice one

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Anaise_Silverstri

Your novel has a certain sweetness to it and reminds me of the typical teen romance. Not only is it well paced, but you focused on the mental aspects of Ayla's life. I found what's she's going through to be relatable, something shared by many other young people out there. The narration could use a little fine tuning as it was a little hard for me to understand some parts but this is beautiful overall and I would encourage readers to stick with Ayla's story❤️

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RizzEditions

Really liked the soft and soothing environment and concept of the book. The characters are shown and interacted pretty well. Must say, a perfect read for the monsoon.^^

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Comfort_Wilson

Alya's insecurities are very relatable , an introvert like some of us. Meeting and people like her was hard for her than her brother who seems to be the life of the party . Reading this slow burner will lead one to leave in Ayla's shoes, I look forward to seeing her come out of her she'll and finally see the love that is calling out to her. weldone author .

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Osaze_Iyokho

This story is really detailed and we'll written. I love every aspect of it and the connection the Characters had with each other. the imagery and descriptions were top-notch. great work author.