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I read 76/192 chapters and this is a master piece! The way of describing characters, the world, the place and the story, it's all amazing. I started reading it and it's a really good book. I'm in love with the characters and the story. Definitely recommend it!
Just eight chapters and I feel like I'm in a Cinema, everything is so well explained that I don't need a dictionary to comprehend, I'm I love with the main character already as he emotions are well played out. if I write everything I love about this book down just after 8 chapters it'll be like 2k words so I'll keep it simple. I . ..love. .. this. ..book
The grammar and writing is flawless! Although I’be only read the first few chapters, it had already gotten me hooked to the story. Usually I never read FL stories but I gotta say, this one’s pretty amazing. The stability of chapters published is a big plus. The character of Serene reminds me of the fickleness of youth, wanting to explore the world outside but not truly knowing the gravity of it. The world building is also fantastic and leaves room for a lot of imagination and anticipation for the reader. Overall, this is a great book and I would highly recommend it to readers! Keep up the amazing work, Sunny!
This book is flawless and all I can say is read it. I'm at chapter 55 and everything so far just seems to melt with each other. The academy setting is a bang and so is the plot and characters.
The story is beautifully written. The author has put a lot of thought into the world-building, the writing style is clean and the conversations feel so natural. The uploading pace is monstrously fast for chapters of this quality. If you like fantasy romance, I would highly recommend this. 10/10
So much thought was put into the worldbuilding of this story. The pace matches my tastes in novels and the descriptions just make me feel like I was inside the book itself. Highly recommended :)
I am very much enjoying this! I enjoy the fact that I can read your novel whenever I am feeling drained from my own writing. please keep going, You deserve a place in the top 3
Fantastic plot. I love how the story takes me through memory lane of family beauty, duty and trial. The obligation of the MC and her determination to rise and succeed is amazing. Great job author.👍👍🤩🤩
I'm definitely speechless, the author is just.... no wow for this story, awesome plot, perfect world, even the writing is perfect. keep up the good work.
Oh My God! What a masterpiece! Everything, from plot, writing style, story line, and characters to execution, everything is seamlessly perfect. The story is intriguing. Inclusion of different POVs is unique. The plot is shrouded in mystery, ensnaring and captivating the reader, urging him/her to keep reading. I would love to recommend it!
The chapters are going in full swing. The world is mystical. I am hoping to see the character development in the work by the writer. Good luck!
You have quite an articulate way of writing!! I adore how the story unfolds!! Its pace in the storytelling is just right. Keep up the good work!! You have a great idea!!
I love the details that the story describes as the world background of each realm has its own people and is one of its classic fantasies, there is a potential that this novel will be as popular as the other famous novels out there, keep working hard fellow novelist!
hello, a casual reader here. I am at ch 49 , and i will leave it here for it to stack. i am already a huge sucker for academic arcs and tags and this one really delivers it and the characters....just read it...that's all i can say. i really enjoyed my read to the point that i added it to my library. what do i say, kudos to the author and i am really interested to see what happens with serene, especially the mysteries surrounding the wall. anyways, good luck to the author with his future direction of the story.
Wow! Just wow! Very well written and interesting story. The world building is fascinating and really well done... You are updating daily and also the story has a really great flow. I like how the realms and various races that inhabit them interact, I still don't know how you will make it work as it seems pretty difficult to me allready, but I have great expectation for this novel. Keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
This is crazy. With author's firm grip on the language to epic transition of the scenes this look to be a perfect book. I hope to see more of this. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS
I am very impressed with this story. I love the characters, especially the side character, Zian. Each chapter makes me want to read more. Great job, author. Keep it up.
So far from what I've read the novel is really good the writing style is clean and the dialogue is clear the first chapter really hooks the reader and keeps them wanting more
Aint gonna lie. First chapter of each novel is where it hook the reader. and this one definitely hooked my interest. The reading flow was fluid. I liked it. Thanks for sharing the story. Cheers!
Very much enjoyed this- its has an interesting feel to it and the characters are written nicely.
This is an amazing story so far! Even though I don't normally read FL stories this is definitely one of the best ones I've read so far! Keep up the good work!
Okay, so your writing style is good. I like the world-building as well, and honestly, there isn't much I have to suggest. Keep up the good work. I like your side characters more is what I have to say
Absolutely loving reading this book. It presents a beautiful amalgamation of different characters and merge them into storylines. Anticipating to see different kinds of creatures coming together and how different realms work. Love it so far. Highly recommended if you are looking for some story about magical creatures.
This story has great elements and is beautifully written reading it was effortless. I was obsessed with the characters, the plot, the intensity of emotions, action, and fantasy elements of this novel. I would for sure read a sequel or beg for a few side stories. It is a satisfying read that screans more from the author here or in future novels! 😍😍😍💋💋
I read 76/192 chapters and this is a master piece! The way of describing characters, the world, the place and the story, it's all amazing. I started reading it and it's a really good book. I'm in love with the characters and the story. Definitely recommend it!
Just eight chapters and I feel like I'm in a Cinema, everything is so well explained that I don't need a dictionary to comprehend, I'm I love with the main character already as he emotions are well played out. if I write everything I love about this book down just after 8 chapters it'll be like 2k words so I'll keep it simple. I . ..love. .. this. ..book
The grammar and writing is flawless! Although I’be only read the first few chapters, it had already gotten me hooked to the story. Usually I never read FL stories but I gotta say, this one’s pretty amazing. The stability of chapters published is a big plus. The character of Serene reminds me of the fickleness of youth, wanting to explore the world outside but not truly knowing the gravity of it. The world building is also fantastic and leaves room for a lot of imagination and anticipation for the reader. Overall, this is a great book and I would highly recommend it to readers! Keep up the amazing work, Sunny!
This book is flawless and all I can say is read it. I'm at chapter 55 and everything so far just seems to melt with each other. The academy setting is a bang and so is the plot and characters.
The story is beautifully written. The author has put a lot of thought into the world-building, the writing style is clean and the conversations feel so natural. The uploading pace is monstrously fast for chapters of this quality. If you like fantasy romance, I would highly recommend this. 10/10
So much thought was put into the worldbuilding of this story. The pace matches my tastes in novels and the descriptions just make me feel like I was inside the book itself. Highly recommended :)
I am very much enjoying this! I enjoy the fact that I can read your novel whenever I am feeling drained from my own writing. please keep going, You deserve a place in the top 3
Fantastic plot. I love how the story takes me through memory lane of family beauty, duty and trial. The obligation of the MC and her determination to rise and succeed is amazing. Great job author.👍👍🤩🤩
I'm definitely speechless, the author is just.... no wow for this story, awesome plot, perfect world, even the writing is perfect. keep up the good work.
Oh My God! What a masterpiece! Everything, from plot, writing style, story line, and characters to execution, everything is seamlessly perfect. The story is intriguing. Inclusion of different POVs is unique. The plot is shrouded in mystery, ensnaring and captivating the reader, urging him/her to keep reading. I would love to recommend it!
The chapters are going in full swing. The world is mystical. I am hoping to see the character development in the work by the writer. Good luck!
You have quite an articulate way of writing!! I adore how the story unfolds!! Its pace in the storytelling is just right. Keep up the good work!! You have a great idea!!
I love the details that the story describes as the world background of each realm has its own people and is one of its classic fantasies, there is a potential that this novel will be as popular as the other famous novels out there, keep working hard fellow novelist!
hello, a casual reader here. I am at ch 49 , and i will leave it here for it to stack. i am already a huge sucker for academic arcs and tags and this one really delivers it and the characters....just read it...that's all i can say. i really enjoyed my read to the point that i added it to my library. what do i say, kudos to the author and i am really interested to see what happens with serene, especially the mysteries surrounding the wall. anyways, good luck to the author with his future direction of the story.
Wow! Just wow! Very well written and interesting story. The world building is fascinating and really well done... You are updating daily and also the story has a really great flow. I like how the realms and various races that inhabit them interact, I still don't know how you will make it work as it seems pretty difficult to me allready, but I have great expectation for this novel. Keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update]
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
This is crazy. With author's firm grip on the language to epic transition of the scenes this look to be a perfect book. I hope to see more of this. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS
I am very impressed with this story. I love the characters, especially the side character, Zian. Each chapter makes me want to read more. Great job, author. Keep it up.
So far from what I've read the novel is really good the writing style is clean and the dialogue is clear the first chapter really hooks the reader and keeps them wanting more
Aint gonna lie. First chapter of each novel is where it hook the reader. and this one definitely hooked my interest. The reading flow was fluid. I liked it. Thanks for sharing the story. Cheers!
Very much enjoyed this- its has an interesting feel to it and the characters are written nicely.
This is an amazing story so far! Even though I don't normally read FL stories this is definitely one of the best ones I've read so far! Keep up the good work!
Okay, so your writing style is good. I like the world-building as well, and honestly, there isn't much I have to suggest. Keep up the good work. I like your side characters more is what I have to say
Absolutely loving reading this book. It presents a beautiful amalgamation of different characters and merge them into storylines. Anticipating to see different kinds of creatures coming together and how different realms work. Love it so far. Highly recommended if you are looking for some story about magical creatures.
This story has great elements and is beautifully written reading it was effortless. I was obsessed with the characters, the plot, the intensity of emotions, action, and fantasy elements of this novel. I would for sure read a sequel or beg for a few side stories. It is a satisfying read that screans more from the author here or in future novels! 😍😍😍💋💋