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I mean I think this kinda a sucky premise harry literally has pretty much every single person he ever loves killed except for his friends and even them are kind of wishy-washy like when Ron put him at arms length thinking he was the slytherin heir or not believinb he didnt put his name in the goblet of fire ginny signified his hope for the future and gave him the hope to face not just voldermort but a life after hogwarts where he wouldn't be that boy in a cupboard after it was gone depending on the timing of when you break his heart say right when Cedric dies or maybe do it right when he is on the Run with Hermione and Ron and Ron abandons them again he might just concede and try to get rid of the horcrux on his forgead by casting a bombarda right on his own melon (bad suicide joke) though I definitely feel that he would probably kill himself if he had that kind of huge betrayal after all of the tragedy that he has in his life that'd definitely be the straw on the camels back
Well it's started good but there are not so many chapters for bigger review and only thing i can say for now is that idea is great and first 6 chaps feel kinda rushed
I mean I think this kinda a sucky premise harry literally has pretty much every single person he ever loves killed except for his friends and even them are kind of wishy-washy like when Ron put him at arms length thinking he was the slytherin heir or not believinb he didnt put his name in the goblet of fire ginny signified his hope for the future and gave him the hope to face not just voldermort but a life after hogwarts where he wouldn't be that boy in a cupboard after it was gone depending on the timing of when you break his heart say right when Cedric dies or maybe do it right when he is on the Run with Hermione and Ron and Ron abandons them again he might just concede and try to get rid of the horcrux on his forgead by casting a bombarda right on his own melon (bad suicide joke) though I definitely feel that he would probably kill himself if he had that kind of huge betrayal after all of the tragedy that he has in his life that'd definitely be the straw on the camels back
Well it's started good but there are not so many chapters for bigger review and only thing i can say for now is that idea is great and first 6 chaps feel kinda rushed