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Непогана історія з достойним розвитком но плохо реалізована могли зробити краще но під кінець автор втомився и не знав куда розвивати дану історію а так твердая 4
10/10 the bast iknow maybe it is maybe it isn’t but yeah great story signing off aether
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dude, this was sick, it was a bit of a rocky start but after the misunderstanding was cleared up, it got really fun, this is certainly going into my top reading list. It was a fun read, although if your english isn't up to par it will be very hard.
It had potential but it gets worse as it progresses.Sorry----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Solo diré qué necesito un final para esto estamos apunto de lograr de ver un magnífico final para una gran novela, vamos campeón 50 capítulos nada más eso te pido para que cierres esta novela de los mejores que leído cuando se trata de tener menos de 100 capítulos y haber desarrollado una trama bien, pero bien genial
Short chapters, long winded, boring, no cleaver ideas to keep audiences entertain. what more do you need for brain damage? I give 2 stars for the effort.
I'll be honest about this but I was reluctant to read this book because of how the MC would be a perfectionist but after reading it I started to enjoy it because it's one of MC lovers is Hephaestus and how the story is going great so I'm starting to look forward for more updates 😊
I don't know why the review dropped below 4.0 but, I liked this novel, true the first few chapters were confusing but later after understanding his cheats it became better, though the mc acts like a kid and the whole trap theme is kinda annoying it's still a good read
this story reeks of baby's first crack fic if you aren't into that sort of thing this isn't for you.
Super criativo, gostei da integração de personagens de Lol,🌏🌎🌍🌎🌏🌎🌍🌏🌏🌎🌍🌎🌏🌍🌏🌍🌎🌏🌍🌎🌏🌏🌎🌍🌏🌏🌎🌍🌍🌐🌎🌍🌎🌍🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌎🌎🌎🌍🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌍🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎
My main issue is the writing style. The timeline is all over the place. One chapter starts at mid day the halfway through thw chapter it switches to what happened earlier that day. Then the progress to the next day then the go back the the previous day afternoon. It's fine for a story to do this from time to time but when the whole story is written like this it gets annoying. I'm reading a novel for entertainment not to solve a puzzle of the timeline.
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Personally I rate this story 3/5. Read to chapter 42. This story had a great start but miss the mark in character development in the end. We got chapters of sweet romance with Heph., than we got the chapter saying he will only consider women into the harem if they are 'pure'. Want to portrait the mc being fed up with people testing and obtaining info about him in chapter 42 but he is like a child throwing a tantrum to me.
This might be one of the best fanfiction I read the only think I don’t is harem……………………………………………….[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This story is a normal below average Webnovel fanfic. The mc is kinda garbage has nothing that makes you wanna read about him. The other characters aren’t good either.the other thing that makes bad other then the mc and side characters is how terrible the author is at explaining how he is doing stuff like how he can use the powers of the characters from league
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The fic could be good but the author has this weird fascination with female looking males as I guess he doesn't understand the perfect male has a deep voice, a square jaw, and a more square face with rigid sword like eyebrows. It's to the point where most characters refer to the MC as a girl🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎.
I really tried liking this but the author just comes up with bs to make mc stronger. The mc got shadow clone justsu but somehow he can change his clones into fictional characters and they have all their skills, techniques, memories and personality.
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Непогана історія з достойним розвитком но плохо реалізована могли зробити краще но під кінець автор втомився и не знав куда розвивати дану історію а так твердая 4
10/10 the bast iknow maybe it is maybe it isn’t but yeah great story signing off aether
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dude, this was sick, it was a bit of a rocky start but after the misunderstanding was cleared up, it got really fun, this is certainly going into my top reading list. It was a fun read, although if your english isn't up to par it will be very hard.
It had potential but it gets worse as it progresses.Sorry----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Solo diré qué necesito un final para esto estamos apunto de lograr de ver un magnífico final para una gran novela, vamos campeón 50 capítulos nada más eso te pido para que cierres esta novela de los mejores que leído cuando se trata de tener menos de 100 capítulos y haber desarrollado una trama bien, pero bien genial
Short chapters, long winded, boring, no cleaver ideas to keep audiences entertain. what more do you need for brain damage? I give 2 stars for the effort.
I'll be honest about this but I was reluctant to read this book because of how the MC would be a perfectionist but after reading it I started to enjoy it because it's one of MC lovers is Hephaestus and how the story is going great so I'm starting to look forward for more updates 😊
I don't know why the review dropped below 4.0 but, I liked this novel, true the first few chapters were confusing but later after understanding his cheats it became better, though the mc acts like a kid and the whole trap theme is kinda annoying it's still a good read
this story reeks of baby's first crack fic if you aren't into that sort of thing this isn't for you.
Super criativo, gostei da integração de personagens de Lol,🌏🌎🌍🌎🌏🌎🌍🌏🌏🌎🌍🌎🌏🌍🌏🌍🌎🌏🌍🌎🌏🌏🌎🌍🌏🌏🌎🌍🌍🌐🌎🌍🌎🌍🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌏🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌍🌎🌎🌎🌍🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌍🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎
My main issue is the writing style. The timeline is all over the place. One chapter starts at mid day the halfway through thw chapter it switches to what happened earlier that day. Then the progress to the next day then the go back the the previous day afternoon. It's fine for a story to do this from time to time but when the whole story is written like this it gets annoying. I'm reading a novel for entertainment not to solve a puzzle of the timeline.
Yeah no no no non non no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no non o no n on on ono no no no no no just no no no more no's
Personally I rate this story 3/5. Read to chapter 42. This story had a great start but miss the mark in character development in the end. We got chapters of sweet romance with Heph., than we got the chapter saying he will only consider women into the harem if they are 'pure'. Want to portrait the mc being fed up with people testing and obtaining info about him in chapter 42 but he is like a child throwing a tantrum to me.
This might be one of the best fanfiction I read the only think I don’t is harem……………………………………………….[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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This story is a normal below average Webnovel fanfic. The mc is kinda garbage has nothing that makes you wanna read about him. The other characters aren’t good either.the other thing that makes bad other then the mc and side characters is how terrible the author is at explaining how he is doing stuff like how he can use the powers of the characters from league
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for better rating for better rating for better rating for better rating for better rating for better rating for better rating for better rating for better rating
The fic could be good but the author has this weird fascination with female looking males as I guess he doesn't understand the perfect male has a deep voice, a square jaw, and a more square face with rigid sword like eyebrows. It's to the point where most characters refer to the MC as a girl🤮👎👎👎👎👎👎.
I really tried liking this but the author just comes up with bs to make mc stronger. The mc got shadow clone justsu but somehow he can change his clones into fictional characters and they have all their skills, techniques, memories and personality.
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