The lightning Descendant

LV 14

Gladstone_

I love this story,got me hooked from the first chapter The MC is quite intelligent and the world building is very good You should try this

LV 1

Bibek_paul

oh my god!! I just loved the way the first chapter is written. The scenes weren't detailed yet they could be understood and virtualized. I enjoyed the first chapter and now turning to another. #lovedthestory

I will rate you give stats for this one. The start alone was able to capture my attention. At least it has a better start than the God level mage. Moreover, the character uses the lightning element. One of my best elements. Great work. Can't wait to see how it will go!

LV 1

_Smart_Guy

This Story will be super intresting. The author start this time was much better than what he started previously. I am a fan of your first work: The God level Mage. I can't wait to see what would happen with this one too

LV 1

TreasureFinal

Amazing! Another story from my most favourite author. It even started well this time. The start for this story is totally amazing. I like the synopsis too. It's simple and short. I am looking forward to more releases.

Nice story. Great start and obviously a good choice. Setting is easy to see and one The main character is quite stubborn I like it🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

LV 1

Prince_Bob

Nice story. The setting is almost perfect and good. I like the story very much. The first paragraph for the start was what made me like the story. Great work author. And I hope you don't stop posting the God level mage😘😇😇😇

LV 1

Nons_Ense

The synopsis surely hooked me up. As for the first chapter, it's one of the best ever. It's very good. I like this story too. It's definitely amazing and wonderful. 😎😎😍😍😍😍

LV 4

Mel_Aniv

The opening chap made a grand opening. And it sure did hooked me up, though only it has 1 chap for now. But As I have read, you have passable quality. With flying colors I must say [img=recommend] The only thing I can point out was the paragraphs were too long. Maybe you can cut them and let the readers rest in between 😊

LV 11

RaygonWolf

Would highly recommend this novel, it has an amazing story that hooks you straight in. The way the magic is do is very interesting and the characters are just as interesting. I'd highly recommend giving this novel a try it is a great read especially if you like magic

LV 13

IkuSaari

Plot is good. It may not be the most original ever, but that is not necessarily a bad thing at all. The first chapter picked me up so nicely with a vivid description that I got into the story as well. I think the strongest point of the author is setting the scenery, while writing mistakes (grammar etc.) appeared here and there. It's still very much readable.

LV 3

MosbyYors

Has FANTASTIC character development and is a great plot. Incredible story, high-quality writing that is rarely found on this platform. Fast, action-packed pacing with a legitimately smart mc who grows visibly as a character. All in all A+ work. I would recommend this novel to anyone capable of reading it. Keep up the good work!

LV 13

KhyaaL

Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

LV 4

Riceballs_25

I like it that MC is fierce and doesn't sit back and let others dictate his life to him. I also like how creative the writer is in regards to the superhero plot. Travis certainly is an interesting character, who I would love to see level up from weak to strong. Okay flow of writing and chapters are understandable, only wish there were more than three chapters. Good job Author-san. A good read that I highly recommend to all WN readers.

LV 1

Godwin_Nyanteh_5332

Great start! Amazing plot and character's design is dope. I will rate you 5 stats this time. I am one of your biggest fans on your old book. The God level mage. Can't wait to see how this story will go!😁😁😁

LV 15

thechummygremlin

This novel started strong. While there were some parts I feel could have been explored a bit more, pacing was fine too. however, when the author started to copy\paste half of previous chapters, continuity and readability broke.

LV 15

Tims232

This story is good and shows potential. The only thing I can complain about is the spelling and grammar. If the author/translator went back and fixed that then they would be more popular and would have a happier audience. It ruins the mood when you have to unscramble letters and do detective work once every couple of paragraphs to figure out what's going on.

LV 2

ArgaNov01

Honestly, I don't often read overpowered characters. But, I like this story. I like smart characters. I'm really looking forward to the development of the main character.

LV 12

Deaboro

while I really enjoy rushed storys this is on another lvl. it's to the point that it starts to be kind of random also.... wth are ****** THESEE FOR you put them every 10 sec in the text

LV 3

steph_pesi

An enjoyable read since I love superheroes and I can't wait to read the other chapters. I personally would describe more and use less sound effects like the 'woosh' and all that. It had more of a comical effect and made me laugh when the mood and tone was serious. I know. I'm unique 😂😂😂. It's just like a comic book without pictures. I'd love to read the comic if you make one. Then again really good.

LV 4

Senpaipuku

I like the start of the novel. The author did a great job on the narration as well as conversations between characters. You did a good job author! Keep it up!