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This is an action-packed story about a boy, Troan, that lost his parents and grew up on the streets. He became a thief to survive, but was caught and had to face the consequences, to survive a whole week in a forest full of beasts. That’s when he realized that he was reborn. Troan’s memories helped him survive in the wilderness and fight off all the different monsters that tried to kill him. I enjoyed reading the fight scenes, especially those when Troan had to take on multiple opponents at the same time. The fact that Troan came back from the “forest of the trial” caught Gerald’s (the Paladin’s) interest. And Troan officially became a Paladin recruit. Troan has good judgment, knows when he has the chance to win and when to surrender, and how to make friends. But this is just the beginning!
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This story is really good and looking forward to its growth. It's not a generic rebirth, it has unique elements to its world, the author surely can develppe this one into a fantastic novel. I really want to see what the mc will do to regain his GRANDMASTER power and position or will the humanity survive and dominate the demons
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The novel is very interesting, and everything is well explained, especially about Troan. The story is very fast paced, and there is so much action. I hope all the best to the author
The journey of Troan sounds promising! And rebirth theme always attracts my good side. Good luck, bro! Keep it up!
I love the way you write, especially with how you started the chapter. I'm hooked! Troan is also an interesting character! Keep up the good work, author!
The story itself is good. Worldbuilding and the character design are incredible. Rebirth stories are hard to write, I liked the way the author has made this hard-to-write story easy to read. Pacing is fast but it takes you directly to the scene. Good work
I gotta say it's an interesting read. The description used is diverse and detailed. I can imagine the scenarios in my head as I read. Especially the you know.. *spoiler alert* (eating worms) LOL. Really great job! You don't know how much I cringe at that author! The pace is also greatly done! I'm driven to get immersed in the story and take part of the world you created. A masterpiece! I would like to see more where this is going. Looking forward to your updates!
This story is fast-paced and gets you right into the action. The premise of the world and the potential that Troan has with his memories from his past lives really make you excited about how amazing he will be in the future. Definitely recommending this to anyone who likes to read fantasy stories that had a unique premise, rich worldbuilding, and fast-paced actions!
Story is good, pacing and character design is amazing. The world background is good, but there's only a little problem... Writing quality... little mistakes can be seen here and there, but are not enough to spoil the story. I hope the author releases better chapters soon! Peace.
I like Troan. He's quite brave and was able to get a hold of himself without getting confused even for a moment after got his memories back!
The writing and delivery is great. The mc is also has a charm, which is good. I don't read rebirth novels that often but I like how you make the story. I just wish that we could read about his childhood more though. His adventures, and the robberies and the stealing and all. I think that would add a foundation for the story.
The story of Troan is immersive and the pace is great. These type of novels are hard to write but the author has went beyond expectations and kept every twist and turn connected with the pace. Do keep up the good work!
An awesome book by all accounts. Troan has me wondering all sorts of things. pure talent at play here. the updating stability is good. grammar,on point and character design leaves little to desire. I applaud the author. this is a big book in progress.definitely a worthy read.
Rebirth Novels are one of the most difficult novels to write out there. The author makes it so simple and easy to understand. And as for the flow, It is one of the best one out there. Definitely not the Jack and Joe novels out there. This novel is so interesting that I have stopped reading my current novel so that I could read it. Plot: amazing. Character development: almost perfect Story development: Best out there
This is a very interesting read with a unique premise and plot. Troan is a very likable character and the action scenes are well orchestrated. I really enjoy how the author puts in just the right amount of feels to make you invested into the characters and the story. The characters other than the MC are also very realistic and enjoyable. Really looking forward to more!
The first few chapters are very mysterious, interesting, and action packed. Not only that, the writing is pretty good and the author does a pretty good job of describing and setting the scene. There are a few grammatical errors and odd sentence struture here and there, but overall its a very interesting read. I look forward to reading more chapters. Good work, auhtor.
This is an action-packed story about a boy, Troan, that lost his parents and grew up on the streets. He became a thief to survive, but was caught and had to face the consequences, to survive a whole week in a forest full of beasts. That’s when he realized that he was reborn. Troan’s memories helped him survive in the wilderness and fight off all the different monsters that tried to kill him. I enjoyed reading the fight scenes, especially those when Troan had to take on multiple opponents at the same time. The fact that Troan came back from the “forest of the trial” caught Gerald’s (the Paladin’s) interest. And Troan officially became a Paladin recruit. Troan has good judgment, knows when he has the chance to win and when to surrender, and how to make friends. But this is just the beginning!
Tiết lộ Spoiler This story is really good and looking forward to its growth. It's not a generic rebirth, it has unique elements to its world, the author surely can develppe this one into a fantastic novel. I really want to see what the mc will do to regain his GRANDMASTER power and position or will the humanity survive and dominate the demons
Tiết lộ Spoiler The novel is very interesting, and everything is well explained, especially about Troan. The story is very fast paced, and there is so much action. I hope all the best to the author
The journey of Troan sounds promising! And rebirth theme always attracts my good side. Good luck, bro! Keep it up!
I love the way you write, especially with how you started the chapter. I'm hooked! Troan is also an interesting character! Keep up the good work, author!
The story itself is good. Worldbuilding and the character design are incredible. Rebirth stories are hard to write, I liked the way the author has made this hard-to-write story easy to read. Pacing is fast but it takes you directly to the scene. Good work
I gotta say it's an interesting read. The description used is diverse and detailed. I can imagine the scenarios in my head as I read. Especially the you know.. *spoiler alert* (eating worms) LOL. Really great job! You don't know how much I cringe at that author! The pace is also greatly done! I'm driven to get immersed in the story and take part of the world you created. A masterpiece! I would like to see more where this is going. Looking forward to your updates!
This story is fast-paced and gets you right into the action. The premise of the world and the potential that Troan has with his memories from his past lives really make you excited about how amazing he will be in the future. Definitely recommending this to anyone who likes to read fantasy stories that had a unique premise, rich worldbuilding, and fast-paced actions!
Story is good, pacing and character design is amazing. The world background is good, but there's only a little problem... Writing quality... little mistakes can be seen here and there, but are not enough to spoil the story. I hope the author releases better chapters soon! Peace.
I like Troan. He's quite brave and was able to get a hold of himself without getting confused even for a moment after got his memories back!
The writing and delivery is great. The mc is also has a charm, which is good. I don't read rebirth novels that often but I like how you make the story. I just wish that we could read about his childhood more though. His adventures, and the robberies and the stealing and all. I think that would add a foundation for the story.
The story of Troan is immersive and the pace is great. These type of novels are hard to write but the author has went beyond expectations and kept every twist and turn connected with the pace. Do keep up the good work!
An awesome book by all accounts. Troan has me wondering all sorts of things. pure talent at play here. the updating stability is good. grammar,on point and character design leaves little to desire. I applaud the author. this is a big book in progress.definitely a worthy read.
Rebirth Novels are one of the most difficult novels to write out there. The author makes it so simple and easy to understand. And as for the flow, It is one of the best one out there. Definitely not the Jack and Joe novels out there. This novel is so interesting that I have stopped reading my current novel so that I could read it. Plot: amazing. Character development: almost perfect Story development: Best out there
This is a very interesting read with a unique premise and plot. Troan is a very likable character and the action scenes are well orchestrated. I really enjoy how the author puts in just the right amount of feels to make you invested into the characters and the story. The characters other than the MC are also very realistic and enjoyable. Really looking forward to more!
The first few chapters are very mysterious, interesting, and action packed. Not only that, the writing is pretty good and the author does a pretty good job of describing and setting the scene. There are a few grammatical errors and odd sentence struture here and there, but overall its a very interesting read. I look forward to reading more chapters. Good work, auhtor.