(BL) Transmigration: Latent Intrinsic Love

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Hoeny_bear

Amazing...I super love Jian Yu's character. Such a naughty boy..surely I would love to read the romance between the leads..transmigration is something that's clicking me..how would he transmigrate to other world and what a cliffhanger..he was a consort prince in past life

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diddingsdddd

You have a strong grasp on telling the story, your writing is clear and moves the story along. Judging from the first chapter alone i can tell your wary of info dumps so good job on that. -----------However, the plot, pacing, dialogue and believability, sorta takes a massive back seat. This is mainly due to clarity, your trying to mask the main character in mystery, even to the point of masking the other characters and clouding your story. The next problem you have is slipping back and forth between present tense and past tense. When it comes to this genre the number one killer is clarity, what's is happening ,why is happening, who's saying what? (Who is the female officer, and if they spoke for over an hour it is highly unlikely that she didn't introduce herself already, and highly unlikely we don't know any other the character's names). Last piece of advice , if you have to put something in a glossary for readers to understand, then you did a poor job presenting it in your story. I don't see info dumps, so I doubt you will have this problem, but then again, zero info within an unclear story can be equally as bad.

LV 14

JiggyGizzy

This story is entertaining and a page turner, the writing style is easy to follow and the ML is a fascinating character and how he relates to others around him is unique and quite interesting to read.The story flows well and makes me want to keep reading, thank you for this story writer and keep on updating, highly recommend it!

LV 11

OnizukaShinu

That opening was amazing, it captures my heart instantly. Jian Yu is a lovable playboy that is able to charm the heart of the characters and the heart of the readers. I have no complaints so far. World building is great, the environment, the tone of the emotions, all are beautifully written. Writing quality is top notch! Great job author and Fight On!

LV 2

Gautam_Goyal_

Kika (my cat) gave you 5 stars for writing quality and then 5 for background later. YOU HAVE THE APPROVAL OF THE HOLY CAT! Increase your updating stability though.

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Princess_anos123

Amazing work!!! Got me hooked to the core!!! The writing style is amazing!!! Good plotline and the characters are amazing and addictive!!! Waiting for more updates! [img=update] Keep it up author!

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_Nightin_gale_

Honestly, the storyline has a LOT of potential, especially because Jian Yu's character is so refreshing and unique. Just some errors here and there disrupt the reading flow, otherwise the book is pretty fun. Hope the stepmom's not all that bad. keep going!!!

LV 4

Senpaipuku

The author's writing style is praiseworthy and I like the chemistry between characters. ........................................................

LV 3

DymenS

First of all, I like Jiang Yu's character The character design is interesting and the writing style of pretty good. And so far the plot is interesting. This is a really good book

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Taiha

Marvelous work done by the author.. So this is an honest review I found the book randomly and gave it a try.. So far what's written inside is a world every reader craves for.. So for Hui Jian Yu.. He's such a baddie boy but still so hot and handsome.. Then comes the ML Lu Qiao Yan ...woah god that's the cherry on the top.. The ML's best friend Yang Yifeng.. his name is enough to make the girls out there drool over him.. The nice and cute little doll Wen seems to be the innocent one here..and hope so he would be.. And author I am going to stick to the end of this book and I swear with my life.. The best start..I have read here on Webnovel so far[img=recommend]

LV 14

DeathWalker

Interesting read, author. Very interesting read. The characters are nicely written and bring the book to life. The plot is even written nicely so that you are waiting and wanting for another chapter. Good job and keep up the good work.

LV 13

Nightsummer20

The plot sure is unique and I'm loving the story so far. The author has done an incredible job in depicting the interactions between the male leads. I'm eager to see what's coming next. All the very best author💜

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babydragon25

The writing just needs a little adjustments and asides from that perfecto so I would suggest that people try it out. It's very nice and interesting to read

LV 10

RobynCardona

The author uses flowery language that is typical for Chinese novels. I really loved it! I wished more authors would write this poetically. There were some grammar and spelling errors that threw me off, however. The protagonist cones off as quite an unlikeable (to me) brat, but that will probably change after his transmigration 😁 The story is dense (despite the flowery language!) and mirrors the atmosphere and protagonist's lifestyle. The legend used as a story hook is beautiful and creative. Please keep up the good work!

LV 12

Empzze

Great work author, interesting plot and characters with well written chapters, just started reading but I can tell your story has great potential, I'm so hyped to see where it goes. Keep it up author.

LV 11

Rayne_Rue

Amazing work author I really loved the characters, and I liked the plot, and the amazing character design, Your writing quality is great and anyone that will read this book will find it easy to read and enjoy it more, great work !!!!

LV 3

Daoistbips

This story is quite unique and funny. I read a few BL novels but they were never my jam. This novel, however, feels so fresh and unique. As a reader, i instantly fell in love with the characters and the world. If there were many chapters, I bet there would have many readers and fan bases to this novel. I have added this book to my collections and rate it five stars because this novel deserves it. Great characters, great story flow, and my favorite, the interaction between the MC and the ML.

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Daoist5FxRSw

beautiful story! i liked it. the grammar is excellent and the characters are lovable. I cant wait to read more chapters. i am very excited to read more!