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this story is one of THE BEST I have ever read only problems are the later on where he focuses to much on divine powers instead of mastering the remaning elements water and earth , with the planet geting destroyed the story feels to different now .
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Автор сын тайской шл. Фанфик полное гавно, Авторй тупой ублюдок ! Как можно ставить мир ДС и мира Аватар на 1 уровне? Разница же как небо и земля но нет лишь с какими то способностями контролю на стихями он сражается с топами вселенной! Автор ты хоть знаешь уровень сил мира ДС!?
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It's an alright fanfic but as a racist I can't really enjoy it because mc is black
The story is extremely good. Writing quality, grammar, plot, side characters, mc's power all are ok. But I can't take it anymore, with patience I read 200+ chapter but man the mc's character is really killing the story. It's not his anti hero act that has problem it's his behavior and attitude at some time will make you wanna beat the shit out of him. Sometimes it get really irritating. If you put yourself in mc's pov some of his behavior will annoy you but if you put yourself with other side characters pov and facing the mc you will just want to kill him
Really disappointing. It was a generic start then it became slightly better then became aight then starts to fall off
Una buena historia, no está terminada y parece que fue abandonada, me hubiera gustado saber cómo terminaba la aventura y algo de la vida futura de los hijos del Avatar.
The story has its issues, but I tried to ignore it because it also has some good. However, two issues forced me to drop this. The MC does something stupid and then gets saved by a Deus Ex Machina. This happens a couple of times. Also, the MC has a "Revelation" every so often about how wrong he was and how he needs to learn *blank*. But it never ends. There must've been like 20 "Revelations" and he's still as dumb as a brick. It feels like a waste of time, because any supposed lesson he learns means nothing. And when he inevitably screws up, he'll just get saved by a plot device anyway.
Good English grammar, doesn't hurt my eyes just to try and translate the meaning of each sentence.
In the beginning is was great fantastic plot twist and great power progression but it all went down when he beat dark side and he start going to different multi verses like marvel it makes everything so much more confusing with the different pig's and made it repetitive and boring with all the fights.
A great and masterful story it went downhill literally a train emergency stop sorta after the whole 3 months later at chapter 172. Good luck author
I have a lot to say about this work, but at the same time I don't. It's a special work for me, I like its ingredients, be it the avatar, the MC's love for music, the Dc universe and especially being the Young Justice universe, it seemed like one of the best things I'd read would come out...it was, but at the same time same time it was not. The story in its first half is quite interesting with the author dividing each arc the same way in the avatar series with MC dominating 1 element at a time, I like it, and I like even more the inclusion of MC in the story, I think his powers fit, but I need to say, I understand what the author wanted to do, but I don't agree, he shouldn't have told Batman that they live in a comic book world, I feel like it breaks the immersion and we start looking at the audience, us, when in In reality, we just want them to focus on each other without having to go through some existential crisis, something that, by the way, ruined Batman's character, made him even more paranoid and frankly annoying after a certain moment. Speaking of Batman, I have a love-hate relationship with the Justice League, I feel that the author forced the league's hatred towards Mc too much, they ALWAYS saw the worst in Mc's actions and although Mc is not the best person, there was a lack of nuance between the gray characters in the league, especially Diana, I know she defends justice and things like that, but this was a warrior for thousands of years, she killed hundreds or thousands of people, she should be more complex and show a better point of view for the MC instead of being so antagonistic that she suddenly likes the MC and never said anything to him, which by the way, bizarre, Diana was one of the most irritating characters in this work after a while, Always arrogant, always cold and suddenly you have feelings for MC? I like the idea of MC moving away from the team due to the conflict of ideologies so I don't know, it's half and half for me. World: As I said, I really like the world and the author even added some things like Lucifer, who in particular is always welcome but dangerous to the plot due to the scale of power he acts, said and done, after the mysteries of the system and the avatar state were discovered, everything became very confusing, one moment he is a perpetual, another the son of miguel and then the creation of a dark being from the omniverse who used the one world system (which according to the author is the world created by iroh , who is a god and created an avatar??? It was never explained how iroh is exactly a god and is still a character in the avatar canon). Things took proportions beyond understanding, okayThe author may go crazy, but I think he lost his hand, at one time he was fighting against beings at Lucifer's level, at another he was having difficulty with beings below him (I'm referring to him using the avatar state and this inconsistency). I was also very bothered by the author's passion for fire, seriously, after reading so many works from so many different genres, I developed an immense dislike for mcs that use fire, for me it's the height of the cliche and the genre and the ultimate lack of creativity. , seriously, I almost hate it, and seeing the author literally create several variations, several types of fire and leave other elements aside bothered me deeply because the scale of power was so broken at this point that you, the reader, didn't even see a reason to him learning earth and water when at this point mc had powers of order and chaos, like, why would I mess with water when I can shape reality?? So when he went to develop the other two remaining elements, I felt a lack of care that the previous ones had because it simply wasn't the same thing, the author at that point was attributing the elements, meanings to his divinity and it became very confusing, it seems like he skipped stages and came back while still doing the advanced, I don't know, I didn't like that the power level had gone up so much and he still hadn't dominated the earth for example, but that's my opinion, it's more of a rant than anything. Last but not least I have to talk about the novel... Which is difficult to explain... For some reason that I simply don't understand when Kora appeared in the story, the author simply decided to do a time-skip going to the point that They already had a relationship and separated for reasons that, frankly, at first you understand, but then you think and say ''that doesn't make sense'' and in fact it doesn't because you have no idea how the conversation happened, you don't know what that Kori thought was bad, in fact the whole basis of the relationship you didn't see and won't see, all we have is them talking about moments they had that the reader didn't see at any time. This creates a distance and discomfort in the reader because he has no attachment, there was no introduction and I personally get the feeling ''it would be better if there wasn't fmc'', it would be better for mc alone because every time kori appeared and she talked about the feelings or mc reciprocated I was uncomfortable because I felt like those people who joined a circle of friends for years and you, the new guy, have no story to share because you simply don't know them well enough and that is very annoying.... That was my criticism, which is more of a rant than anything else, it's a very good and engaging story that keeps you hooked and has great ideas, especially in the last chapters I read. Seriously the idea of MC going to Marvel and falling on Mars and falling asleep while the remnants of his power leak out and head towards Earth, creating a whole different branch of magic is extremely incredible, it was a refreshing and interesting place for an MC to be in. But I wouldn't read it again, I suffered a lot of frustration and I don't want to go through that again
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best story i read on webnovel. i hate all the people who randomly put 10 comments with 1 star here. so i am gonna rectify that
I picked this up at random not expecting anything from it while I was waiting on other books to update and I got so into this book that I stopped reading anything else. It pulled me in and didn't let go.
The protagonist is the most hypocritical thing I have ever seen in a novel, he gets angry when they only question him, being right to do so since he has secrets that can affect the team and he knows it and emphasizes it, and the fact that he does not understand it makes him incredibly stupid; The situation of others discovering their things seems forced to me, look, he had time to hide them but no; He thinks he is mature but he is not, he complains about the drama and he is the most dramatic, he literally starts the problems.
I don't like MC's attitude for some reason. disgusting[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i dislike how the mc can change from making a good decision to just being dumb. but overall i found this one enjoyable and would recommend to others
Fker told em they are comic characters and everything.... fkin bs................................................................................
This honestly has no one one of my favorite to read in my past time from the story telling to the character development this book captures each character and story beautifully.
I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it
In all honesty the only real issue here is the updates, they are so unstable that it hurts the story gravely For all the rest the author ironed and refined pretty much all the other earlier (and not so earlier) Defects
The fact that the justice league knows that he was reincarnated and even that he remembers their universe as a cartoon is cringe af. honestly just the fact that he is in the young justice group is kinda lame.. the mc acts worse than they do. in case ppl dont know, they act like entitled 12 year olds. cuz they kinda are. robin is 13 and acts like it. Mc makes the same mistake every mission and recognises that, but just 'smiles at the others' and does it anyway like a retard.
dont like the mc at all so annoying its almost unbearable the cringyness level is to high for me . he is lacking a backbone aswell, mc keeps acting like freaking saint its a bit boring
Não querendo desmerecer o autor mas achei essa fanfic no máximo mediana para mim. O que estragou essa história pra mim foi o MC continuar cometendo os mesmos erros é os problemas mentais que ele tinha é não eram resolvidos, isso estragou muito minha leitura, pra quem quiser ler recomendo paciência. (181-267)
This book is glorious! I'm not gonna lie but the fanfic started dying a bit. However, when you brought him to the marvel universe, the story hit its peak again. I truly hope you won't drop this amazing fanfic!
Всегда есть что улучшить 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊¡!!!!!!!!! ¡!!!!!!!! ¡!!!!!!!! ¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ¡
Horrible, they take the information that he is from another reality out of nowhere, without mentioning him saying that they were a comic series, this breaks the immersion without taking into account the psyche of the characters when they find out, this destroys the story in the first chapters, even though there were endless excuses plausible for not having a record, I just gave it one star because I couldn't do it any less
this story is one of THE BEST I have ever read only problems are the later on where he focuses to much on divine powers instead of mastering the remaning elements water and earth , with the planet geting destroyed the story feels to different now .
Tiết lộ Spoiler Автор сын тайской шл. Фанфик полное гавно, Авторй тупой ублюдок ! Как можно ставить мир ДС и мира Аватар на 1 уровне? Разница же как небо и земля но нет лишь с какими то способностями контролю на стихями он сражается с топами вселенной! Автор ты хоть знаешь уровень сил мира ДС!?
Tiết lộ Spoiler It's an alright fanfic but as a racist I can't really enjoy it because mc is black
The story is extremely good. Writing quality, grammar, plot, side characters, mc's power all are ok. But I can't take it anymore, with patience I read 200+ chapter but man the mc's character is really killing the story. It's not his anti hero act that has problem it's his behavior and attitude at some time will make you wanna beat the shit out of him. Sometimes it get really irritating. If you put yourself in mc's pov some of his behavior will annoy you but if you put yourself with other side characters pov and facing the mc you will just want to kill him
Really disappointing. It was a generic start then it became slightly better then became aight then starts to fall off
Una buena historia, no está terminada y parece que fue abandonada, me hubiera gustado saber cómo terminaba la aventura y algo de la vida futura de los hijos del Avatar.
The story has its issues, but I tried to ignore it because it also has some good. However, two issues forced me to drop this. The MC does something stupid and then gets saved by a Deus Ex Machina. This happens a couple of times. Also, the MC has a "Revelation" every so often about how wrong he was and how he needs to learn *blank*. But it never ends. There must've been like 20 "Revelations" and he's still as dumb as a brick. It feels like a waste of time, because any supposed lesson he learns means nothing. And when he inevitably screws up, he'll just get saved by a plot device anyway.
Good English grammar, doesn't hurt my eyes just to try and translate the meaning of each sentence.
In the beginning is was great fantastic plot twist and great power progression but it all went down when he beat dark side and he start going to different multi verses like marvel it makes everything so much more confusing with the different pig's and made it repetitive and boring with all the fights.
A great and masterful story it went downhill literally a train emergency stop sorta after the whole 3 months later at chapter 172. Good luck author
I have a lot to say about this work, but at the same time I don't. It's a special work for me, I like its ingredients, be it the avatar, the MC's love for music, the Dc universe and especially being the Young Justice universe, it seemed like one of the best things I'd read would come out...it was, but at the same time same time it was not. The story in its first half is quite interesting with the author dividing each arc the same way in the avatar series with MC dominating 1 element at a time, I like it, and I like even more the inclusion of MC in the story, I think his powers fit, but I need to say, I understand what the author wanted to do, but I don't agree, he shouldn't have told Batman that they live in a comic book world, I feel like it breaks the immersion and we start looking at the audience, us, when in In reality, we just want them to focus on each other without having to go through some existential crisis, something that, by the way, ruined Batman's character, made him even more paranoid and frankly annoying after a certain moment. Speaking of Batman, I have a love-hate relationship with the Justice League, I feel that the author forced the league's hatred towards Mc too much, they ALWAYS saw the worst in Mc's actions and although Mc is not the best person, there was a lack of nuance between the gray characters in the league, especially Diana, I know she defends justice and things like that, but this was a warrior for thousands of years, she killed hundreds or thousands of people, she should be more complex and show a better point of view for the MC instead of being so antagonistic that she suddenly likes the MC and never said anything to him, which by the way, bizarre, Diana was one of the most irritating characters in this work after a while, Always arrogant, always cold and suddenly you have feelings for MC? I like the idea of MC moving away from the team due to the conflict of ideologies so I don't know, it's half and half for me. World: As I said, I really like the world and the author even added some things like Lucifer, who in particular is always welcome but dangerous to the plot due to the scale of power he acts, said and done, after the mysteries of the system and the avatar state were discovered, everything became very confusing, one moment he is a perpetual, another the son of miguel and then the creation of a dark being from the omniverse who used the one world system (which according to the author is the world created by iroh , who is a god and created an avatar??? It was never explained how iroh is exactly a god and is still a character in the avatar canon). Things took proportions beyond understanding, okayThe author may go crazy, but I think he lost his hand, at one time he was fighting against beings at Lucifer's level, at another he was having difficulty with beings below him (I'm referring to him using the avatar state and this inconsistency). I was also very bothered by the author's passion for fire, seriously, after reading so many works from so many different genres, I developed an immense dislike for mcs that use fire, for me it's the height of the cliche and the genre and the ultimate lack of creativity. , seriously, I almost hate it, and seeing the author literally create several variations, several types of fire and leave other elements aside bothered me deeply because the scale of power was so broken at this point that you, the reader, didn't even see a reason to him learning earth and water when at this point mc had powers of order and chaos, like, why would I mess with water when I can shape reality?? So when he went to develop the other two remaining elements, I felt a lack of care that the previous ones had because it simply wasn't the same thing, the author at that point was attributing the elements, meanings to his divinity and it became very confusing, it seems like he skipped stages and came back while still doing the advanced, I don't know, I didn't like that the power level had gone up so much and he still hadn't dominated the earth for example, but that's my opinion, it's more of a rant than anything. Last but not least I have to talk about the novel... Which is difficult to explain... For some reason that I simply don't understand when Kora appeared in the story, the author simply decided to do a time-skip going to the point that They already had a relationship and separated for reasons that, frankly, at first you understand, but then you think and say ''that doesn't make sense'' and in fact it doesn't because you have no idea how the conversation happened, you don't know what that Kori thought was bad, in fact the whole basis of the relationship you didn't see and won't see, all we have is them talking about moments they had that the reader didn't see at any time. This creates a distance and discomfort in the reader because he has no attachment, there was no introduction and I personally get the feeling ''it would be better if there wasn't fmc'', it would be better for mc alone because every time kori appeared and she talked about the feelings or mc reciprocated I was uncomfortable because I felt like those people who joined a circle of friends for years and you, the new guy, have no story to share because you simply don't know them well enough and that is very annoying.... That was my criticism, which is more of a rant than anything else, it's a very good and engaging story that keeps you hooked and has great ideas, especially in the last chapters I read. Seriously the idea of MC going to Marvel and falling on Mars and falling asleep while the remnants of his power leak out and head towards Earth, creating a whole different branch of magic is extremely incredible, it was a refreshing and interesting place for an MC to be in. But I wouldn't read it again, I suffered a lot of frustration and I don't want to go through that again
Tiết lộ Spoiler olha a fanfic e boa mas o romance e terrível e estrago tudo por isso não vale 5 estrelas
Escribe tu reseña aquí. Por favor escriba su reseña lo más detallada que pueda. Tus reseñas serían muy importantes para la historia (al menos 140 caracteres).
best story i read on webnovel. i hate all the people who randomly put 10 comments with 1 star here. so i am gonna rectify that
I picked this up at random not expecting anything from it while I was waiting on other books to update and I got so into this book that I stopped reading anything else. It pulled me in and didn't let go.
The protagonist is the most hypocritical thing I have ever seen in a novel, he gets angry when they only question him, being right to do so since he has secrets that can affect the team and he knows it and emphasizes it, and the fact that he does not understand it makes him incredibly stupid; The situation of others discovering their things seems forced to me, look, he had time to hide them but no; He thinks he is mature but he is not, he complains about the drama and he is the most dramatic, he literally starts the problems.
I don't like MC's attitude for some reason. disgusting[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
i dislike how the mc can change from making a good decision to just being dumb. but overall i found this one enjoyable and would recommend to others
Fker told em they are comic characters and everything.... fkin bs................................................................................
This honestly has no one one of my favorite to read in my past time from the story telling to the character development this book captures each character and story beautifully.
I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it I hate it
In all honesty the only real issue here is the updates, they are so unstable that it hurts the story gravely For all the rest the author ironed and refined pretty much all the other earlier (and not so earlier) Defects
The fact that the justice league knows that he was reincarnated and even that he remembers their universe as a cartoon is cringe af. honestly just the fact that he is in the young justice group is kinda lame.. the mc acts worse than they do. in case ppl dont know, they act like entitled 12 year olds. cuz they kinda are. robin is 13 and acts like it. Mc makes the same mistake every mission and recognises that, but just 'smiles at the others' and does it anyway like a retard.
dont like the mc at all so annoying its almost unbearable the cringyness level is to high for me . he is lacking a backbone aswell, mc keeps acting like freaking saint its a bit boring
Não querendo desmerecer o autor mas achei essa fanfic no máximo mediana para mim. O que estragou essa história pra mim foi o MC continuar cometendo os mesmos erros é os problemas mentais que ele tinha é não eram resolvidos, isso estragou muito minha leitura, pra quem quiser ler recomendo paciência. (181-267)
This book is glorious! I'm not gonna lie but the fanfic started dying a bit. However, when you brought him to the marvel universe, the story hit its peak again. I truly hope you won't drop this amazing fanfic!
Всегда есть что улучшить 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊¡!!!!!!!!! ¡!!!!!!!! ¡!!!!!!!! ¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ¡
Horrible, they take the information that he is from another reality out of nowhere, without mentioning him saying that they were a comic series, this breaks the immersion without taking into account the psyche of the characters when they find out, this destroys the story in the first chapters, even though there were endless excuses plausible for not having a record, I just gave it one star because I couldn't do it any less