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This book has highly detailed lore, which makes it really interesting, but I got a little confused with the bombardment of information, but all in all, it's worth the read, and a change of pace.
This novel is very interesting. Got curious from the very first chapter. Everything about it just fascinates me like seriously, the novel is a good one
What a pleasant start!! The world background is implacably marvelous I got hooked up from the very first chapter.. The characters are different..the plot is different This book is a must-read
YEAH THIS BOOK HAS ANGELS AND SUCCUBUS… the author nails the character design and the world design. I could immerse myself in the book because of how things were described and shown rather than being said. I read all the chapters in one go and came to fall in love with the MC, Alric although I feel like I love Eros more. If you are reading this review, stop reading my review and start reading the book. I promise it will hook you up from the very first chapter.
This story is just amazing! The author did a beyond magnificent job on this! Writing Quality- 9/10 Updating Stability- 8/10 Story Development- 9/10 Chara Design- 10/10
Hello! First of all I want to praise the good and impeccable writing style. The flow of the story is very good, I can literally picture every scene in my head. The words are impactful as they are beautiful. There is only one little suggestion that I want to make, and that is to write a chapter at the very beginning to elaborate the story setting. How do angels stand to the succubi? Where do the succubi live? Are they the only demons? How do they live in packs? etc. It will help a novice like me to understand the world a little better 😉 Otherwise very good job! I like it very very much 🙂🙂🙂🙂 👍👍👍👍👍
As the title of the book suggests it is something about a specific incident that has taken place in the past and the story advances with a little detail from the past and then jumps on to the present situation. Luckily the author has already cleared such confusion, so all the odd numbered chapters are the past incidents while the even numbered are the present ones. I enjoy a novel with fantasy genre and the one that has angels and celestial creatures. I highly recommend this book if you also enjoy the same genre. There are apparently no grammatical or spell errors in the book, it is neat, descriptive and well written with perfect use of imageries. do give it a read once and you'll thank the author for ages for creating such a piece.
A story of heavens and all. The planning and plotting seems good. The scenes are written brilliantly. If you're interested in this genre definitely an easy pick. good work author. peace;
the novel is very good. Especially the first chapter it was very interesting. The author describes everything with precision and what I like the most is that its totally new to the system which shows that the author has a creative mind. Good work.
This novel is very good,different from your usual WN The setting and story development are all very good I got hooked from the first chapter Good Job to the author
To be honest, I am wondering how a person can ever be so creative to cook up such a story. It was mindblowingly interesting, without a doubt.
Unique plot and interesting setting, right now, I'm seeing Gabriel corporation, Archangel Gabriel's son, I must you have a really interesting imagination. Great work author, wishing you luck and expecting more.
This is VERY different to your average wn here from what I’ve read so far, and actually pretty interesting. Writing Quality- 8/10 Updating Stability- 7/10 Story Development- Too early, 8 Chara Design- 9 World BG- too early, 8 is default I give
Reviewed after 11 chapters: Very good novel :) One thing to note, there is a lot of jumping around in the early chapter. However, it doesn't matter, as the author has done a great job making it easy to follow along without getting confused. Also, from my untrained eye, I didn't notice any grammar problems. I hope to see more of Samael. I was glad to start getting some backstory on him and I'm very interested to know more about the executioner blades. Keep up the excellent work author, don't drop!
I would like to say that this novel is extra ordinary. The author seemed to have a very wide imagination, bringing the readers to it was a piece of cake. Just by reading the first chapter got me hooked quickly. Good job author!
It was amazing to read this novel. It was nicely written. I liked the opening and the prose which was deeply written. I hope you keep up the passion which i felt in the novel. Highly recommended
The universe is really huge and you can feel the author must have spent a lot of time developing the details. Sometimes I feel this can get distracting when they lore dump, but it's thankfully not too often. There are a lot of characters to choose from. For now, my favorite has got to be Lucifer! Wish there were more chapters with him annoying Gabriel 😄
This book has highly detailed lore, which makes it really interesting, but I got a little confused with the bombardment of information, but all in all, it's worth the read, and a change of pace.
This novel is very interesting. Got curious from the very first chapter. Everything about it just fascinates me like seriously, the novel is a good one
What a pleasant start!! The world background is implacably marvelous I got hooked up from the very first chapter.. The characters are different..the plot is different This book is a must-read
YEAH THIS BOOK HAS ANGELS AND SUCCUBUS… the author nails the character design and the world design. I could immerse myself in the book because of how things were described and shown rather than being said. I read all the chapters in one go and came to fall in love with the MC, Alric although I feel like I love Eros more. If you are reading this review, stop reading my review and start reading the book. I promise it will hook you up from the very first chapter.
This story is just amazing! The author did a beyond magnificent job on this! Writing Quality- 9/10 Updating Stability- 8/10 Story Development- 9/10 Chara Design- 10/10
Hello! First of all I want to praise the good and impeccable writing style. The flow of the story is very good, I can literally picture every scene in my head. The words are impactful as they are beautiful. There is only one little suggestion that I want to make, and that is to write a chapter at the very beginning to elaborate the story setting. How do angels stand to the succubi? Where do the succubi live? Are they the only demons? How do they live in packs? etc. It will help a novice like me to understand the world a little better 😉 Otherwise very good job! I like it very very much 🙂🙂🙂🙂 👍👍👍👍👍
As the title of the book suggests it is something about a specific incident that has taken place in the past and the story advances with a little detail from the past and then jumps on to the present situation. Luckily the author has already cleared such confusion, so all the odd numbered chapters are the past incidents while the even numbered are the present ones. I enjoy a novel with fantasy genre and the one that has angels and celestial creatures. I highly recommend this book if you also enjoy the same genre. There are apparently no grammatical or spell errors in the book, it is neat, descriptive and well written with perfect use of imageries. do give it a read once and you'll thank the author for ages for creating such a piece.
A story of heavens and all. The planning and plotting seems good. The scenes are written brilliantly. If you're interested in this genre definitely an easy pick. good work author. peace;
the novel is very good. Especially the first chapter it was very interesting. The author describes everything with precision and what I like the most is that its totally new to the system which shows that the author has a creative mind. Good work.
This novel is very good,different from your usual WN The setting and story development are all very good I got hooked from the first chapter Good Job to the author
To be honest, I am wondering how a person can ever be so creative to cook up such a story. It was mindblowingly interesting, without a doubt.
Unique plot and interesting setting, right now, I'm seeing Gabriel corporation, Archangel Gabriel's son, I must you have a really interesting imagination. Great work author, wishing you luck and expecting more.
This is VERY different to your average wn here from what I’ve read so far, and actually pretty interesting. Writing Quality- 8/10 Updating Stability- 7/10 Story Development- Too early, 8 Chara Design- 9 World BG- too early, 8 is default I give
Reviewed after 11 chapters: Very good novel :) One thing to note, there is a lot of jumping around in the early chapter. However, it doesn't matter, as the author has done a great job making it easy to follow along without getting confused. Also, from my untrained eye, I didn't notice any grammar problems. I hope to see more of Samael. I was glad to start getting some backstory on him and I'm very interested to know more about the executioner blades. Keep up the excellent work author, don't drop!
I would like to say that this novel is extra ordinary. The author seemed to have a very wide imagination, bringing the readers to it was a piece of cake. Just by reading the first chapter got me hooked quickly. Good job author!
It was amazing to read this novel. It was nicely written. I liked the opening and the prose which was deeply written. I hope you keep up the passion which i felt in the novel. Highly recommended
The universe is really huge and you can feel the author must have spent a lot of time developing the details. Sometimes I feel this can get distracting when they lore dump, but it's thankfully not too often. There are a lot of characters to choose from. For now, my favorite has got to be Lucifer! Wish there were more chapters with him annoying Gabriel 😄