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all i can say is that dear author you really did a good job at writting this story of yours, it was really amazing and i really love it so much i hope you can create more beautiful stories🥰🥰🥰🥰
Good story, a bit long though, but I still enjoyed it. :) A story of rebirth and transmigration with, as usual, a Mary-sue FL. The difference for me is the ML. Although the ML is still strong and domineering, he becomes a lamb when it come to the FL and there's no ego or insecurities whatsoever despite the FL being stronger than him. So there was no misunderstanding between them although there are jelousies. The ending feels a bit rush but everything was ended nicely with some hanging stories about the other sub leads. Overall, good read. 😊
The thing that bothers me the most is that the female lead is only 12 years old and the male lead is 24. The worst thing is that the author is even trying to build romance while she is still 12 years old. I don’t care if a 32 year old women is in her body. A 24 year old being attracted to a child is a pedophile plain simple even if it’s an ancient setting. If we saw a 24 yo now being close to a 12 yo we would call the cops. I really don’t understand what the author was thinking when she decided to make the fl so young.
I almost passed up this book because of a review I read that said it was trash. it's a good thing I found it again and decided to give it a chance because I like this story.I'm writing this review 300 chapters in to have a good enough grasp before telling my opinion. I should mention that I don't really like novels where the main character is below the age of 16 because I like romance (that will develop into more 😉) mixed into the excitement. but this book was an exception.the cons I saw in this book would be the stupidity of the villagers that could annoy anyone into dropping the story, I'm also a little blood thirsty so I think people should have died in the first 20 chapters to be honest.Lin Yuelan also does some things to question her intelligence but she's mostly very smart with her actions. Except when it comes to her feelings for the ML she's suddenly stupid to romance like she wasn't a 32 y/o who was engaged in her previous life 🙄I think the pacing of the book is pretty good, again I like romance development but she's only 12 😮💨 and even though this is ancient China where females would marry and have children young, the male lead being twice her age is a bit much. Although his romance mentality is probably at 10 years old, this man is too innocent and inexperienced. Even basic knowledge he lacks (they both do honestly). the Grammer isn't bad, I have seen any major issues or name swaps, thank god! I would want the story to jump some years but unless done probably it would most likely ruin the story. I'll have to settle for the author moving the pace faster. Overall I recommend reading the story as a good change or pace or filler if your waiting on another story to update. If I make it half way through I can write another review again if interested. if I end up dropping it then another review will be quicker lol
The writing quality might be all right but I can't say I don't speak Chinese or read it but the transcribing is horrible. Whoever's transcribing this is not checking their work. You know you can do better, please do better.
Brain dead plot brain dead characters. Jinx is used at least 100 times in first 5 chapters.
After 300 chapters, the MC is still in the same village. Nothing is happening, it’s boring. I guess it’s fine if you like novel about slow life and farming. The Mc is very strong but it’s a shame she doesn’t use her power often.
Dropped this multiple time alrd. Tried to read again but bored again. Hmm the characters and the storyline are stupid….. none of the characters are likeable. Wasting my time and I finally found another book so i can escape from this painful reading👏🏻
It started off good, I really enjoyed it and felt that the story was captivating, the fact that she did not hide that she died and has knowledge of the future was refreshing, she was open to show some of her abilities, but then she started to make money and here where I find it very difficult to understand. OK, she's from the future, but honestly, must she know all the trades??!! She knows fashion, cooking, medicine, architecture, machine making, wine making, fertilizar making... and the list goes on. I just can't really believe it anymore, and before I get told off, I know it's a fantasy story but come on, to be able to know everything and be excellent at everything is a bit far fetch for me.
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good book ,obviously set in China but on earth in the past or an alternative dimension ? she has all 9 elements but what are they ? is the planet laid out the same? what's her motivation other than a decent life it's a little vague? seems fairly certain it's a cultivation world but how do they cultivate here ? how does the milkvetch de age you ten years ? there's lots of questions that could do with an answer
"Pedophile alert!!! "When the MC and the male lead meet it really discouraged me to read because at that time the body constitution of the MC is still looks like 8 years old. The male lead is a pedophile
I think the author has gotten lost in the plot. it started out really good, but story continues to decline and losing the focus..
The ML is double the MC age. Had to drop. If ur cool with tht continue, but it’s a no for me
the book was so exciting at first but the syory development was getting boring as the story goes on.
TBH I liked the author's other book more. I didn't like how big the age gap was and I feel like the author could've picked a smaller age gap. The story is not bad per se it's just the age gap that bothered me. The FL is pretty strong too and the ML is good too but then you remember the age gap 😐
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Pretty meh overall. Doesn’t really add anything new to the genre of super powered OP transmigrates into a poor persons’ body and eventually rules the world trope.
Overall great book with some grammar errors here and there but nothing to serious but the things that bugs me is the author uses the same name for as many as 5+ chapters when if he wants to be lazy why not just use chapter 1 chapter 2
The storyline is too good tbh, but it is so slow and become bored . Like they can solve a matter in 2 chap but it takes 4 5 chapter but same drama. The female lead can leave the place but she thinks it's the better option Same goes for treatment the village chief son. She could fix him but she is thinking still. I feel like she is trying to acting tough but she is naive
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I am sorry to say but even if the writing ability is good and the female lead has a good character, the story drags on too much. A single incident goes on more than 10 episodes and above. The villagers are too Annoying on top of that.
I love this book ,hope they keep it going till the end❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
the author said "The pace of this book is faster", volume 1 of the book had about 650 horrible chapters where almost everything was nonsense, the story progresses 6 months in more than 600 chapters but the passage of time is all confusing and not It makes sense, it was the worst character design I've ever seen among the hundreds of books I've read. Volume 2 starts and I think maybe it will get better but a month passes in the book, winter isn't over yet hahahaha fl creates super soldiers in 1 month, fl says there are still 2 months left before winter ends, I say this should be the longest winter the human race has ever seen and that's because the author said "The pace of this book is faster" hahahaha I'm not even going to comment on how the carriages look like fast travel in some RPGs. To finish the fl and the ml... I'm just going to say this about the ml he feels romantic emotions for a girl who looks 8 years old and the author's implicit excuses for this are disgusting, the fl is confusing, she said I'm going to get revenge on everyone that hurt me but lets a lot of things pass and at other times destroys families for almost nothing in comparison, not to mention that she accepts some people as family after 2 or 3 dates hahahaha also many ideals of the century 21 are used to judge thoughts from 2000 thousand years ago, I think that fl had to have a good sense to reflect that the world she is currently in is 2000 thousand years in the past so she wants women to fight against men at that time when they had Brainwashing for decades that their men are gods to them is idiotic to say the least. I stopped at chapter 746 and I can't force myself to continue reading after seeing how ml's personality is in this chapter and seeing that a secondary recognizes ml's real face when only the people closest to ml have seen his face.
all i can say is that dear author you really did a good job at writting this story of yours, it was really amazing and i really love it so much i hope you can create more beautiful stories🥰🥰🥰🥰
Good story, a bit long though, but I still enjoyed it. :) A story of rebirth and transmigration with, as usual, a Mary-sue FL. The difference for me is the ML. Although the ML is still strong and domineering, he becomes a lamb when it come to the FL and there's no ego or insecurities whatsoever despite the FL being stronger than him. So there was no misunderstanding between them although there are jelousies. The ending feels a bit rush but everything was ended nicely with some hanging stories about the other sub leads. Overall, good read. 😊
The thing that bothers me the most is that the female lead is only 12 years old and the male lead is 24. The worst thing is that the author is even trying to build romance while she is still 12 years old. I don’t care if a 32 year old women is in her body. A 24 year old being attracted to a child is a pedophile plain simple even if it’s an ancient setting. If we saw a 24 yo now being close to a 12 yo we would call the cops. I really don’t understand what the author was thinking when she decided to make the fl so young.
I almost passed up this book because of a review I read that said it was trash. it's a good thing I found it again and decided to give it a chance because I like this story.I'm writing this review 300 chapters in to have a good enough grasp before telling my opinion. I should mention that I don't really like novels where the main character is below the age of 16 because I like romance (that will develop into more 😉) mixed into the excitement. but this book was an exception.the cons I saw in this book would be the stupidity of the villagers that could annoy anyone into dropping the story, I'm also a little blood thirsty so I think people should have died in the first 20 chapters to be honest.Lin Yuelan also does some things to question her intelligence but she's mostly very smart with her actions. Except when it comes to her feelings for the ML she's suddenly stupid to romance like she wasn't a 32 y/o who was engaged in her previous life 🙄I think the pacing of the book is pretty good, again I like romance development but she's only 12 😮💨 and even though this is ancient China where females would marry and have children young, the male lead being twice her age is a bit much. Although his romance mentality is probably at 10 years old, this man is too innocent and inexperienced. Even basic knowledge he lacks (they both do honestly). the Grammer isn't bad, I have seen any major issues or name swaps, thank god! I would want the story to jump some years but unless done probably it would most likely ruin the story. I'll have to settle for the author moving the pace faster. Overall I recommend reading the story as a good change or pace or filler if your waiting on another story to update. If I make it half way through I can write another review again if interested. if I end up dropping it then another review will be quicker lol
The writing quality might be all right but I can't say I don't speak Chinese or read it but the transcribing is horrible. Whoever's transcribing this is not checking their work. You know you can do better, please do better.
Brain dead plot brain dead characters. Jinx is used at least 100 times in first 5 chapters.
After 300 chapters, the MC is still in the same village. Nothing is happening, it’s boring. I guess it’s fine if you like novel about slow life and farming. The Mc is very strong but it’s a shame she doesn’t use her power often.
Dropped this multiple time alrd. Tried to read again but bored again. Hmm the characters and the storyline are stupid….. none of the characters are likeable. Wasting my time and I finally found another book so i can escape from this painful reading👏🏻
It started off good, I really enjoyed it and felt that the story was captivating, the fact that she did not hide that she died and has knowledge of the future was refreshing, she was open to show some of her abilities, but then she started to make money and here where I find it very difficult to understand. OK, she's from the future, but honestly, must she know all the trades??!! She knows fashion, cooking, medicine, architecture, machine making, wine making, fertilizar making... and the list goes on. I just can't really believe it anymore, and before I get told off, I know it's a fantasy story but come on, to be able to know everything and be excellent at everything is a bit far fetch for me.
Tiết lộ Spoiler good book ,obviously set in China but on earth in the past or an alternative dimension ? she has all 9 elements but what are they ? is the planet laid out the same? what's her motivation other than a decent life it's a little vague? seems fairly certain it's a cultivation world but how do they cultivate here ? how does the milkvetch de age you ten years ? there's lots of questions that could do with an answer
"Pedophile alert!!! "When the MC and the male lead meet it really discouraged me to read because at that time the body constitution of the MC is still looks like 8 years old. The male lead is a pedophile
I think the author has gotten lost in the plot. it started out really good, but story continues to decline and losing the focus..
The ML is double the MC age. Had to drop. If ur cool with tht continue, but it’s a no for me
the book was so exciting at first but the syory development was getting boring as the story goes on.
TBH I liked the author's other book more. I didn't like how big the age gap was and I feel like the author could've picked a smaller age gap. The story is not bad per se it's just the age gap that bothered me. The FL is pretty strong too and the ML is good too but then you remember the age gap 😐
Tiết lộ Spoiler Pretty meh overall. Doesn’t really add anything new to the genre of super powered OP transmigrates into a poor persons’ body and eventually rules the world trope.
Overall great book with some grammar errors here and there but nothing to serious but the things that bugs me is the author uses the same name for as many as 5+ chapters when if he wants to be lazy why not just use chapter 1 chapter 2
The storyline is too good tbh, but it is so slow and become bored . Like they can solve a matter in 2 chap but it takes 4 5 chapter but same drama. The female lead can leave the place but she thinks it's the better option Same goes for treatment the village chief son. She could fix him but she is thinking still. I feel like she is trying to acting tough but she is naive
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I am sorry to say but even if the writing ability is good and the female lead has a good character, the story drags on too much. A single incident goes on more than 10 episodes and above. The villagers are too Annoying on top of that.
I love this book ,hope they keep it going till the end❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
the author said "The pace of this book is faster", volume 1 of the book had about 650 horrible chapters where almost everything was nonsense, the story progresses 6 months in more than 600 chapters but the passage of time is all confusing and not It makes sense, it was the worst character design I've ever seen among the hundreds of books I've read. Volume 2 starts and I think maybe it will get better but a month passes in the book, winter isn't over yet hahahaha fl creates super soldiers in 1 month, fl says there are still 2 months left before winter ends, I say this should be the longest winter the human race has ever seen and that's because the author said "The pace of this book is faster" hahahaha I'm not even going to comment on how the carriages look like fast travel in some RPGs. To finish the fl and the ml... I'm just going to say this about the ml he feels romantic emotions for a girl who looks 8 years old and the author's implicit excuses for this are disgusting, the fl is confusing, she said I'm going to get revenge on everyone that hurt me but lets a lot of things pass and at other times destroys families for almost nothing in comparison, not to mention that she accepts some people as family after 2 or 3 dates hahahaha also many ideals of the century 21 are used to judge thoughts from 2000 thousand years ago, I think that fl had to have a good sense to reflect that the world she is currently in is 2000 thousand years in the past so she wants women to fight against men at that time when they had Brainwashing for decades that their men are gods to them is idiotic to say the least. I stopped at chapter 746 and I can't force myself to continue reading after seeing how ml's personality is in this chapter and seeing that a secondary recognizes ml's real face when only the people closest to ml have seen his face.